Competition: [Life Day Celebration II] Part 2: What If? Store Item

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[Life Day Celebration II] Part 2: What If? Store Item

Objective

Create a new item prototype, which must come from a different fictional universe (Marvel, DC, Stargate, Star Trek, etc), but created to make it seem like it may exist in the Star Wars universe.

There is no guarantee that any submissions may make it into any of our Stores, however the possibility is there should the submission fit all necessary criteria and make sense in our fictional universe.

Rules

  • Submissions must include the fictional universe it is based on
  • Submissions are recommended to make use of at least part of the Item Prototype Approval Policy requirements as they will be used for grading, but it is not mandatory for participation:
    • Item Name: Name of the prototype
    • Item Image: An image representation of the item
    • Proposed Rarity: Common or Uncommon or Rare or Epic or Legendary
    • Item Description: A full description of the item, it is recommended participants look at existing item prototypes of the same type/category as the item they are writing to match the language.

Grading

Entries will be graded on the following:

  • Adherence to the Item Prototype Approval Policy/Creation of a full and detailed prototype - 50%
  • Creativity - 20%
  • Realism (within the given fictional universe & Star Wars universe) - 20%
  • Spelling/Grammar of entry - 10%
Competition Information
Parent Competition
[DB] Life Day Celebration II
Organized by
General Zxyl Bes'uliik, Lord Halcyon
Running time
2023-11-29 until 2023-12-10 (12 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
13 subscribers, of which 12 have participated.
Results
1st place
Rian Taldrya
Member
Rian Taldrya
File submission
Synergy Soran Phased Pistol.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
2nd place
Member
Malfearak Asvraal
File submission
Particle Magnum.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Adept Reiden Palpatine Karr
Textual submission

This is based on/inspired by the Puddle Jumper (https://stargate.fandom.com/wiki/Puddle_Jumper) from the Stargate franchise.

Item Name: Lantean Shuttle
Item Image: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/ramroomrp/images/4/44/PuddleJumper1.JPG/revision/latest?cb=20130213155910
Proposed Rarity: Rare
Item Description:
The Lantean Shuttle is an 8 meter long, multi-role shuttle with a cylindrical body, flat bottom, and angled front and rear. It had drive pods on either side of its body that contained its engines, which extended while taking off and in flight and retracted while landing to take up less space. It was primarily used for the transport of passengers and small teams of soldiers or researchers. It had limited space for cargo or equipment, located in overhead compartments above the bench seats in the rear that were situated against the sides of the shuttle, as well as beneath the benches and the space between them running down the middle of the shuttle. The cockpit area contained four seats and could be sealed off from the passenger compartment for privacy or in case of emergency. Hyperdrive capable, this vessel has good maneuverability and speed, with average armor and shielding.

Armament:
2 laser cannons (front)

Complement:
1 pilot
12 passengers
1 metric ton of cargo

Placement
4th place
5th place
Augur Windos
Member
Augur Windos
File submission
What If - Store Item - Lightning Rifle.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
File submission
Possessions_ _What If_.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Submission
Warlord Kai Movar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Luka Zarkot
Textual submission

Universe: Mass Effect
Item Name: Space Hamster
Item Image: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/masseffect/images/4/47/LE2_Hamster_Codex.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/340?cb=20210819135746
Proposed Rarity: Common
Item Description: This furry quadruped is often a companion animal aboard starships due to its small size.

Placement
No placement
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Universal Zoopedia.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Work't
File submission
medkit dead space.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
File submission
Kyber Gloves-1.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Meero
File submission
Conversion Energy Bow.pdf
Placement
No placement