Competition: Poetry In Character

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Poetry In Character

Hello to you Arcona! I just transferred in and I don't know all that much about your characters. Let's remedy that with some good old fashioned poems!

Write a poem based around either your Main, Alt, or NPC characters. This can be anything you'd like, from a Haiku to a Sonnet (Make sure you list the style of poem you are submitting.) Grading will be based on Creativity, Originality, Adherence to the rules of your chosen type of poem, and Adherence to the prompt.

Competition Information
Organized by
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
Running time
2018-01-18 until 2018-02-01 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission

*Free form, Satsi:*

She is not a girl but
a storm with skin.
She is an
anthracite fire
and she burns and she burns
and she burns everything around her
silent
screaming
to make herself a world
of crumpled paper and ash
to make a world
where she can exist.
Because she does not know
how to live in a world
without war
and pain
and love -

that repeats.

repeats.

and tears.Them.apart.

-and then there is her again,
a girl not a girl,
and her boy
who defines her
her blood
and his bones.
He combs the glass out of
her hair
with his fingers
and they share silent, shaky half-smiles.
She is not a girl
but a hide of life war,
and in her soul is written
an endless night, of scars.and.stories.

but Their tiny, selfish dream still remains:
that they will endure to see another morning
if they just accept their sins
and the pain they bring.

This time

this time

She walks with him in the Stars
and They fight
all storm and
anthracite fire.

Placement
1st place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Submission
Qyreia Arronen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
2nd place
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Textual submission

(Poem style, uh freestyle? Rhyme pattern: A, B, B. Slang rhymes used.)

Thorny, vine-covered tooke
Leaps to war with fear,
For loss of life is high and near.

White tufted, blue spotted,
She dances upon the half lit fence
Of Forces light and dense.

Lost, wandering mind,
One day she just might
Take a rest from this stress and fight.

Placement
3rd place
4th place
Magik
Member
Magik
Submission
Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
4th place