for 1st place in Tridens Poetry comp http://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/dbjedi/competitions.asp?ID=820

From Oberst(whom graded them): It was unconventional in a conventional way. It might be my own bias in poetry, but I've never liked the formal rhyming or wording schemes. You have those classical sensibilities, but you went outside of them. It was reminiscent of Sylvia Plath and Essex Hemphill in how you married the modern and contemporary styles of poetry.

Congrats Ma'ar

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