Vincent smirked beneath his helmet as he noticed what must have been waves of fear washing over the young Jedi. To the Combat Master, it felt as though the man’s emotional state went from one of curiosity and obligation to a state of crippling anxiety. However, the young man still stood as tall as he could in front of Brujah, his sabers raised, ready to take on the Sith even through the fear. Vincent could almost respect his tenacity. Almost.
“So, this is where you choose to die? After I have been so kind as to give you the opportunity to walk away? For what? A useless Trandoshan grifter? Some kind of useless moral superiority complex?” the Sith hissed.
A sickening modulated laugh exited the helmet of the Hand of the Empress. He didn’t even really want to fight the man. Not here. Not now. All he wanted was his time to relax and strengthen himself, but this young man didn’t seem to want to let that happen.
Just then the Combat Master heard the whirs and beeps of an R3-series Astromech droid approaching from behind the Jedi. For the first time since he had ignited his lightsabers, the Jedi took his eyes off Vincent, only for a second to look back at his droid.
“Stay back, Nemo!” the Jedi said.
The droid stopped where it was. Roughly 10 meters behind its master. It let out a low whir that sounded thick with a sense of worry.
Vincent scanned the immediate area with his eyes, looking for something that he could use to his advantage. His eyes turned upward and he saw several large boulders made of cooled and hardened lava on a hillside just behind the Jedi. Vincent smiled a despicable smile.
It seemed as though the Elder had finally grown tired of threatening the man in hopes that he would leave. The man had courage, even through fear. One day, he would make a great adversary, but today was not that day. The Sith raised his right arm, deactivating Hellfire at the same time. Eeno’s body went rigid and then lifted off the ground, yet he still clung tightly to his lightsabers. Vincent approached slowly, and spoke in a low tone, almost like a growl.
“Allow me to fill you in on a secret. I hate the Jedi. All of them. I hate their smug attitudes. I hate their holier than thou approach to everything in life. I hate their lack of foresight and their nonexistent sense of self preservation.”
Vincent grew closer and closer to the man until he was nearly touching him.
“You may be willing to die here for this worthless junk peddler out of some warped sense of obligation. I’ll tell you this much… I do enjoy ending every Jedi life that I can, but… I sense something in you. Something tells me that some day, you might just be a fight that is worth my time. Sadly, that day has not yet arrived. Allow me to leave you with some motivation for the next time we meet.”
With that the Sith reached back and then flung the floating body of Eeno backwards. The Jedi landed hard on the rough ground about 15 meters behind his droid. The young man heard a rumble and looked up just in time to see a group of large boulders roll themselves down the landscape above them and land directly on his R3 Astromech droid with a dreadful crunch.
The rocks kept falling, stacking on top of Nemo until they completely blocked the path back to Vincent. The Sith thought that he heard the sounds of panicked screams on the other side of the rocks, but he didn’t care. The Jedi wouldn’t reach him again today. With a sigh, the Hand of the Empress turned and began walking back towards his preferred spot to sit and meditate. As he walked away, he spoke two final words.
“Karking Jedi…”
Minor syntax errors. You're missing a comma in a few places. Having someone proofread your posts helps with that. I can tell you from experience, a proofreader will almost always catch things you miss, no matter how good of a writer you are.
The fight itself was fun to read, though, it lacks any interaction between Eeno and the Terror power used on him.
Also, lightsaber wounds hurt. I can believe someone maybe fighting through one. Maybe they manage to fight through it enough to run after a second. Getting lucky a third time? Against a Makashi practitioner? I find that hard to believe for a knight. It's compelling, but it does require a high suspension of disbelief.