Competition: NPC: Military Commander

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NPC: Military Commander

What makes a great Military Commander? Is it their personality? Is it their philosophy? Is it the past experiences of their life?

Tell me about it!

This is your chance to create one of the more prominent npcs that Clan Vizsla will be using!

All submissions will be judged based on level of depth, creativity and plain ole what I think is the coolest.

Winners who are are awarded 1st, 2nd and 3rd place will earn 5, 4 and 3 points to the container competition as well as Third Level Crescents.

All other participants will earn 2 points.

Please use .doc, .pdf or use the text box for your submissions.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Vizsla Workshop: Clan Npcs
Organized by
/competitions/18508
Running time
2023-01-01 until 2023-02-01 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Clan Vizsla
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
3 subscribers, of which 1 has participated.
Results
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
Textual submission

A Commander who would give their life for their soldiers. Someone who wouldn't ask their soldiers to do something they wouldn't be willing to do themselves. Highly honorable and motivated to get the job done every time they hit the battlefield. A never give up, never surrender attitude to keep pushing until the job is done.

Placement
1st place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

When I think of a military commander I think of the oldest, roughest, toughest SOB the military has to offer. Everything he does is pure perfection from all the training he's had over the long, hard years. He carries a swagger with him that doesn't give a damn, but respectfully, hes going to do things his way. You can always find him with the fattest cigar in his mouth, unlit when indoors, because thats good manners.

Placement
Participation only