Hac shifted his rifle behind him as he squeezed between a narrow gap in the wall, sand raining down from the cracks in the stones above him as he pushed his armored body through.
Emerging on the other side, Hac adjusted his breastplate as he looked around the nearly lightless room, illuminated only by the pale blue haze of the ghastly figures that crept around it. Unclipping his hilts from his belt, he stepped forward, causing the spectres’ to slowly look toward him, their lazy shuffling halting in the presence of a living soul. The Chiss’ red eyes narrowed at the spirits, studying their vacant expressions. After a moment of bated breath, Hac took another step, his thumbs falling to the ignition switch of his weapons, but the ghosts simply continued to watch, making no other movements as their cold eyes followed him. Relaxing his shoulders, Hac walked through the haunt, turning his attention back to his assignment as he ventured further in.
The hallways wound like the tunnels of a Vexis, intersecting and, in some places, circling back to where the path began, a fact that Hac had deduced had entrapped several unfortunate souls given the amount of fresher skeletons that lay scattered throughout the tomb. Stepping over what was left of one such ill-fated adventurer, the hair on the blue skin of Hac’s neck stood tall as he widened his stance, squinting to make out the shapes of a small cast of Hardshells huddled over a pile of bones. Large, protruding blue eyes turned to meet their attacker, snapping their claws in warning at the Chiss as they approached him. Moving to ready his blades, Hac paused, considering that the sound of his lightsabers might tip off the Sith. Counting up his targets, Hac extended his hands, lifting the Hardshells into the air with the Force. Pushing his hands toward each other, the animals followed the motion, chittering in fear as their chitinous bodies pressed together, crushing into a single crunching mass of death and blood before Hac let them drop to the ground.
Still holding his hands out in front of him, Hac froze as he stared at the ball of bodies before him; Something about the sensation of crushing them made him feel… interesting… powerful even... ‘The mission,’ he thought again. ‘I must complete the mission.’ Standing back to full height, Hac turned his mind back to Ellac, sensing the Sith’s presence deeper still within the catacombs. Closing his eyes, Hac focused on his own Force signature, concealing his presence before his eyes opened again, stepping past his kill as he resumed his hunt.
“Anything?” Ellac raised a metal hand to the ear of his helmet as he carefully stepped over a pile of collapsed stone, the servos in his cybernetic limbs whining softly against the ancient corridors.
“Answer: Nothing yet, Master,” HK-98’s voice responded in his ear. “...I am beginning to think the item you’re looking for isn’t here.”
Kneeling to the ground, Ellac lifted a partial skull from the rubble at his feet, holding it up in the darkness. Peering into the eyeless sockets that mirrored his own, Ellac frowned as the bone crumbled to dust in his hand. “It’s here; I can feel it… Keep looking.”
Continuing deeper into the cavernous ruins, the Sith reached out with the Force, sifting through the echoes of the dead’s undying voices until he heard again the call that had drawn him here. The voice was dull, unintelligible, yet unmistakably present, like a word spoken in a dream; Strangest of all, the voice seemed almost familiar… but who had he known, here on this desecrated moon?
Ducking under a half-fallen pillar, Ellac felt the air grow slightly cooler as he stepped into a much larger room than the hallways he had been in thus far. Although the room was pitch-black, Ellac was no stranger to a world of darkness, having grown used to relying on the Force to feel out his surroundings now that his eyes were no longer there to guide him; It wasn’t quite the ‘seeing’ that he had heard was possible through the Force, but it was enough to get him around without stubbing a metal toe on a chair. The room was littered with debris as well as various crates and terminals that were hardly distinguishable from the stone after the years of decay that had claimed these ruins. On the far side of the room, sand mounded up through a hole in the wall that Ellac gathered had probably been a window before the catacombs were buried. Assuming it was just another dead end, the Sith turned to go back the way he came when he felt the call again.
The presence pulsed in the Force from below the dune, drawing on the spirits of the dead as it summoned them in fading waves; Looking back, Ellac watched as humanoid wisps appeared for sporadic moments around the buried window, muttering under their breath the words that clung to their tongues in whatever collective language they all seemed to be speaking before disappearing again.
Reaching up to his ear again slowly for fear of scaring them off, Ellac manually increased the volume on his helmet’s audio receptors to try to make sense of the undead murmurs, but a completely different sound caught his attention. Spinning on his heel to face the approaching footsteps, the spectres vanished as Ellac held a metal hand out to his side, summoning his lightsaber as its twin blades howled to life in his grasp. “HK, we’re not alone down here…”
“Query: Are you certain, Master? I find it hard to believe that someone else would be crazy enough to deliberately explore these ruins,” HK-98’s metallic voice came over the communicator.
Ellac’s hairless brows furrowed as he reached through the Force, unable to sense the source of the footsteps. “There is someone else down here, but I can’t sense them...”
A short pause preceded the droid’s response. “Statement: Uh… It’s not that I don’t believe you, Master. It’s just that…,” HK paused again, considering his words. “I know how you organics get around ancient, buried graveyards…”
Ellac ignored his droid, listening to the steps move closer before suddenly stopping just outside the room. A brief moment of passed and the catacombs fell deathly silent, save for the growling hum of the Sith’s lightsaber. A moment longer, and then the still boots shifted, grinding in the dust as the mysterious figure ducked under the pillar, stepping into the darkness now bathed in the crimson light of Ellac’s double-blade.
“That’s far enough,” Ellac said, glaring towards the stranger in the darkness. “Who are you?”
The telling snap-hiss of a pair of lightsabers was the only response to the cyborg’s question as Hac widened his stance. Turning his mind to the battle ahead, the Chiss let his concealment fall, unmasking his presence in the Force.
Ellac narrowed his eyeless socket at his opponent as he recognized his foe. “Eeno?” he asked. ‘No,’ He corrected himself. ‘Eeno’s presence was different… And I didn’t have any trouble sensing him before.’
“I’m not Eeno,” Hac said plainly before lunging at Ellac with an overhead strike.
Spinning on the balls of his feet, Ellac sidestepped the attack, swinging one end of his blade toward Hac’s head, then twisting the hilt in his hand to bring the other end around.
Hac stepped closer, using his defensive form to block then parry the Sith’s attacks, driving his shoulder into Ellac’s chest, staggering him. Extending a hand, Hac reached out through the Force, attempting to exert his control over Ellac’s body, but the power failed to affect him.
“Nice try.” Regaining his footing, Ellac extended his own hand, using the Force to constrict the Chiss’ airway as he forced Hac to his knees. “Now, you can either tell me who you are or I can pull the answers out of your lifeless body; Your choice.”
Choking against the unseen grasp on his throat, Hac steeled himself, channeling the Force through his whole body in a surge that broke Ellac’s grip on him. Ellac’s arm jerked back as if it had been pushed away as Hac took a quick breath before thrusting his hands forward, throwing Ellac back with a mighty push. The Juggernaut slammed into the carved stone wall that trembled with the impact, shaking the whole ruin as whole chunks of rocks and sand showered from the ceiling, collapsing the pillar that had served as their entrance to the now sealed room.
Coughing for air as they struggled back to their feet, the two opponents warily peered up at the ancient walls that threatened to bury them here forever.
"but it was not for him to understand. All that is for him to do is the mission. Hac defended into the cavern and his eyes adjusted quickly to the darker light" Try not to switch tenses (was to is). Also, "defended" should be "descended". Additionally, this is a bit of a run on sentence. The "and" could have been a period, with capitalization adjusted as appropriate.
"As Hac explored the caverns it was initially quiet other than a periodic drip of water from the ceiling and the landscape was barren but of rubble" Missing commas between "cavern" and "it" as well as between "quiet" and "other". This is also a run on. The and could have been a period.
"he could tell where this almost voice was coming from "
A comma on either side of this would have made the sentence flow better
The post ends with a floating "I'm"