Competition: [GJW XIII Event Long] Team-Based Fiction - Small Team Co-op Fiction

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[GJW XIII Event Long] Team-Based Fiction - Small Team Co-op Fiction
This competition is in the [GJW XIII Event Long] Team-Based Fiction Bin.

This competition is in the Team-Based Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 6 points from participation to your unit. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 19% of placement points in the Event Long phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

A secret Collective communique has been intercepted by an Inquisitorius listening post - and also by your Clan. The Severian Principate operates a secret military research installation on the dark side of the Moon of Thillon. It contains a fragment of a precious artifact, purportedly similar to the crystal found on Meridian Station. The crystal was originally located in temple ruins under Lyra Colony, and moved to Thillon Research Facility for further study by the Severian Principate.

Intelligence reports indicate the Collective have destroyed comm relays in the immediate area of the research facility. They have dispatched a small team - hoping to avoid notice that might spark war with the Principate - that includes several Shikari Huntresses and currently unidentified combat personnel to retrieve the crystal. They are likely to use any methods at their disposal, from deception to brutal slaughter, to acquire it. Likewise, you and your team of 1-2 clan mates has been dispatched to the Thillon Research Facility to retrieve the crystal - for yourselves, your clan, or your Brotherhood - before the Collective can. But this Principate installation is unlikely to be friendly to your arrival, and the combined Collective and Severian forces arrayed against you might be difficult for a head-on fight.

Your team will arrive at the station just ahead of the Collective forces, leaving you a brief window to attempt negotiations with the Principate forces if you so choose. But even if you can talk your way in, the Collective is not likely to let you walk out with the artifact. However you achieve it, you must seize the artifact.

Rules & Grading

This is a co-op fiction, meaning two to three members will participate in writing a single, cohesive fiction.

Grading will be based on the fiction rubric with a few additional requirements:

  • Submissions: Teams must submit two copies, one "clean" document (without comments or track changes) for reading in PDF, .doc, or .docx format as well as a second "annotated" version where all writers' contributions are clearly marked using comments and Track Changes (in Microsoft Word) or by "Version History" in Google documents. Edits and comments in the "annotated" document must be clearly attributable to a team member.

    If using Word: for the "annotated" version, submissions must be made in .doc or .docx format with all tracked changes and comments visible.

    If using Google docs: you must share the document with the event organizers by clicking the blue "Share" button in the top-right corner of the screen and entering their email addresses. Be sure to give full "editing" access when sharing the document (you will see a dark grey pencil icon to the right of the email address entry box). Include a link to your Google doc at the beginning of your "clean" copy.

  • Teams: Teams must be made up of two or three people. You must identify your team members by name and dossier number at the top of your document along with links to character sheet snapshots for each team member. You can create and find manual snapshots by going to the "Possessions and Loadouts" link in your admin menu and selecting the "snapshots" tab.

  • Word count: Each writer must contribute at least 500 words total and a roughly equal proportion of the total word count. For example, each member of a two-person team must contribute approximately 50% of the total word count, whereas each member of a three-person team must contribute approximately one-third of the total. A writer's substantive edits and comments will be considered when evaluating whether they contributed a sufficient proportion of the document.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XIII: Discord
Organized by
Master Dacien Victae, Master Evant Taelyan, Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor
Running time
2019-07-20 until 2019-08-26 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
75 subscribers, of which 44 have participated.
Results
Member
Battlelord Hades
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
1st place
Member
Warlord Etah Obsidyn
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
1st place
Member
Warlord Ciara Tearnan Rothwell Tarentae
File submission
GJW_Small_Team_Co-Op_Fiction_(1).pdf
Textual submission

Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11i0sukaDwG-W3G2Ym8EHyIGgyFEkQKlA3DAKOa8yV-M/edit?usp=sharing

Link also in PDF, also sending edit permissions.

Placement
1st place
Member
Corsair Aylin Sajark
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
2nd place
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
Aylincia_XIII.pdf
Textual submission

The editing document is accessible at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f_Ie4eX_ncPb4zwNxV6F4U2aCx1ukO4rngr0hO4QLmA/edit where Aylin's edits are marked under the name Zehsaa Hysh and mine are made under Harry David Green. This link has been shared with the organisers

Placement
2nd place
Member
Eminent Kalan Amak
Textual submission

Declan Roark (Pravus/Sarin/Matt) submitted for our team

Placement
3rd place
Member
Grand Master Declan Roark
File submission
Honest_Men.pdf
Textual submission

Grand Master Declan Roark(1120) and Reaver Kalan Amak (13802). Roark: CS Link: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/character_sheets/8732
Snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/1120/snapshots/1834/3442. Amak CS: CS Link: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/character_sheets/10003 and Snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/13802/snapshots/1857/3490. Dirty document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-0tZuSfTasonSBfC6NKMWklOuu03pkmiBCiEZFLw_DE/edit?usp=sharing. Document shared with directly with Graders.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Warlord Arden Karn di Plagia
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
4th place
Member
Warlord Ronovi Tavisaen
File submission
Arden_Ronnie_GJW_13_Co-op_.pdf
Textual submission

Co-op with Arden Karn di Plagia.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZQiYKp_tgH9UXS-Z0aO5kw-dpjIdN-KRvAOg2g-0uQ/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
4th place
Member
Eminent Idris Adenn
File submission
GJW_XIII_Co-op_Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

Co-op fiction by Idris Adenn and Raiju Kang

Placement
5th place
Member
Savant Ethan Martes
File submission
DJB_GJW_XIII_Co-Op_Fiction.zip
Placement
5th place
Member
Lieutenant Colonel Essik Lyccane
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
5th place
Member
Warlord Rhys Pwyll
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
5th place
Member
Adept Macron Goura Sadow
File submission
Manji_and_Macron_GJW_13_co_op_fiction.pdf
Textual submission

Share link to the GDOC has been sent to the organizers per the instructions.

Placement
7th place
Member
Augur Manji Keibatsu Sadow
Submission
Augur Manji Keibatsu Sadow opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
7th place
Member
Battlelord Malisane Sadow
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
8th place
Member
Knight Zanothi Nightblade
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
8th place
Member
Vanguard Jafits Skrumm
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
8th place
Member
Savant Xolarin
File submission
GJWXIII_Small_Team_Fiction_15049_CNS_Team_Falcon.pdf
Textual submission

Edit link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N3d0HX2bM5jpzB05zPH_gUSKAfOB75qlhPjlJLa20Iw/edit?usp=sharing

Battlelord Malisane Sadow 6169, The Muscle [Malisane]
Mystic Xolarin 14717, The Navigator [Chris England]
Knight Hilgrif 15510, The Slicer [Wes Ballard]
(character snapshots linked in the document)

Placement
8th place
Member
Mystic Hilgrif
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
8th place
Member
Warden Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
FlyByOnLyra_COOP_Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

See submitted pdf with link to gdoc and everything else asked for. For a short list, our team consisted of:
Aura Ta’var, 10388:
Zanothi NightBlade, 6386:
Jafits Skrumm, 7764:

Placement
8th place
Member
Augur Ashia Kagan Keibatsu
Textual submission

See Muz's entry.

Placement
10th place
Member
Grand Master Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Coop_Clean.pdf
Textual submission

Muz Ashen Keibatsu (3714) https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/3714/snapshots/348/691
Ashia Kagan Keibatsu (6353) https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/6353/snapshots/1722/3549
Google doc link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e8iwRUslQJdxbKDsDl_-Z-Jmu4VDq3pP0XL6jmteDR8/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
10th place
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
War_Co-Op_(2).pdf
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x-aTf_wtGXRC2-oFzYizgSyWdjErV0lVZKrKrX762Ao/edit
Kordath and Uji make mistakes

Placement
No placement
Member
Augur Kashiro
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
File submission
GJW_XIII_-_Small_Team_Co-op_Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

Annotated version gdoc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R2h0_uEarkgwCynzQhCZa1BcvLhTUwUqV9-so0zGqoE/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement
Member
Warrior Jashashi "Vesh" Zaes
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Knight Rivio Rosan
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Bentre Sadow
File submission
clean_Copy_of_14185-14192_coop_fiction_gjw_xiii.pdf
Textual submission

clean copy of fiction attached, and the annotated copy has been shared to the judges as instructed. If you experience any technical difficulties I will be glad to provide links or access again.

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission

Coop completed and submitted.

Placement
No placement
Member
Commander Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Reaver Elequin
Textual submission

Rulvak, 14025, submitted document.

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Azmodius Equesinfernum
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Rulvak Qurroc
File submission
Co-Op_Fiction_GJW_w_edits.pdf
Textual submission

Submitted for myself and Arcia PIN:3463

Placement
No placement
Member
Mystic Appius "Zappius" Wight
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Taranae Rhode
Textual submission

Participated

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlemaster Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
File submission
GJW13_Brimstone-Muse_Co-op_clean.pdf
Textual submission

This is the co-op between Muse and Brimstone

Brimstone/Brinestone #8649
Muse/Taranae #13721

This is the clean version, the rough draft version is linked in the pdf as well as the event organizers have already been sent access to it

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlemaster Alaisy Tir’eivra
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Takagari "DarkHawk" KogaRyu
File submission
Co-op_War.pdf
Textual submission

Honor & Duty
Competition: [GJW XIII Event Long] Team-Based Fiction - Small Team Co-op Fiction
Team Members
Xuner Holst # 15036– Red: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/15036/snapshots/1770/3319
Rivio Rosan # 15695 – Purple: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/15695/snapshots/1771/3321
Takagari “DarkHawk” KogaRyu #264- Blue: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/264/snapshots/1615/3256
Gdocs Draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JFh3RH8tjwPYiek_IU0xpJNwQDlWC0oIWYgPueAIs-A/edit

Placement
No placement
Member
Major Emere Galo
File submission
Co-Op_Fiction_Final_Copy_(1).pdf
Textual submission

Rough Copy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V4BuL8GoBxbWRxTB7FO__53M4S_TbLKttXXSeYQ8pJA/edit?usp=sharing

Final Copy
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GqAXKZqoQio3Ok0txBVOn7Uq1pLwxPFf/view?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement
Member
Corsair Kanal O'neill
File submission
Team_Fiction_Event.docx
Textual submission

Our original Gdoc file.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DsxcKkdEQ4O1UxWpPyeCXNoZiaR-RlmoMSL9ERq7Sr8/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement
Member
Augur Alara Deathbane
Textual submission

Manually added by Grand Master Telaris "Mav" Cantor

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
File submission
furios_azmodius_fiction.pdf
Placement
No placement