Competition: [RoS: Escalation Phase II] Fiction - A Chaotic Opening

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[RoS: Escalation Phase II] Fiction - A Chaotic Opening
This competition is in the [RoS: Escalation Phase II] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 5 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 18.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

You should feel honored to witness the first birth of an ascendant in generations.
- The Seer

The fallout of the Tenixir Incident and the Collective’s false-flag assault on the Lyra system have plunged the Severian Principate into crisis. Thirsty for revenge and plunder, Tenixir Revenant cells have stepped up piracy throughout Principate space. Beset by these marauders and still hunting the remnants of its own mutineers, the Principate’s once-feared navy seems powerless to reassert order.

The simmering conflict between the Revenant pirates and Principate forces has erupted on the planet Dandoran, as representatives of both groups arrived for a secretive Hutt auction. Clashes between the opposing sides are rapidly escalating in orbit and on the surface.

As the battle continues, the arrival of the mysterious Seer comes with knowledge of potential usage of the sought after crystals. Her Crystal Ascendant, a mutated monster of astonishing speed and incredible force power, is met by the Principate’s Restoration Troopers, their own mutated soldiers that are lumbering, slow, and near impossible to wound.

Fight, Flee, or Fall

Your task is to choose 1 of the options below to write about for your entry.

Options

Participants must use one of the following prompts to craft their entry. Whichever option you choose, you must write one of your characters (main, alternative, or NPC) and the prompt from the perspective of your pledged sub-faction.


Option 1: Chaos can be ignored. The Seer has set loose her terrible abomination on the City of Tipool. With all the factions and Hutt security forces focused on her monster and the Principate's Restoration Troopers, you take it upon yourself to get info on who this Seer really is, who she represents, and what she wants. Make your way through the war torn streets of Tipool and attempt to gather intel from her ship to report back to the Brotherhood.


Option 2: Chaos is an opportunity. With mutant horrors occupying the factions and the Hutts, now is as good a time as any to grab what you can carry and run. Gather your winnings from around the Garganta Galleria Casino Hotel event hall and attempt to get off planet with the loot (and your own hide) in one piece. The Principate's 1st Fleet has arrived in force around the planet and is engaging elements of the Revenant's Roughriders and Ravagers, so getting off the surface is just the first step.


Option 3: Chaos is a good distraction. All the factions are focused on the new nightmares in the city. Now is your chance to try and bring the war between the Revenants and the Principate to an end. Make your way through Tipool and confront a leader of any of the other three sub-factions. Negotiate, capture, or kill -- whatever you need to do to secure a ceasefire.


Rules

  • Participants must submit entries in .pdf, .doc, or .docx format, or use the submission text field (markdown capable).
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be disqualified and ineligible for participation or placement.
  • There is no maximum word cap.
  • Your story should be centered on your Main or alternative characters. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are not only allowed but encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around a character you can attach a valid snapshot for.
  • Your character must be working with your pledged sub-faction, but members and NPCs of other sub-factions can be major players in your story.
  • A snapshot of your character loadout must be selected and submitted with your entry through the checkbox submission field.
  • This competition will award up to 4 bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions.

Grading

Grading will be done utilizing the Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Rite of Supremacy: Escalation
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, Lord Dacien Victae
Running time
2021-06-20 until 2021-07-06 (17 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
41 subscribers, of which 22 have participated.
Results
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
RoS Phase 2 Fiction How's the Heart (2).pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
ROS_2021_part2 (2).pdf
Textual submission

Option 1 selected. Lilina is the main character

Placement
2nd place
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Ria'd Stesca (Option 3).pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
RoS Escal, Ph2, A Chaotic Opening (Option 1).pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Malisane Sadow
Textual submission

Star Wars - The Voyage Home

The Wilds
Dandoran
Doran System

He was lost, and fed up. He looked around that the blank surrounding area. This entire thing had gone to hell over the last few days since he had left the chaos at Tipool. At the time joining the Tenixir had seemed like a good idea, partly because he believed in the balance between them and the Severians, and partly because after a long year back in his House Summit he had needed a break and most of his Clan had joined the other side. Now the matter had been complicated by the appearance of this third faction, and it seemed like a good idea to get back to Orian and ensure everything back home was stable. He still had memories of the time they had returned with the remnants of the Sadow fleet after that debacle at Antei to discover the system had been lost.

The problem is he had no idea where he was. He had not seen a single person for hours. His own ship was docked around one of the Tenixir dreadnaughts and the shuttle he had hitched a lift on was long gone. He continued to walk in his heavy armour with the mid day sun beating down on him, wishing he had worn his lighter robes or at least opted for the comfort body glove upgrade.

After a while he stopped. Ahead he could see smoke and some buildings. He sped up his pace and set off towards them, pulling his saber hilt from his belt but not igniting it. As he drew closer he could see bodies and figures in armour walking amongst them while the buildings continued to burn. It appeared to be some sort of farmstead. With no cover he decided to approach openly and see what he found. The troopers were wearing Severian armour and appeared to be searching for loot. He felt a brief surge of annoyance.

Two of them reacted when he came into view, walking confidently towards them, and approached him warily, rifles held ready. Malisane sensed there were three more of them against the buildings.
“Who the hell are you?” one of them asked.
“I could ask you the same question,” the Sith replied, “only I know looters when I see them. And deserters.”
“Yeah?” one of them asked, “so what? This has all gone to hell, pirates and mutants now, so we don't care.”
“Obviously.”
Another trooper approached, this one wearing a corporals insignia. “He asked you who you were?” he said menacingly, “you look like a mercenary to me. What do you want?”
“I came here from the Brotherhood,” Malisane replied, “and I am going back there. I just came to see what you brave boys were up to. I have a particular dislike of looting, deserter scum. I have caught many on my own world. They died slowly and unpleasantly. This is not my world however. So I will leave you to your amusements.”
“Oh you will, will you?” the corporal asked looking the Sith up and down, “well as you say this is not your world and you are alone. That is some expensive armour and gear you have there. Worth more if we don't have to peel your body out of it. So how about you leave it for us and walk away?”
The other troopers raised their weapons, and waited.

“I would rather not,” Malisane replied, “and I would advise you to return to your business.”
The corporal shrugged. “The hard way then,” and he fired.
Malisane moved quickly, igniting his saber and deflecting the shot, and then as the bolt hit a trooper he continued the movement hacking his saber through the body of a second enemy, slicing through flesh and bone. He felt a blaster bold ping harmlessly off his chest plate and made a gesture, hitting the ground with the force causing an eruption and the three remaining enemies to stagger back. The Warlord took advantage of the distraction and surged forward, effortlessly hacking down two other enemies as they tried to react. Finally he faced the corporal he held his rifle nervously.
“Please,” the man said, “we did not know what you were.”
Malisane made a gesture and the corporals weapon was dragged from his grip to land in the warlord's free hand, and was casually tossed away. “I gave you a chance,” he replied, “it was an extremely generous one considering what you are.” He lowered his saber and stretched out his free hand. The corporal gasped as his feet left the ground, as an invisible hand gripped him. Malisane stepped forward as the struggling man was lifted higher into the air, and then backwards towards the flames behind him.
“No!” the man gasped, as he flailed his arms and legs, feeling the heat.
“Die,” Malisane replied and hurled the man into the centre of the fire, hearing the screams of pain a second later as the corporal was engulfed and cooked in his armour. Finally as only the sound of burning remained, Malisane turned and began to explore. He was not interested in the surroundings, he had enough supplies with him, but was satisfied a few minutes later when he found some barc speeders, presumably belonging to the Severian deserters. Checking they were still in good working order, he picked one and set off across the empty terrain.

He studied the display on the panel in front of him. If the data was right he was a hundred miles from a small supply depot, which hopefully ought to contain at least one space worthy ship. He bend down over the bike and accelerated. With luck he would be off Dandoran and back on his own ship within a couple of hours. Then he could be free of this unravelling, three way insanity and be back on Aeotheran a few days later. Presumably the rest of his House and Clan would drift in a few days later if they had any common sense.
He let the miles pass calmly, occasionally glancing at the display to ensure he was on the correct route. He was. Eventually more buildings came in sight and he slowed the bike down, surveying the target destination. There were no signs of life but he was feeling cautious. The depot was a large squat building, surrounded by a chain link fence. A big loading door was open at one side of the building, and hopefully there was a ship inside he could take. He passed through the open gate and stopped the speeder.

He walked towards the building, feeling a sense of deja vu, and pulled his scattergun from where it was clipped to the back of his armour. He continued towards the open door. Inside he could see a beaten up looking Ghtroc freighter, a garbage scow compared with his own upgraded Lancer but it was space and hyperspace capable. It would do if it functioned. Feeling more confident he walked forward towards it. In a matter of minutes he would be airborne. He passed through the doors, and then stopped, sensing something strange around him. He gripped the scattergun and looked around, and then stepped back as several figures appeared from behind crates. His eyes narrowed. They were strange robed figures, with hooded cloaks, and like the mutilated Severian troopers he had seen several days earlier, they had the same crystals emerging from beneath their skin, though less dense. They carried saber hilts though and they were watching him with the same intensity. He felt a pressure on his mind and shook it away. One of them suddenly moved and he pulled the trigger of his scattergun, the expanding pellets striking one of the creatures in the chest and sending it staggering back. Dropping the scattergun he drew his saber igniting it.

As their companion fell, another of the abominations raised a hand and force lightning surged towards him. He caught it with his saber, sending it arching up and down the blade, and he struggled against it, and then pushed it back as he leapt forward. The abomination met his saber with it's own, the blue hilt meeting the Sith's white one, and as Malisane felt another moving towards him for a strike he used all his strength to batter against his opponent. The creature was talented and quick but Malisane was bigger and stronger and a few seconds later he saw a gap in the defence and thrust forward, slicing deep into a clear patch of skin in the things chest, then slicing his blade up and out of its body.

As it felt a second blast of lightning hit him, this time too quick to block and he felt a surge of pain as it arched over his armour, the energy penetrating his defences and he grit his teeth. He forced himself to turn towards it, and advance and then through his pain he focused on the enemy and its connection to the force, nullifying it. As the lightning faded he struck out himself, smashing the creature from its feet with a solid invisible blow. He turned in time to meet a saber aimed at his body, blocking it. The first enemy he had shot was attacking him now, its chest ripped open and bleeding from the pellets that had hit it but it seemed to ignore the damage. Perhaps it lacked the intelligence to realise it was dead. Their sabers met and Malisane focused on trying to batter its weapon aside, as behind him he heard movement as the opponent he had knocked down was beginning to rise.

The Sith backed off slightly, as he heard move movement. The creature he was fighting sensed his change in stance and pressed him as another bolt of lightning hit him jarring his body, and the enemy in front thrust at his body, its blue saber slicing along his beskar armour with a burst of sparks, cutting into it but not penetrating. Malisane, sensing that he was in trouble, hit the button on his wrist and he felt a surge as his jetpack burst into life, sending him high amongst the crates and narrowly missing another bolt of lightning. As he landed on the top of a stack of crates he deactivated his saber and tensed himself, raising his weapon. From below the two creatures were joined by another pair from the doorway, and the four looked up at him coldly. Then he sighed as he heard the whine of speeder engines outside. Two he could probably handle, four was possible though he would likely be leaving injured and needing assistance once he got back to the Tenixir forces. With more arriving the best he could do would be to die with some dignity, even if it was alone in this hellhole.

He took a deep breath, and then frowned. The crystal creatures below suddenly reacted strangely, seemingly loosing interest in him. As he watched wearily they flickered out of sight, and his gaze swept over to the doorway. Then he powered up the jetpack again gaining height as several grenades bounced through the doorway. He managed to avoid the explosion that sent a tower of crates toppling down, and gripped his saber as several armoured figures burst through the doorway firing. Malisane looked on grimly as he recognised the heavy crystallised form of the restoration troopers. Immediately the crystal ascendants appeared surrounding them, attacking with lightning and saber strikes, as the troopers turned to meet them, attacking back with brutal attacks. Malisane resisted the urge to join in the melee as he watched in fascination. The forms of the combatants below were similar but the styles different. How this madness had taken hold of both the Severians and this new faction was a mystery but not one he cared about. He watched for a few more seconds as the mutants battled for supremacy. And then slowly drew his grenade launcher from his back.

The explosion threw the mutant enemies back as the grenade landed amongst them. As the smoke cleared the restoration troopers appeared to be trying to rise, their crystaline skin burned but not seriously damaged, through the lighter armoured ascendants seemed to have taken more damage and were still. Malisane paused a few seconds, then fired another grenade, and a second explosion rocked the large room this time sending several stacks of crates crashing down. The restoration troopers were more still now, but twitching, and the Sith sensed even a second blast would not hold them for long. With a glance at them he fired his jetpack again, soaring briefly up, and then down towards the closed ramp to the freighter. Wrenching the manual release he waited while it quickly lowered, and then as he saw the troopers began to rise he sprinted inside, hitting the button to close it. A second before it closed he saw more troopers entering the depot.

He felt the ship began to rock as blaster fire hit it. He reached the cockpit and quickly sat in the chair. He was not a great pilot but knew enough to get the ship moving, and as he fired up the engines he felt it surge forward, narrowly clearing the door and scattering restoration troopers in its wake. As the battered freighter burst into the open he saw more speeders heading towards him, each carrying a mutilated trooper, and each were disembarking to fire at the freighter. Malisane pulled the controls back and the ship gained height, still shaking as more blaster fire from below hit its hull. Then Malisane breathed a sigh of relief as the ship climbed out of range. A few seconds later it cleared the atmosphere.

Malisane studied the view in front of him as the darkness of space became visible. Around him battle raged. The heavier Severian ships met the lighter Tenixir ones, and neither appeared to have an advantage. Wherever the dreadnaught he had left his ship at he had no idea. Maybe it was engaged, maybe it was destroyed. He sighed. In all his years in the Brotherhood he had never run from a fight, but this was not his fight or even his Clan's, and the battered Ghtroc was barely able to get him away let alone engage. With a final look at the carnage around him he engaged the hyperdrive and he felt the ship respond. He was going home.

Placement
6th place
Member
Grand Inquisitor Lizuni Heraga
File submission
A Chaotic Opening - Option 3.pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Headmistress Alethia Archenksova
File submission
A Chaotic Opening.pdf
Placement
8th place
9th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
9th place
10th place
Vynn Salm
Member
Vynn Salm
File submission
Untitled document (1).pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Ryan Hawkins
Submission
Ryan Hawkins opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Chaos fiction.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Xendar Thendaris
File submission
A Chaotic Opening Option 1.odt
Placement
No placement
Member
Magik
Submission
Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Supreme Chancellor Cassandra Oriana Tyris
File submission
Chips o' Plenty.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Submission
Warlord Kai Movar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
Phase II Fiction - Selika Roh 2632.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Jafits Skrumm
Submission
Jafits Skrumm opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
Diplomacy.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
A Chaotic Opening.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
A Chaotic Opening 14185.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
Textual submission

Brimestone sat in the casino, gambling and drinking as he waited for his brother to show up. The casino was too posh for his tastes, but then again, the Hutts were known for extravaganza events. He knew the crowd was actually here for the main event fight between heavyweight champion Da’wain “The Rock” Jhonsson and “Stone Cold” Stav Ustan, an illegal deathmatch that had been banned in numerous systems. A Twilek slave acting as a waitress would stop by once in a while to refresh his tonic.

Two hours had passed by when there was a sudden commotion outside, followed by loud explosions that shook the building hard enough that his stack of cred chips tumbled over. Looking around at the crowd that had started to rush for the exits, Brime grabbed and pocketed his winnings. He wasn’t part of any known organization, only associated with the Brotherhood because of his brother, Brimstone. They were identical twins, sans the facial hair.

He headed over to the cash pit and exchanged the winnings to a cred pad of his own account. Then he made his way outside to see what all the commotion was about. Multiple ships in the sky were firing down onto the surface as were shuttles he didn’t recognize were making their landing. Brime watches as they land, while hiding himself from observation.

As soon as the first shuttle landed, multiple blue and red creatures emerged and started to run into the city streets, attacking everyone and anything that was fleeing. He had never seen these before, but he could feel a dark energy swirling around them that he could sense.

As he squatted behind the makeshift barrier, he was grasped on his shoulder by a metal glove. He turned and could see a person in a full Beskar mandalorian outfit. Recognizing the symbol on his chest plate, he knew it was his brother.

“It is time to go,” Brimstone said.

“What the Kriffin is going on, “replied Brimestone.

“The Collective. They have new soldiers and you are not ready for them.”

They both hurried out of the view and back towards the spaceport. As they ran, more blasts came down from orbit that nearly got them. “We need to hurry to my ship and get out of here.”

The two brothers ran as face as the Force would let them. They found their ways into the starport and to Hangar 18 to where Brimstone’s Firespray was docked. He hit a button on his arm sleeve and the ramp started to lower. Once they both were safely aboard, the droid, K'ebatas, was already prepping the ship for emergency lift off. “Sir, we have multiple Collective forces in Orbit and they are trying to level the city.”

“I know, ignore the authorization commands of the dock personnel and get this ship going” he retorted.

As the Firespray lifted, a turbolaser hit the Hanger next to them, destroying the ship and people inside that were trying to escape to. Brimstone jumped into the Pilot’s chair and grabbed the yoke, pulling back hard and changing his trajectory over the city and to the west.

“We’re not going up?” asked his brother.

“Not with those blasts raining down on us, let the others take the hits, we’re staying close to the surface and skimming the planet till we can find a trajectory with minimal oppression.”

The ship traveled for about thirty minutes when the droid finally told him of the best route to make their escape. Brimstone banked hard and headed into the night sky and space. As they left the atmosphere, they avoided detection from one of the Collective ships. A button here and there, and the ship shot off into hyperdrive and was gone in a flash.

Placement
No placement