Competition: A New Haiku

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A New Haiku

A Haiku is "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Haiku that Kylo would have written Rey after the events of the Rise of Skywalker.

  • Text box submissions only.
  • Entries that don't follow the 5-7-5 format will be DQ'ed
  • Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.
Competition Information
Organized by
Augur Edgar Drachen, Professional Shayna Phantom
Running time
2020-03-29 until 2020-04-12 (15 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
23 subscribers, of which 21 have participated.
Results
Member
Battlelord Cymbre Kall
Submission
Battlelord Cymbre Kall opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
Raider Jon Silvon
Textual submission

You're something to me.
You brought me back to the Light.
You're half of my soul.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Ranger Gui Sol
Textual submission

Hope has been restored
The Galaxy will find peace
The Force will guide you

Gui Sol
PIN: 4224

Placement
3rd place
Member
Seer Tali Sroka
Submission
Seer Tali Sroka opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Savant Appius "Zappius" Wight
Textual submission

Kylo chooses Rey.
Welcome to the family.
Skywalker forever.

Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Gorrum Grimm
Textual submission

In darkness I failed
But I found my inner light
That light was you Rey

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission

I know that I'm dead,
but now that you're Skywalker,
this feels like incest.

Placement
No placement
Member
Lieutenant Colonel Essik Lyccane
Submission
Lieutenant Colonel Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Alethia Archenksova
Textual submission

Hey, Rey. It's Ghost Ben.
I'm with the Light Side now, girl.
So please let me smash.

Placement
No placement
Member
Professional Archian
Textual submission

Like fire and water,
Judging completely wrong way,
We will find right path.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
Textual submission

Oh Rey I am Glad,
That I am no longer bad,
But I am now dead.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warrior Aay'han Agrona Beviin
Textual submission

This body I gave
Feel the pulse of energy
You are medicine

Placement
No placement
Member
Peacekeeper Elyon de Neverse
File submission
EdN - Haiku.txt
Textual submission

I love you Rey
you are light of my life
forever and ever.

Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Kenath Zoron
Textual submission

I'm the dumbest here,
You never loved me at all,
Finn's the one for you.

Placement
No placement
Member
Seer Zevon Morgai
Submission
Seer Zevon Morgai opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Commander Sulith Bekett
Submission
Commander Sulith Bekett opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Warden Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Textual submission

Oh Rey I love you.
Jedi soulmates forever.
The Force be with you.

Placement
No placement
Member
Savant Sera Kaern
File submission
A thing.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Augur Aiden Lee Deshra
Textual submission

Dyad, take my hand
The past is gone, we remain
My life is your life

Placement
No placement
Member
Battlemaster Alaisy Tir’eivra
Textual submission

A Dyad in the Force
Fought back the old Emperor
Left to die alone

Placement
No placement
Member
Savant Agate Gua’lara
Submission
Savant Agate Gua’lara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement