Competition: Sentence Run-On III

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Sentence Run-On III

Like previous incarnations of it, this Sentence Run-On follows exactly as title describes. Write a single sentence for each of your posts, and make sure to follow basic RO strategies, like having a post that makes sense in the context of those before it (eg: if Darknightlord Jabba writes that his character walks into a bar, don't reply by saying your character, Machojedi, is sitting in a casino and sees him walk in).

Sentence length is not a problem, but be careful of run on sentences (Atty will judge you harshly for your comma splices). It's good to aim for around 7-10 words if you're worried.

You may only post twice consecutively at any given time. Any more than that will result in disqualification. Grading will be based on the Voice Fiction Rubric, mostly so that I can get a red pen out. Since posts are made to discourse, things should stay in the general area of PG-13. When in doubt, just ask, or talk to your fellow posters. Planning with each other in totally encouraged, but only three can win.

Your "prompt" sentence will be revealed upon subscription. Here's the thread. Have at it!

Competition Information
Organized by
Eminent Satsi Tameike Arconae
Running time
2015-07-23 until 2015-09-01 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.
Results
Member
Battlelord K'tana
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
1st place
Member
Augur Celevon Edraven Erinos
Textual submission

Two posts

Placement
2nd place
Member
Adept Kordath Bleu
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
3rd place
Member
Augur Uji Tameike
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
4th place
Member
Warrior Aay'han Agrona Beviin
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
5th place
Member
Augur Celahir Erinos Arconae
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
No placement
Member
Savant Riverche
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
No placement
Member
Raider Magness Dritch
Textual submission

Manually added by Seer Atyiru Caesura Entar

Placement
No placement
Member
Runner Drevis Monarch
Textual submission

https://discourse.darkjedibrotherhood.com/t/sentence-run-on-iii-revenge-of-the-rainbows/882/26?u=drevismonarch

Placement
No placement