GJW: Fiction 2 of 3

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GJW: Fiction 2 of 3

Hey Everyone,

The second part of our GJW conclusion fiction can be found below. This fiction was a joint effort between a couple of Masters, we hope you enjoy.

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TLDR:

  1. Esoteric vs Pravus?
  2. Jac vs Muz!
  3. Did Tarax just trigger the Rite?

*This might seem a little anticlimactic. It is. The story's conclusion, due in a few days, has a couple major surprises and changes. There might even be a few little hints in this story. Well, big hints :p

Poor Tarax. So dead. So very dead. :(

WAT!? Tarax is dead :( Nooooo! Who'll wear the Hawaiian shirts now?

Nice fiction update, fellas!

As expected, it's all Tarax's fault.

Odd. This seemed like an entirely different style of writing than the previous entries. And the introduction of Tarax in Part I only led to a two-second death scene? Seems kind of pointless :P

You're right...this plot 'update' looks more like self-aggrandizing masturbation for a few people, than anything else. Oh well what do I care, I'm dead. Even if it was written very poorly. :P

RIP in peace Tarax.

great plot update, can't wait to see the conclusion.

Any chance to just.posting the fiction instead of Google drive. Can't read any of it on cellphone

Clearly the plot twist is Tarax didn't die but will return as a zombie with l337 Grand Master powahz in Part 3.

Goddamn it, Tyrone! I mean, Tarax!

Lol, Tarax got insta gibbed.

Brimstone: http://sithtower.de/fiction/

I quickly tossed it here; if I had more time, I would format it and stuff. But I only have access to this PDF file. But at least it is readable.

At the conclusion of the fiction, I'll post it in multiple formats.

Snape kills Dumbledore

OMG Rathus! You ruined the sixth Harry Potter book for me!

At first I didn't understand why Tarax was actually involved in this fiction, rather than Fiction or Run on winners. But now I know; Brotherhood Idiot! :P

Thx xia

Oh gosh... at least one fiend's reign of terror is over. Tarax was the wor-... Well, he was a pretty cool guy, actually. Who do we send the eulogies to, again?

Stones are the biggest enemies of Grandmasters, I swear: The Deputy Grand Master fell backwards, his foot catching a stone, and his body tumbling to the floor. A rock caught his [Jac] foot, and he fell to a knee, the power stuttering within him with the loss of concentration.

KILL ALL THE STONES!

Poor Tarax. Sad to see an Obelisk fall so soon.

This GJW continues to have awesome fictional development

Nice update, except for the few grammar errors that I found. This would not have placed in the top three. :P

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