Competition: A New Haiku

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A New Haiku

A Haiku is "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Haiku that Kylo would have written Rey after the events of the Rise of Skywalker.

Text box submissions only.
Entries that don't follow the 5-7-5 format will be DQ'ed
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Organized by: Edgar Drachen, Shayna Phantom
Running time: 2020-03-29 until 2020-04-12 (15 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 22 subscribers, of which 20 have participated.

Results

1st place

Cymbre Kall

Member: Cymbre Kall
Submission: Cymbre Kall opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Major Jon Silvon

Member: Major Jon Silvon
Textual submission: You're something to me.
You brought me back to the Light.
You're half of my soul.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Gui Sol

Member

Gui Sol

Textual submission

Hope has been restored
The Galaxy will find peace
The Force will guide you

Gui Sol
PIN: 4224

Placement

3rd place

Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra

Member: Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
Textual submission: Dyad, take my hand
The past is gone, we remain
My life is your life
Placement: No placement

Archpriestess Aay'han Agrona Beviin

Member: Archpriestess Aay'han Agrona Beviin
Textual submission: This body I gave
Feel the pulse of energy
You are medicine
Placement: No placement

Sera Kaern

Member: Sera Kaern
File submission: A thing.pdf
Placement: No placement

Warden Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow

Member: Warden Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
Textual submission: Oh Rey I am Glad,
That I am no longer bad,
But I am now dead.
Placement: No placement

Aurora "Aura" Ta'var

Member: Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Textual submission: Oh Rey I love you.
Jedi soulmates forever.
The Force be with you.
Placement: No placement

Tomora Nay'ek

Member: Tomora Nay'ek
Submission: Tomora Nay'ek opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

Vorran Shadowfeather

Member: Vorran Shadowfeather
Submission: Vorran Shadowfeather opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla

Member: General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
Textual submission: I'm the dumbest here,
You never loved me at all,
Finn's the one for you.
Placement: No placement

Elyon de Neverse

Member: Elyon de Neverse
File submission: EdN - Haiku.txt
Textual submission: I love you Rey
you are light of my life
forever and ever.
Placement: No placement

Headmistress Alethia Archenksova

Member: Headmistress Alethia Archenksova
Textual submission: Hey, Rey. It's Ghost Ben.
I'm with the Light Side now, girl.
So please let me smash.
Placement: No placement

Essik Lyccane

Member: Essik Lyccane
Submission: Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

General Ronovi Tavisaen

Member: General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission: I know that I'm dead,
but now that you're Skywalker,
this feels like incest.
Placement: No placement

A deleted dossier

Member: A deleted dossier
Textual submission: In darkness I failed
But I found my inner light
That light was you Rey
Placement: No placement

High Inquisitor Anderson

Member: High Inquisitor Anderson
Textual submission: Kylo chooses Rey.
Welcome to the family.
Skywalker forever.
Placement: No placement

Blade Mistress Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra

Member: Blade Mistress Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra
Textual submission: A Dyad in the Force
Fought back the old Emperor
Left to die alone
Placement: No placement

Aedile Tali Sroka

Member: Aedile Tali Sroka
Submission: Aedile Tali Sroka opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Archian

Member: Archian
Textual submission: Like fire and water,
Judging completely wrong way,
We will find right path.
Placement: No placement

Agate Gua'lara

Member: Agate Gua'lara
Submission: Agate Gua'lara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement