Lucine had only moved a few steps before Morgan’s cloud of energy dispersed, allowing the Sith’s connection to the Force to be restored. With it came a screamed warning of imminent danger.
She whirled in time to see energy arcing toward her. She moved to bring her lightsaber up in a defensive position, but it was as if she was trying to move through molasses. She fell into an imperfect stance even as the lightning reached her. Some of the tendrils of energy struck the emerald plasma blade with a crackle, accompanied by the smell of ozone, but most caressed the hand that clutched her weapon.
Electric, fiery pain shot up the nerve pathways of her arm and traveled through her body, causing all of her muscles to seize in a single agonized convulsion. The jolt vanished after a few seconds, leaving the Sith weak both from the pain that had overwhelmed her senses and from exhaustion. She sank to her knees, and her lightsaber clattered to the garbage strewn ground.
“That’s more like it,” Morgan said as she surveyed her fallen foe with a satisfied smirk. “Are you ready to admit defeat?”
Lucine narrowed her eyes at the Elder’s smug tone, but did not immediately reply. Instead, she focused on the rage and humiliation that burned within her. She drew upon it, forcing herself to get slowly to her feet despite her protesting muscles.
“No,” she replied, in a resolute tone. She once again sank into a defensive stance, the lightsaber blade wavering visibly from the effort to hold it aloft.
“You can't be serious,” Morgan said as she stared at the Sith in disbelief. “Come on, see sense. You are outmatched in every possible way. You can barely even stand!”
“I assure you, I am in deadly earnest,” the redhead replied grimly. “If you think I will simply submit and let you rummage through my mind, you are quite mistaken.”
The Elder heaved a sigh of annoyance as she drew her own lightsaber from her belt. “You want to play with lightsabers? Fine. I have a few minutes.”
The Adept’s weapon flared to life as she darted forward to close with her opponent. Morgan brought the plasma blade down in a sweeping arc. The Sith brought her own up to block, and sparks flew as their blades clashed. Nimbly, Morgan darted back and to the side as she swung her lightsaber in a wide arc again. Lucine parried, keeping her movements tight and controlled.
Time seemed to slow for the two combatants. Morgan utilized as much of the alley as the tight confines would allow, maneuvering around the garbage receptacles while trying to draw Lucine into attacking with feints and taunts. Given her present exhausted state, a single foolish move would be enough for Morgan to prevail.
But the redhead refused to be goaded. Though the Adept left increasingly wider and more obvious openings, Lucine refused to take the bait. She defended herself with careful blocks and deflections, but did not initiate an attack.
“What, do you think you are going to outlast me? I’ve got news for you, girl, I could do this all day,” the Adept said, though her scowl made her growing irritation apparent. Though Morgan was in no way tired, she was growing bored with probing the Sith’s defense in the tight confines of the alley. “C’mon! Try your luck!”
A small smile flickered across Lucine’s face, but she did not give a verbal response. Her skin glowed with a fine sheen of sweat, physical evidence of the effort she was expending to maintain her defense.
Morgan stifled a sigh of exasperation. This is ridiculous. There’s no way—
SPLAT
Morgan’s thoughts were abruptly cut short when something moist and foul-smelling impacted against the back of her head. She risked a quick glance over her shoulder, but there was no one there.
The Force shrilled a warning as the Sith suddenly leapt forward in a lunge. The Adept’s attention snapped back to her opponent, and she parried the Sith’s blade upward. Lucine countered with a remise aimed at Morgan’s throat.
Sparks fell like rain as the two women exchanged rapid-fire blows. But Lucine could not keep up the pace and fell back into defense, breathing heavily.
Morgan took advantage of the opportunity to touch the back of her head with her free hand. It came away covered in a thick, brown, mud-like substance that did not smell like mud. “Oh, you have got to be kidding me!” she shrieked in outrage.
Lucine only smirked in response. She kept her sword at the ready even as she made a gesture with her free hand. Out of the corner of her eye, the Adept saw more of the mud-like substance lift slowly into the air, before launching toward her. The Adept growled softly and drew upon the Force. The brown paste impacted against an invisible wall of energy.
“You want to throw things, schutta?” she snarled. “Fine. We’ll play catch.”
She crooked a finger, sending one of the nearby waste receptacle hurtling toward the redhead. Lucine cut easily through the first one, sending garbage flying in all direction. But the second one caught her in the stomach, forcing the air from her lungs. The third cracked against her head, causing her to crumble to the ground.
Morgan allowed herself to smirk, even as she looked for something to scrub off her hand. “This would have been so much easier if you’d been sensible,” she said with a tsk. “Stubborn girl.”
Positive Takeaways
This is an excellent description of suppression. Throughout this post you weave descriptive language and character history masterfully.
Can Be Improved
I'm scratching my head somewhat on what the Guardsman NPC added to the plot aside from some action scenes that ultimately served as a false start to the real conflict. There are no word limits in casual matches but for the sake of pacing you could have cut this subplot and devoted more space to the direct interaction between Morgan and Lucine.