Tyron was furious that Lucyeth had the nerve to comment on his scar and the Taldryanite was using his rage to overwhelm his opponent with relentless barrages of attacks. Lucyeth thought the battle was over … as had Tyron himself. He was disappointed that he hadn't been able to finish off his fallen opponent, but he knew victory was near. Lucyeth's survival had extracted a heavy toll: he was breathing in ragged gasps now, his shoulders slumping. Tyron rushed Lucyeth again. This time, however, the Battlemaster didn't back away. He stepped forward with a quick thrust, switching from Form III to the more precise and aggressive Form II. Tyron was caught off guard by the unexpected maneuver and was a microsecond slow in recognizing the change. His parry attempt knocked the tip of the blade away from his chest, only to have it slice across his right shoulder. The blade had only caused a minor flesh wound but either way his right hand was now useless Lucyeth howled in victorious laughter, and Tyron screamed in pain as his Lightsaber slipped to the ground from his suddenly nerveless fingers. Mindlessly, Tyron used his other hand to shove his opponent in the chest, Lucyeth reeled backward, and Tyron rolled away to safety. Scrambling to his feet, Tyron extended his left hand to the Lightsaber lying on the ground three meters away. It sprang up and into his palm, and he once again assumed the ready position, his right arm dangling uselessly at his side; the weapon felt awkward and clumsy as he held it. Left-handed, he was no match for Lucyeth. The fight was over. His opponent sensed it, as well. "Defeat is bitter, Sith," he growled in Basic, his voice deep and menacing. "I have bested you; you have lost." He was taunting Tyron, humiliating him. "Foolish Journeyman, you were never a match for me. You have failed" Lucyeth said with a menacing chuckle."
No!" Tyron screamed, thrusting his good hand out palm-forward even as Lucyeth leapt in to finish him off. Dark side energy erupted from his open palm to catch his opponent in midair, hurling him back to the edge of the tree where he landed on the ground. The Sith Knight slowly clenched his fist and rose to his feet. On the ground before him, Lucyeth was writhing in agony, clutching at his throat and gasping for breath. Unlike the Palentinite, Tyron had nothing to say to his helpless opponent. He squeezed his fist harder, feeling the Force rushing through him like a divine wind as he crushed the life out of his foe. Fohargh's heels pounded out a staccato rhythm on the temple's stone roof as his body convulsed. He began to gurgle, and pink froth welled up from between his lips. A final surge of power roared up in the core of Tyron's being and exploded out into the world. In response, Lucyeth's body went stiff and his eyes rolled back in his head. Tyron released his hold on the Force and his fallen enemy, and the Humans body went limp as the last vestiges of life ebbed away.
Should be a second comma after hurt and Tyron, since the sentence modifies the way the dialogue is being delivered. This should also create a page-break for the next line.
The sheet that was on file when you start the match is what you reference. I'm being lenient on this match, but remember that you always go with the sheet on record with the match itself.
Show me this. Don't just tell me about this. Knees buckling. Soresu is a purely defensive form, and despite the height/weight difference, Lucyeth is a better Saberist (+4 vs +3), almost as strong (Might +2 vs +3) so it's not really accurate to say he's easily overpowered by an aggressive style like Djem So.
Lightsaber*