Dark Brotherhood,
Fiction Update 2.0 has been released: Treason.
This fiction follows after the destruction of New Tython and focuses on Clans and individuals who have taken the side of the Undesirables. As always, any catastrophic event or death within the fiction was coordinated with the Clan and members involved. A few notes on this particular fiction.
The original fiction was designed to be a short character piece focusing on Telona Murrage. Telona was the first person to approach me about a potential story line involving the undesirables.
Jac Cotelin wrote the third "chapter" of the Taldryan portion of this update.
The most played songs during the fiction: Hard Sun by Eddy Vedder, You Will Become by Glen Hansard, The Preacher by Jamie Commons, The Hunted by snow Ghosts, Alive by Sia, Parachute by Chris Stapleton, Fuckwithmeyouknowigotit by Jay Z, Beast by Nico Vega, and I'm Broken by Pantera.
The Fiction is 10 Pages and 4031 words. I know I said I would not do that again, but here is a TLDR to ease your pain. Jac is on a Boat. Aabs is on the Run. Telona is about to wreck some stuff. Taldryan is glad Jac is home. Plagueis is not happy to see Aabs. Telona is whipping some Krath magic out. Jac dropped his walking stick. Pravus wonders what to do with CNS, CSP, and COU and slyly talks about possessions, but in character.
Special thanks to James, Wally, Mav, Jac, Howie, Zoron, Halc, Yacks, Teylas, Slagar, Aabs, Evant, Vyr, Telona, and Wuntila for providing a quick read through of the document.
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Hmmmm...... This means extra war
Wow. Just... wow. The scope of it all is impressive. Everyone needs to start rethinking every aspect of the Brotherhood. And our characters.
Very wow.
And things get REAL.
Awesome update, Sarin!
Nice read!
Good work, Sarin and Jac!
Holy crap.......war is coming.
COU would like to welcome all the late comers to the war and Tal is welcome to crash on our couch :P
Solari wanted to crash on your couch, but you let him die.
This pleases me. Issues in the content aside (as I'm sure everyone is rushing to point out errors and such) this does a lot to push the overall fiction more in line with the OOC changes being implemented. Very nice!
You know the real winner in this story? Mav. Mav is the real winner.
Because now Jac is the worst.
I need a "Like" button. For Yacks' comment.
Consider it liked.
Interesting, intriguing, impressive, implausible, insane.
Lots of emotions running through my mind right now. And to see that those that I hold in high regards are set to eradicate our very being.
Guess it is time for backup plans to start coming to fruition.
Aabs. shakes head
Brilliant work. Loved every aspect of it!
Feisty Kooki is on the horizon.... Be afraid....be VERY afraid :P Great fiction :))
Sarin gives me too much credit; I only added to what he had already written so well.
I found it amazing how hard it was for me personally to have Jac take this role. Writing his part really took a lot out of me. Crazy how attached we can become to these characters and their role.
Jac, you're a jackass. :P
Ugh...gaddammit Jac...the poor OFH Lawn :/ Now how the hell am I going to yell at the kids to get off of it?!
Glad someone's finally dealing with the great panda menace! :p
Awesome read, I really enjoyed it.
We'll build a new space lawn.
With blackjack and hookers!
@Jac Cotelin: Word. It was a great sacrifice, so thank you.
Great fiction....but now I don't have a permanent bar stool to call home :(