Adept Raiju Kang vs. Master Windos

Adept Raiju Kang

Elder 1, Elder tier, Clan Vizsla
Male Nautolan, Force Disciple, Defender, Criminal Syndicate
vs.

Master Windos, Headmaster

Elder 2, Elder tier, The Council
Male Miraluka, Force Disciple, Defender
Hall ACC Championship: Revival [2026] - Masters Tournament
Messages 4 out of 4
Time Limit 3 Days
Competition ACC Championship: Revival [2026] - Masters Tournament
Battle Style Alternative Ending
Battle Status Judged
Combatants Adept Raiju Kang , Master Windos
Winner Master Windos
Force Setting Standard
Weapon Setting Standard
Adept Raiju Kang's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Master Windos's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Venue Dagobah: Dragonsnake Bog
Last Post 23 September, 2026 10:30 PM UTC
Judge #1: Vincent Brujah
  Adept Raiju Kang Master Windos
Syntax - 15% 4 4
Story - 40% 4 4
Realism - 30% 4 5
Creativity - 15% 5 4
Total 4.15 4.3
Another really good battle here in the Masters tournament! I really enjoyed the history between the two characters in this one. The desire of Raiju to prove himself to the Headmaster that he once fought side by side with was an excellent narrative that I thought you both used very well. The stoic nature of Master Windos not giving Raiju the satisfaction of feeling validated was also very entertaining. This was a close battle, and like I've thought several times during this tournament thus far, it's a shame that there can be only one winner because you're both great writers that I would love to read more from in the upcoming rounds. Regadless, there must be a winner... so, let's get to the score breakdown. I marked you both equal in Syntax and Story. There were a couple very small issues in the text from each of you that caused me to score you both 4 in Syntax. Likewise, for Story, you both did very well, but there were a couple places where I had to make sure I was following along correctly. For Realism, I gave the edge to Windos as I found nothing in his posts that made me question how realistic the actions were. For Raiju, I deducted one point from Realism. This mostly revolved around the use of Necromancy and what I believe was Force Lightning in his second post. Raiju did a good job at explaining that it was taking a lot of concentration and mental effort to keep the wraith in the battle while he also focused on the golden orb that he was creating, but I had to read that section of the battle a few times to try to grasp exactly what was happening, what the orb was, and what the intention calling it was. I went back and forth on whether the orb was the result of Pyrokinesis or Force Lightning, but with Raiju's Pyrokinesis being at tier 3, that requires fire to already exist, meaning you can't pull it out of thin air. Ultimately, I decided that Force Lightning made the most sense and was likely what was intended, but I felt that could have been written in a way that made it clearer as to exactly what was happening. Combine that with using the power while also keeping enough focus on the wraith to keep it in existence, and that's the reason why I decided to deduct a point from Realism. With that said, I did think that was probably the most creative part of the battle, which resulted in Raiju outscoring Windos in Creativity. This was a close one, and a battle that I had to really think on, but at the end of the day the score tells the tale. Master Windos walks away from this battle with a close win.
Totals
Adept Raiju Kang 4.15
Master Windos 4.3
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dagobah

Located on the Rimma Trade Route within the Outer Rim territories, Dagobah could very well be the best place in the Galaxy to hide. The remote location of the planet in combination with the lack of any kind of advanced civilization made it a system of little value to any kind of galactic government. The planet is hot, humid, and mostly filled with foggy, swamp-like jungles.

Dragonsnake Bog is a murky lagoon on the surface of the planet. Fog covers the cloudy waters of the bog. The waters ranged in depth, but at its deepest the bog was roughly 4 meters deep. Even in the shallow areas, the floor of the bog was thick with mud, making it easy for something or someone to get stuck within the lagoon.

True to its name, Dragonsnake Bog was the home of the large, snake-like creature known as the dragonsnake. The beast had an average length of 7 meters and weight of roughly 200 kilograms, though some fully grown dragonsnakes were much larger. It had large, venomous fangs that could help it to subdue prey and a hunger that was nearly unmatched. The dragonsnake usually hid just below the surface of the water, waiting for an opportunity to find its next meal. Once the creature spotted a snack, it would quickly lunge out to attack it.

The bog stank.

It was more than a simple bad odour. No matter how it looks in a holovid or situation report, there’s nothing that can communicate how absolutely rancid bogs could smell. Mix that with the backwater nature of Dagobah…and only the most desperate of creatures would make this their home. Raiju Kang had spent enough time in swamps, back alleys, and poorly ventilated cantinas to know that there were few places in the galaxy where the air could rival the foulness of this place.

So, of course, he’d face this man here.

The Nautolan rolled his shoulders and stretched his neck from side to side, the copper rings adorning his head-tresses clicked softly against one another as his head tilted from the movement. His big black eyes blinked twice to clear the fog from his vision while his blackened left hand flexed at his side as he studied the figure across the murky water. An all too familiar presence.

Windos.

Not that Windos though…

Raiju had known a Windos Helkin Tarentae once, so long ago, and before his hand was corrupted by the touch of a Keeper. But that was a different man, in a different time, under the banner of Tarentum. That name had carried its own history, its own associations, and enough baggage to fill a freighter. But the man standing before him now was someone else entirely.

Still, they shared enough baggage to fill a YT-1300…

Raiju and this Windos had taken to battlefields together for Odan-Urr. They had fought together defending the tribes of New Tython, where titles like ‘friend’ or ‘ally’ often resulted in their name on a casualty report. Comrades in arms, it had been easy to forget their difference in politics for a time and Raiju remembered those days, even when he preferred not.

Now, years later, the pair shared the halls of the Shadow Academy. But shared was a generous word. They tolerated one another.

Sometimes.

The newly appointed Headmaster was determined to exercise his power in pursuit of growing the Brotherhood’s knowledge. A trivial Tribune’s opinions had mattered little but their deep history had protected the Tribune’s autonomy for now. While they had developed a professional relationship built on mutual utility, occasional irritation, and the unspoken understanding that neither particularly cared to make the other’s life easier.

For now.

Frenemies make the most productive relationships… Raiju thought, his mouth curled into a crooked grin.

“Well Headmaster,” the Nautolan called across the bog, his voice carrying through the humid air, “I suppose this saves me the trouble of skipping our next check-in.”

He shifted his weight, boots settling into the mud. His eyes remained fixed on Windos, but his attention spread through the surrounding swamp. The water concealed too many possibilities. A dragonsnake, submerged roots, a dragonsnake, a sinkhole, a dragonsnake, or simply another opportunity for The Force to remind him that it had a sense of humor.

Raiju had learned long ago not to trust a quiet battlefield.

A sharp snap-hiss cut through the humidity as Raiju drew and ignited his lightsaber, the orange hue marked the thick fog that had settled in between them. Yet, while The Force stirred around him, the Headmaster remained stoically still across the pond from the Nautolan. For a moment, Raiju had to remind himself that while the Miraluka couldn’t see, surely he could sense the threat he posed.

Yet, as moments drew into minutes, Raiju felt another sense of doubt. He reached outward, noting the simple creatures beneath the surface of the water between them. The shifting mud and dangers it hid. The curling fog between the trees. Then finally Windos himself, a familiar presence made unfamiliar by time and circumstances, whose hands slightly twitched upon being mentally provoked.

If only Raiju had paid more attention to those trees first.

Thwack

A sharp, shooting pain accompanied the impact to the back of his head. Staggering forward with a few curse words flowing from his mouth, Raiju quickly turned his attention away from the other Elder. Instead, he sensed the groans of the surrounding trees as the Force seized hold of more dead, twisted, and hanging branches.

Jagged lengths of wood tore free from the undergrowth surrounding the pair and shot towards the Nautolan.

Raiju twisted aside as another branch hurtled past his head, its splintered tip grazing one of his head-tresses. A second came low, forcing him to leap backward as it buried itself into the mud where his feet had been. More splintered sticks flew towards Raiju while the Headmaster held his ground.

A calm voice followed Raiju’s darting movements.

“Here's the thing, Windos.” The black eyes of the Nautolan reflected the faint glow of his blade as it turned the wooden missiles into mulch. “I’ve quite liked working with you. Most days, anyway. But the next time you see the rest of the staff, they are going to know you lost this tournament because of me.”

A beat of silence passed.

“Still talking too much,” Windos remarked.

“Still compensating for your personality, I see.”

The joke was delivered lightly, but the intent beneath it was not. Raiju was not fighting simply to prove he could trade blows with a fellow Elder. This match was an opportunity.

He had spent too much of his life clawing for his independence only to surrender it now. The Shadow Academy was a shared responsibility, but his position within it was not a favour to be granted or revoked. And if Windos needed a reminder that Raiju Kang was not merely another subordinate waiting for instructions, then this was a perfectly acceptable venue. The Nautolan lowered his stance.

His first movement was deliberately unremarkable: a step to the side, away from the deeper water, his boots finding firmer ground beneath the mud. His cloak shifted with him, revealing the heavy armor beneath. He had no intention of allowing the swamp to dictate his footing if he could help it.

Then he moved.

Raiju surged forward with a sudden burst of athleticism, closing distance while keeping his blade angled defensively. He didn't charge blindly into Windos' reach. Instead, he approached along the edge of the shallows, his movement broken by a sharp change in direction as he sought to force the Miraluka to adjust his stance.

The lightsaber came across in a testing horizontal cut, aimed toward Windos' upper torso rather than committing to a killing strike. It was a question, not an answer.

How much of you is still the man I remember?

As if answering the thought, Windos pivoted to present a new threat. He brought his forearm up, producing a light shield to answer the Nautolan’s probing attack. As the shield and lightsaber collided, they released a violent crack. The impact drove the Headmaster back half a step, but he seized something from his belt and aimed it over the shield at Raiju.

The sharp snap-hiss of Windos’ blade drove Raiju back, a full step, as the Nautolan’s dual hearts began to race.

“That's new,” Raiju muttered and then grinned, “Good - I was worried you'd gotten predictable.”

"You can provide feedback on my predictability at our next check-in, which yes, you will be attending."

Windos deactivated Punga and clipped the buckler to a strap of his ready harness just behind his hip as its light faded. Raiju hovered just a pace out of reach, prompting Windos to settle both hands firmly around Matau's carved hilt.

The Nautolan lunged.

Windos met the assault with tight, economical parries keeping his elbows tucked in close to his torso. The Force mapped the terrain in his mind as a tangled boundary of thick tree roots to his left and the dark lagoon to his right. Raiju's blade danced, hunting for a gap.

Their sabers locked with a violent hiss. Windos pushed against the resistance until it suddenly vanished, along with the Nautolan's blade. He stumbled forward for a moment, then twisted wildly as a warning knotted his stomach and Raiju reignited his weapon directly inside Windos' original path.

The orange blade glanced across the Miraluka's upper left arm. The cortosis woven into his robes resisted the brief contact, but the heat seared the skin underneath regardless. Hissing through his teeth, Windos dragged Matau back across his body, the top of his blade dragging across Raiju's breastplate in a shower of bright sparks.

Unphased, Raiju drove a heavy boot towards his opponent's knee. Windos turned his leg in an attempt to avoid the impact, but took it to the thigh instead. He stayed upright and answered the blow by driving his shoulder forward. Raiju yielded ground as his boots scraped clumsily over a slick root before recovering his balance behind his blade.

"Careful," Nautolan scoffed. "You'll have to fill out an injury report for me."

That irreverence brought back memories of New Tython with unwelcome clarity. Windos remembered fighting beside this man. Trusting him. Now, Raiju just wanted a victory he could drag into every conversation at the Academy. Windos only wanted him to stop treating their work like a petty contest.

He advanced and Raiju retreated along the twisting roots, carefully placing each step where the rotting wood would bear his weight. Windos continued pressing forward, keeping his cuts tight and efficient. He didn't need to attempt to carve through the phrik alloy of his opponent's armour when a trapped weapon or slip in the mud would finish this cleanly.

"Is that how it works now?" Raiju asked, casually turning aside another strike. "You give an order and everyone just falls in line?"

"I expect you to do your job."

"And there he is."

Windos pressed harder. Raiju abruptly ducked around a massive trunk beside them forcing Windos to pivot sharply, then trust his blackened hand forward.

Jagged lightning crashed against a translucent curve in front of Windos' face. He drew the Force tightly around himself in a protective shell. The raw energy spread widely across the barrier, thinning out into branching threads of intense light. A second burst followed. Then a third.

Windos held his ground.

Frustrated, Raiju changed tactics.

A crushing pressure gathered in the air, but Windos stubbornly refused to give ground. A kinetic blow struck like a massive invisible hammer. The barrier shattered and Windos slammed hard onto one knee in the mud, breath driven from his chest. Raiju's saber followed an instant later. Windos caught the descending blade on Matau and wrenched it wide, sending a shower of charred bark spitting from a tree beside his head.

For a tense moment, they strained against each other as their blades locked inside the tree. Raiju's breathing became ragged and harsh. Part of Windos knew he should wait for the Nautolan to make a mistake but instead blinding anger made the choice for him.

Reaching out with the Force, he tore a waterlogged branch from the shallows and swept it at Raiju's legs.

The Nautolan leapt clear, landing awkwardly on the slick roots farther along the bank. His knee bucked beneath the weight of his armor, but he managed to catch himself against a thick trunk. The heavy branch crashed harmlessly into the lagoon. Beneath the dark surface, something massive displaced the water and slipped silently away into the depths.

Slowly, Windos rose. Taking advantage of the distance between them, he let Matau hang loosely in his left hand and pressed his right palm firmly to the burn on his arm. He channeled the Force to coax the damaged skin closed.

Raiju straightened up. The mocking smile had finally vanished from his face.

The Force stirred around him. A pale, ethereal figure began to gather at his side. Ghostly outlines rapidly acquired substance until heavy unnatural feet pressed down into the mud. The agonizing strain of a dead soul, held in a realm where it no longer belonged, radiated through the damp air.

Drawing his short-handled axe, Raiju offered the weapon hilt first. The wraith accepted it with a spectral hand.

"If nothing else, this one follows instructions," Raiju nodded towards his creation.

The apparition's first sweeping step carried it menacingly towards Windos' left flank. Raiju began his approach from the right, his glowing saber held low beside the dark water. Returning Matau to his dominant hand, Windos shifted his stance. The two attackers were splitting apart to catch him between them.

The fight had gotten interesting, but still could use a little more chaos.

Raiju’s breath was laboured, each inhale was thick with the wet, humid air of the swamp. Mud clung to his boots while his cloak was soaked through, and persistent arches in his muscles warned that Windos was not going to simply fold because the Nautolan wanted him to.

Across the bog, the Miraluka remained a problem. A familiar one, that thankfully hadn’t changed much. A smirk crossed the Nautolan’s lips as his eyes flicked toward the wraith.

It hovered between the combatants, like their own history, showcasing a past that wouldn’t stay buried. The wraith’s unnatural form twisting in the mist, moving unopposed across the uneven terrain. As the battle raged on, Raiju had treated it as an extension of his own, something to supplement his attacks and keep Windos occupied. But the Headmaster wasn’t going to be overcome, he flailed his shield and lightspear between the two threats with deadly accurately despite the two fronts and quickly Raiju realized…this wasn’t going to be enough.

“Fine,” he muttered at the Wraith. “You want him? Have him.”

The Nautolan feigned making way for the Wraith’s attack and the spectral lunged. But rather than withdrawing and giving the wraith the lead, the Nautolan pressed his attack. The pair again rattled against shield and saber as the Headmaster parried their attacks, but the Nautolan followed with a heavy boot against the Miraluka’s chest.

A guttural gasp of surprise and pain followed the Headmaster as he collapsed backwards into the putrid waters of the swamp. Yet, rather than press his own attack, Raiju held his stance and nodded to the spectral to continue. The wraith lunged and Windos was forced to retreat again as it came at him with a renewed aggression that drove him out of the waters further away.

The wraith started to become zealous, its movements erratic and difficult to anticipate, as it struck, then retreated, only to strike again before the Headmaster fully recovered. The pair continued their dance as Raiju raised a hand toward the waters beside them. He shifted his lightsaber off as he turned his focus elsewhere.

His attention became divided.

Sweat poured out of every gland upon his brow and a dull pain at the base of his skull protested the effort. Raiju needed to maintain just enough focus on the Wraith to keep it within the mortal plane, but while he shifted his thoughts to the outstretched hand he then proceeded to gather energy in the palm of the hand.

It started as simply a spark at first. Then it became the size of a marble. The longer Raiju fought the pain in his neck and sweat on his brow, the large the ball became.

The golden orb grew to the size of an apple before Raiju pushed it with his mind out over the waters. Finally, it rested over the area the fallen tree trunk had crashed into the bog. Finally, Raiju strained to keep two thoughts going at once and heard the chopping of the wraith’s axe against the Headmaster’s shield before he closed his eyes and released the energy within the orb.

A blinding light cast shadows across the swamp.

Neither the Headmaster or wraith reacted to the exploring orb, Raiju had to stifle a laugh when he looked quickly at them to confirm. But he lost the smile upon his lips as he was drawn back to the spot in the water. Once again, there was something there and Raiju could sense it through the force.

Something large.

Here fishy…

Then a cry brought the Nautolan’s full attention back to the wraith and Headmaster. Axe raised high above its spectral head, the wraith appeared frozen for a moment. Raiju felt an instant regret as he thought the being was beginning to unravel. His mind darted back to the being while he felt his right knee buckle from the mental strain.

A new ache formed above the Nautolan’s right eye. The connection tore at the edges of his consciousness and his sight became fuzzy. His body screamed at him to stop.

But he held firm.

With a shaky exhale, Raiju opened his eyes. Through a haze, he could make out the Headmaster was once again driven back to the waters edge as the wraith pressed its attack. Then chaos-encarnate was unleashed.

The water erupted.

A massive head burst from the depths. Its jaws opened wide enough to swallow a man whole, enormous fangs flashing through the mist as its enormous body tore free of the water.

The wraith turned towards the new foe instantly.

But it was still too late.

The dragonsnake struck, its jaws closed around the spectral creature. An otherworldly shriek came from the wraith as the creature crashed back into the water.

“Son of a…” Raiju felt the pain at the back of his head release. The connection had snapped and the wraith was gone.

The water thrusted again and slowly the dragonsnake emerged. Its scaled face took only a heartbeat to look Raiju over but then it turned.

Toward Windos.

The creature’s body coiled. Raiju moved. Whatever exhaustion had settled into his limbs vanished beneath instinct. He surged forward, reigniting his lightsaber as the dragonsnake lunged.

Everything moved at half the speed it should have. The orange blade snapped to existence with a distinctive snap-hiss. The dragonsnake’s jaws opened and the beast surged over the Nautolan towards the Headmaster. Raiju charged under the creature’s path and shoved his blade upward.

A shriek came from the creature as it recoiled from its attack, thrashing violently as Raiju drove himself forward along its enormous body. His blade remained held high above his head, slicing the creature open along its belly.

Blood and tissue rained down into the mud and water around Raiju.

The creature continued to recoil back to the water. Raiju planted his feet. Both hands tightened around his hilt, a final cut was struck deep. The dragonsnake’s head collapsed into the puddle between the Nautolan and Headmaster, covering the pair in mud and guts.

The rest of the beast’s corpse sunk back into the depths of the bog.

Silence returned.

Raiju stood three, soaked, breathing heavily. His lightsaber still humming in his hand. He looked down at the dead creature that stared lifelessly towards its intended target.

Then Raiju turned to face the Headmaster.

The Nautolan’s exhaustion was obvious to both of them. His chest rose and fell heavily, his headtresses plastered against his shoulders, and the effort of maintaining the wraith, summoning the orb, and then killing a dragonsnake had left him looking like he had just fought three separate battles.

Raiju deactivated his lightsaber. He stared at Windos for a long moment. Then his familiar grin returned.

“Saved your life,” The Nautolan winked. “Pretty sure that’s an automatic full points in the review.”

“No one gets full marks, Raiju, but it’ll get you an ‘exceeds expectations’.”

Windos crossed towards the wraith's outer shoulder, putting it between himself and Raiju. For a brief moment he felt he had control of the situation. Then the apparition halted its slow advance and Raiju suddenly splashed through the shallows to come around it.

The wraith's axe swept towards Windos' ribs. He brought Matau down to sever the haft, but Raiju's saber caught his blade. Windos twisted away as the axe glanced off his upper left arm. Pain spread through the freshly healed skin.

He forced Raiju's weapon aside and turned on the wraith. It was already withdrawing, leaving the Nautolan room to thrust at the Miraluka's chest.

Windos parried and stepped across another root. The wraith changed direction without a word from its master, coming around behind his left shoulder. He pivoted to meet it and caught Raiju's next cut close enough to feel the heat against his neck.

"Having trouble juggling multiple priorities?" Raiju asked.

Windos drove forward, trying to crowd Raiju against a trunk. The axe hooked towards the back of his knee. He lifted his leg clear, losing the leverage he needed, and Raiju shoved him off balance.

They kept him turning among the roots. When he moved to put one attacker behind the other, the wraith hung back while Raiju pressed him. When he engaged the Nautolan, the axe came in low. Windos' tight guard kept their weapons off him, but every attempt to strike the apparition brought Raiju's blade across his path. His chest ached with each breath and had barely inconvenienced either of them.

The wraith waited for Raiju's next attack, axe held close. Windos tightened his grip and reached past it, pressing against the Nautolan's connection to the Force.

The Nautolan's jaw tightened and head tresses twitched. His saber kept moving, though the effort of sustaining his creation showed in his breathing. The wraith remained solid. It shortened its grip and chopped at Windos' left elbow while Raiju drove a cut towards his head.

Matau caught the saber. Windos tucked his free arm in, but the axe caught his sleeve and bit into the flesh beneath. He held his guard through the sting, struggling to maintain the suppression as both attackers closed again.

Raiju tried to force his blade down. Windos yielded a little, drawing him forward. The Nautolan planted his foot between two roots, favouring the knee that had buckled earlier.

At Windos's side, the wraith raised its axe.

Windos released his pressure on Raiju's connection and seized the axe with the Force. He dragged its descending head sideways into a thick root. The wraith braced a foot against the wood and began wrenching it free.

Windos drove Matau against Raiju's blade, forcing it wide, and rammed his free forearm across the Nautolan's chest. His boot hooked behind the unsteady leg. Raiju's knee folded, dragging a cry out of him as they fell together.

The impact drove the breath from Windos but he recovered quickly and dropped a knee onto Raiju's saber arm, pinning the wrist against a root. The orange blade gouged a smoking groove beside them. Matau's point stopped beneath the Nautolan's jaw.

Behind Windos, the axe scraped free.

"Call it off."

The wraith closed, and Windos sensed the axe rising behind his shoulder. He held his position, pressing the saber's point a fraction closer.

"Hold," Raiju said.

The axe stopped. Windos could still feel the dead soul straining against its tether, waiting at his back. He couldn't turn to defend himself without giving Raiju an opening.

The Nautolan's grip loosened.

"Fine. You win."

The presence behind Windos dissolved. The axe dropped into the mud.

Windos waited for Raiju to extinguish his saber, then moved his knee and stood. Raiju tried to follow, but his leg would not take his weight. He sank back against the roots with a curse.

Windos extinguished Matau and clipped it to his belt, then crouched beside him and eased the injured leg straight.

"You've made your point," Raiju said.

"I'm treating your knee. Hold still."

Windos placed a hand over the armored knee. The Force eased Raiju's pain and began stitching together the hidden damage. Blood trickled down his own forearm but that could wait.

"Winning doesn't mean I agree with you."

"Then you'll have something to say at the meeting."

"And you'll listen?"

Windos paused. On New Tython, he'd trusted Raiju to tell him when a plan was bad. Lately, he'd stopped asking what the objections were before deciding they were insubordination.

"Yes."

He offered his arm and helped Raiju stand. The Nautolan tested the leg, then leaned on him as they started towards firmer ground.

"I'm counting this as my check-in."

"Nice try. And you're filing your own injury report."