Competition: Survey of Planet B510-G20143

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Survey of Planet B510-G20143

Odd reading have been detected on the Outer Rim. You have been tasked with completing a survey of the surface of the planet. Unfortunately, something about the clouds which surround the planet have made orbital readings impossible. As such, you must travel to the surface, and gather data to bring back for analysis.

What do you find? What is the source of these odd readings? 500 words minimum describing your expedition to the surface. Submissions will be based on the fiction rubric and entertainment value. Submissions may be made in docx, pdf or txt files.

Competition Information
Organized by
Adept Bentre Stahoes, Marcinius Turelles
Running time
2015-06-10 until 2015-06-20 (11 days)
Target Unit
Clan Naga Sadow
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Warlord Robert Sadow
File submission
Planet_Bob.docx
Placement
1st place
Member
Cethgus Tiberius Entar
Textual submission

The shuttle rattled slightly as its engines began to start up, making sure that the proper protical was followed up. The Primarch stood in the hanger admiring the operations that the Imperial Class Star Destroyer followed, they made sure everything was done down to the fine letters for the Proconsul. His eyes followed the data pad as he allowed a few seconds to scan the information that was coming to him, knowing full well that it would now take him going down there. It was something the Iridonian had no time for and honestly he did not care much for doing surveys but here he was and by the order of Locke there was nothing he could do now.

Sighing as he allowed himself to get on the shuttle, he watched as the pilot gave him a small nod before he watched the shuttle begin its discent as he allowed himself to look out at the view screen knowing full well that he had been assigned a shit hole, as the shuttle moved quickly down it descended with ease making quick work of process with the experiance pilot, the shuttle was escorted by two fighters knowing full well that the Proconsul was onboard the shuttle it was a formal matter and one that would be sorted quickly and simply. As the Primarch watched another two shuttles rattled threw the sky heading down to the planet side quickly inside of both of them was the rapid attach squad that were attached to the Proconsul.

As they made landing it was clear from the atmosphere that this place had been jammed from scanners, making sure on the communications that the troops were clearing the ground quickly and easily, the static instantly began to sink away with ease. It was clear that it only took a small force to make sure that the job was done correctly and the team Cethgus had assembled did that easily. Soon the reports came flooding in, checking teh datapad was recieveing all of the information that the teams had been gathering, and it was obviouse that they had done the job required of them, Cethgus leaned in and checked over the information once more before giving the pilot the signal to allow him to go back to the ISD.

Upon landing on the deck the Iridonian waited for the other two shuttles as well as watching the fighter escort get out of the ship. Knowing full well that he had managed to sort all of the issues out in seconds, once more using the powers at his command to sort it out without one blaster being fired, today was a rare occasion. No-one got hurt and the mission got completed and now it was time for the Primarch to give this information to the Consul and wait and see what he was going to do with it now they finally had it. Allowing his hand to check over the data pad once more it was nothing more than a quick glance but it was to just make sure that he had everything in order before handing it to the lord Consul.

Placement
2nd place