Competition: May the 4th Be With You!: What if...?

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May the 4th Be With You!: What if...?

What if Obi-wan and Qui-Gon had never found Jar Jar? What if Han hadn’t shot first ( ;))? What if Luke had listened to Yoda and not gone to Cloud City?

Choose one ‘event’ from the Star Wars movies and pose the question “what if” it had been different. Then, write a descriptive ‘essay’ or encyclopedia-like entry (such as might appear on a Wiki), minimum length of 250 words, demonstrating some consequence of this ‘change’ for the canon Star Wars universe. Your entry should begin by briefly identifying the ‘what if’ event, and exactly how it was different from the movies. Then, your entry should detail some aspect of the consequences of this event, be it large or small, as if that is what had really occurred in canon. The focus should be on how Star Wars as we know it would change based on the question “what if”, and your entry need not include any Brotherhood characters or entities.

Entries will be graded based on creativity of the ‘what if’ (30%), the quality (and not necessarily the quantity) and entertainment value of the description of what changed (60%), and syntax/grammar (10%). Entries should be submitted in any usual text format; if you're curious about any given format, feel free to contact me.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Celebration: May the 4th Be With You!
Organized by
Telaris "Mav" Cantor
Running time
2018-05-03 until 2018-05-07 (5 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
27 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.
Results
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
What_if..._.pdf
Textual submission

What if the Empire and First Order deployed TIE-fighters either in advance or at the first sight of Rebel/Resistance starfighters? We'd all be praising Palpatine... :P

(Proper submission in pdf)

Placement
1st place
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
WhatIf.docx
Placement
2nd place
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
Tantive_IV.pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
File submission
The_Chimeran_Accords.pdf
Placement
4th place
5th place
Kaz Raith
Member
Kaz Raith
Submission
Kaz Raith opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
Member
Krath Adherent Edema R'uh-Kalinor
File submission
What_if__.pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
TuQ'uan_What_If....pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj
File submission
What_if.docx
Placement
8th place
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
Textual submission

Here's my what if???

What if during the time on Mustafar, Padme had alternative motives. When she shows up and confronted Anakin about killing the children. He then chokes her, but it doesn't kill her. As he and Obi-wan fought, she awakens and overheard Anakin professing why he did it, to save and protect the woman he loves. She then remembers that Anakin lost his mother because he couldn't save her and it tears her apart at his anguish.

So she then gets up, goes into the control room, and sees that Obi-wan is beating his former padewan, and unbeknownst to them, she pulls out her blaster and shoots Obi-wan in the skull, killing him. She then runs over to Anakin and professes her love for him. They then agree to putting her in hiding, faking her death.

As Anakin makes his way back to the capital, he rushes in to see Palpatine and Yoda in a fierce battle in the Senate rotunda. Anakin helps Palpatine to defeat Yoda. As the Emperor gloats in his victory of the ultimate defeat of the Jedi, Anakin slices off Palpatine's head. As he looks down over him, Anakin announces that the siege between the Sith and Jedi are over and he is the new Emperor. He and Padme then later reunite as they bring the Republic to order, removing those that are corrupt. Padme then gives birth to the twins who are both raised as Grey Jedi with training in both sides of the Force. They rule the galaxy for 50 years till Luke and Leia take over.

Placement
10th place