Competition: Pathological Paranoia

Finished
Pathological Paranoia

Prompt

The Leadership Of Clan Naga Sadow have been acting strangely as of late. They seem to be extremely paranoid and isolate themselves from other members. They also have begun to confine themselves in private meetings that stretch well into the night.

In at least 500 words, write a fiction in which your character searches for the meaning behind this change in behavior. The origin for the change in behavior can be player created. If not, the origin for the change can be Force Psychosis, a disease from Star Wars legends that convinces the infected to believe that people without the disease are imposters.

Rules

  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words with no maximum using the prompt above (x1 CoI will be awarded for every 500 words written - minus the title, ID line, repeated prompts, etc.)
  • Adult content is allowed and will not be penalized if included, but any entries containing content above a "PG-13" level should not publish their entries. Uncheck "Publish Entry" in the submission page.
  • Entries must be submitted in .pdf, .doc, or .txt format using the submission box on the Brotherhood website.
    • No GoogleDoc links, please download as a .pdf using "File" -> "Download as" "PDF Document (.pdf)" and submit through the website.

Grading

  • All entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric, with the score averaged between the two graders
Competition Information
Organized by
Adept Bentre Stahoes, Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Running time
2018-05-14 until 2018-06-18 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Clan Naga Sadow
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
8 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Jinius Griffin
File submission
DJB_CNS_JG10545_Pathological_Paranoia_CryptoSarix.pdf
Textual submission

I hope you enjoy. This is not 'Canon' character fiction, obviously. I was told that it could be just original non-directed fiction. Let me know if there are issues or questions.

Placement
1st place
Member
Vosiri Lightscrest
Submission
Vosiri Lightscrest opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place