Competition: [GJW XV Phase II] Fiction - ACC Venue: Crystal Palaces

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[GJW XV Phase II] Fiction - ACC Venue: Crystal Palaces
This competition is in the [GJW XV Phase II] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 3 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 11.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective

Mirroring the style seen in the ACC Venues, create a new venue based on your theater’s crystalline impact growth. Venues are meant to be a description of a concentrated locale that provides both restrictions and creativity to the participants. A strong venue not only paints a vivid picture to set the scene, but also provides opportunity for interactivity for creative writers.

Deep within the impact crater, the crystals have begun to take shape into structures. Like a growing city, these structures can take the form of any type. Create an ACC Venue utilizing these crystal growths.

Venue Tips

Basic venue descriptions generally include some of the following:

  • weather details
  • buildings, terrain, obstacles
  • anything visual that could inform the participants or be used in their writing

How to Submit

  • Entries must be submitted in .pdf or .txt format or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website.
    • No GoogleDoc links or .DOC files, please download as a .pdf using "File" -> "Download as" "PDF Document (.pdf)" and submit through the website

Grading

This competition will be graded on the following:

  • Syntax - 10%
  • Originality - 15%
  • Quality of Details - 25%
  • Suitability for the ACC/Combat Writing - 50%
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XV: Ascension
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, General Zxyl Bes'uliik
Running time
2022-06-19 until 2022-07-06 (18 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Novae
Participants
35 subscribers, of which 23 have participated.
Results
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
Aliso_ Heart of the World Seed.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Submission
Qyreia Arronen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
2nd place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
Selen - The Aftermath.pdf
Textual submission

Image Filter from Combat Master/Voice Google Drive original .psd file that I created back when Combat Master.

Placement
3rd place
4th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
ACC Venue Crystal Canyon.pdf
Placement
6th place
7th place
Ryan Hawkins
Member
Ryan Hawkins
File submission
GJW Venue.pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz
Textual submission

**Ragnath: The Crystal Tower**

The crystalline asteroid has embedded itself into the ruins of Adoniram Tower, the former headquarters of Scholae Palatinae. The crystal structure that’s arisen now glows as a haunting specter of the building it replaced.

Rising 400 meters the eerie red light pulses, illuminating the ruined cityscape. While the core is solid, natural plateaus have formed at random intervals. These platforms range in size from 2 meters to 45 meters with some smooth and others jagged.

At the base of the hellish spire are the remains of both the asteroidal seed and Adoniram Tower. Chucks of smoldering rock and twisted metal framework liter the base. The cast off Scholae Palatinae crest which once rested upon Adoniram Tower rests broken upon the ground, bathed in the glow of its successor.

Placement
8th place
Member
Envoy Zuza Lottson
File submission
The Poisoned Scars.pdf
Placement
9th place
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Acc Venue.pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Emperor Thran Occasus-Palpatine
File submission
Crystal Cave.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Submission
Warlord Kai Movar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission

The conflicts with the Children of Mortis have not left the Sadowan capital world untouched. The history of invasions, attacks, and even civil war do not compare to the great scar left on the earth by the asteroid seedling deployed by the Children. A great crater stretches deep and wide into the ground.

Where one might expect little more than an impact site or perhaps some debris, you find that the machinations of the enemy have left crystalline spires. Eerily reminiscent of poorly-planned city buildings or thickly trunked trees, these structures are spaced seemingly haphazard. From each thick base, the more tree-looking branches sprout, many being thick enough to allow an adult-sized sentient to step or climb up their height. Still, the proximity and number of structures might allow one to hide among the branches and columns of this unnatural forest.

Below, the earth has been turned up. This has left loose dirt, ground rock, and mud at the base of crater. A stink permeates this wretched site, hinting at death and decay in the face of disaster. There are no hints of life, save for the combatants. The war's scars have run deep on Sepros.

Placement
No placement
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Submission
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Vynn Salm
File submission
Crystal Venue.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Grand Inquisitor Lizuni Heraga
Textual submission

Jedi Praxeum (CoM Tainted Edition)
Kiast

Perched high atop the Or’ena Mountains, safely above the thick poisonous atmosphere that envelope the lower valleys of Kiast, sits a grand temple that was once a Sephi military outpost. Gifted to the Odanites as a show of good faith by the inhabiting Vatali, the Praxeum, with its five towering spires, is the seat of power for Clan Odan-Urr and the premier academic academy in the region. It is here, students learn everything from humanities and governance to military tactics and combat as well as how to hone their Force abilities and live within the Odanite Code. Many great Odanites have once walked the halls as aspiring students and still to this day return to expand their knowledge or use what they have learned to enlighten those just beginning their journey.

The grounds at the base of the Praxeum are strewn with sandy fighting arenas and well manicured lawns surrounded by lush meadows, various ponds and trees that dot the landscape. The grounds atop the mountain allow for unparalleled views that stretch hundreds of miles in all directions. A gentle breeze softly rustles the leaves and tall grasses allowing for one to clear their mind, feel the Force envelope them and be at peace. However, during the attack by the Children of Mortis and the heavy bombardment by their crystalline monstrosities, towering red crystal structures now protrude out from the ground. Stretching several meters out from these structures, the soil is overturned from the impact, and devoid of all life. Grass and trees are brown and rotting while all animals stay clear of the ominous energy still pulsing out from within the crystals. This once calming place has taken on a more ominous feel, especially for those sensitive to the Force.

Caution must be taken around the crystals as well as near the surrounding cliffs. While the area is temperate, the flat terrain and lack of natural cover from distant mountains offers little protection from the high winds of a passing storm. Despite being high above the surface, the atmosphere is that of any other Type I planet.

Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
Submission
Tasha'Vel Versea opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Archian
File submission
The Crystal Pit.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Vorran Shadowfeather
Submission
Vorran Shadowfeather opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
Textual submission

Crimson Solari Cave

There is an opening at the base of the mountain that shows signs of archaeological excavations. It tunnels deep underground and reveals a cavern that is filled with crystals. There is barely any light unless given, though abandoned old lanterns that could still be operable with the right mechanics litter the area. The walls, ceilings, and pillars host growing crystals that all reflect the same color. Upon closer inspection, they have been revealed to be solari crystals, though they reflect a dark red when receiving light. It is said that ancient Tarentateks lived under the mountain, and their Dark Side energies tainted the once pure crystals into their current color. Force-sensitives within proximity of the presence of these crystals is clouded by the Dark Side, interfering with their ability to sense in the Force, decreasing it’s skill by 1. It’s power in the Dark Side grants the user an enhanced effect of Rage, increasing its skill by +1. Those without any skill in rage will be granted the force power at +1.

Placement
No placement
Member
Krath Adherent Edema R'uh-Kalinor
File submission
ACC venue.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Zentru'la
Textual submission

Vicious rain lashes through the thick mist veiling the crater in a crimson hue. Crystalline fingers reach into the sky, forming a labyrinth of dark corners and twisted passageways. It's the third night since the crystal pierced the sky and the Arroyo district is ghost-quiet, but for the shriek of raptors lurking in the mist.

Placement
No placement
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
Crystal City - Aliso.pdf
Placement
No placement