Competition: [Caelus Chronicles] Chapter 4 - Broken Chains: Vishes final gift (Multi-Objective-Prompt Fiction)

[Caelus Chronicles] Chapter 4 - Broken Chains: Vishes final gift (Multi-Objective-Prompt Fiction)

Following the clues from Hidden in the clouds and A hidden message you have uncovered the supposed whereabouts of the person(s) behind the attack on the capitol of the Caelus-system on Chyron. Upon arriving at the uncovered position you (and your team) find no difficulties blending in with the gathering crowd looking for their leader but instead it seems the meeting is led by a person well known to you vaguely remember to be a member of the Caelus-Security Special Forces Division. Now it is up to you to deal with the culprits of the attack in a way you deem appropriate.

This is a semi-multi objective prompt fiction, giving either Light or Dark Side points for the Top 3 placements:

  • Light Side Decision: You and your team are going to capture Vishes Lieutenant and bring him aboard the Paragon for interrogations.

  • Dark Side Decision: You and your team are going to bring justice to the culprits by your own, killing Vishes Lieutenant.

To fulfill the above prompt you are to choose from one of the following Lieutenants serving Vishes:

To set up your team, slotted NPCs, Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are not only allowed, but encouraged.

Grading and Requirements

Grading will be done using the Voice Fiction Rubric. Submissions will be accepted in Text Box, Word, or PDF format. No links to external documents, please. Either type on the site or upload to the website. The winner will be chosen based on factors listed in the above rubric.

In order to qualify for placing your fiction should at least be of five-hundred (500) words in length, no maximum.

Also make sure to declare at the beginning of your submission which prompt you will be using


As this is a Clan-wide competition, Third Level Crescents will be awarded to the Top Three Placements as will Clusters of Ice be awarded under the current policy.

Additionally this competition will award Alignment Points to the Top Three Placements as well as Influence (Participation) Points to all participants and the member grading the competition.

Clan Fiction

A link to the Clan Fiction leading up to the events of this competition can be found here: Broken Chains

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[Taldryan] Caelus Chronicles - A Taldryan Story
Organized by
Augur Rian Taldrya
Running time
2018-06-30 until 2018-07-25 (26 days)
Target Unit
Clan Taldryan
Competition Type
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
4 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
1st place
Warlord Andrelious J. Mimosa-Inahj
Warlord Andrelious J. Mimosa-Inahj
File submission
1st place
2nd place
Lieutenant Colonel Soren Leonis
Lieutenant Colonel Soren Leonis
Lieutenant Colonel Soren Leonis opted out of publishing his submission.
2nd place