The Onderonian took his eyes off his surroundings for only a moment and reached into the smaller inner pocket of his coat to retrieve a cigarette and a lighter. He exhaled a bit of smoke, scanned for threats with silver eyes and returned the device to his pocket; all the while reflecting on just how he had managed to return to the planet.
The previous time the Assassin had travelled to Nar Shaddaa, Celevon had been an Aedile sent to retrieve his Quaestor after the events of the war had taken their toll on the man. Turel had changed after his time spent there and eventually returned to his home on New Tython.
This time, however, he was retrieving someone for an entirely different purpose.
Less than a week prior to his trip, he had been informed that a member of Shadow Gate had not checked in with the Gate Warden with their whereabouts unknown and with a little free time decided to see to it himself. Whilst searching the locations on Port Ol’val where the Sith had been known to frequent, Celevon had heard from those close to the Kaleesh that Rrogon had learned of a former lover possibly being sold in the slave trade. The investigation from those within the Dajorra Intelligence Agency and the Assassin’s own investigation revealed that the Kaleesh Juggernaut’s own search had led to Nar Shaddaa. Upon reporting his findings to the Shadow Lady, the Quaestor had been ordered to locate and aid Rrogon in his self-appointed task - Celevon was only to make certain that the Kaleesh did not reveal the fact that he was a Force User or lead enemies back to Arconan Space.
The Assassin had immediately grabbed his gear and prepared for the journey, though the sniper rifle was left behind due to the fact that it wasn’t designed with concealability in mind. Remembering something from his last trip to the Smuggler’s Moon, Celevon had detached the scope and slipped it into his pocket.
Celevon pulled the scope free of the longer inner pocket, idly taking note of the fact that it could easily be mistaken for the hilt of a lightsaber unless closely scrutinized. After checking the most likely places where a sniper’s nest would be set up and flicking away the spent cigarette, the Quaestor turned the lens towards the crowd. Thankfully, the black huk mask made the Kaleesh stand out from the rest, no matter his attire.
The Onderonian stopped and panned back, catching sight of his wayward member as the Juggernaut ducked into a building. The Assassin quickly tucked the scope away, mercurial gaze searching for the quickest route to the streets. The stairs or lift to ‘ground’ level within the building itself would take too much time and was immediately discarded. It took a few moments and several failed attempts to find the viable path. The problem?
The closest access point to that route was the rooftop of an adjacent building - the distance between the two was longer than Celevon was tall. The Onderonian stepped as far away from the ledge as possible, inhaling deeply. He exhaled and took off at a run, propelling himself into a leap from the edge of the building. What occurred in a matter of seconds seemed to take a lifetime to pass.
Both fear and excitement sent adrenaline rushing through the Assassin’s veins as the edge of the building he was aiming for drew ever closer. His gut clenched as he realized that he wasn’t going to make it.
The time seemed to return to a normal speed as Celevon’s chest slammed into the edge of the roof, knocking the breath out of him as his hands instinctively clenched on the ledge. He took a deep breath and pulled himself up just enough to plant his feet before the Onderonian leapt sideways, hands tightened around the pole of a banner. As he reached the apex of the swing, the Assassin let go, body curving gracefully in the air before he began to fall.
The blood in his veins sang as the wind rushed against his ears, free falling over a story before grabbing another pole. Without consciously realizing it, a wide grin had curved his lips as he swung to the next. Celevon carefully timed the next few so he continued the gradual downward trajectory. Before he realized what had happened, his boots thudded against the top of a stack of crates. Ignoring the reactions of those he had startled with his landing, the Quaestor began running, darting to and fro as he wove his way through the crowd.
Within moments, he had reached the doorway and continued to run, hearing the distant sounds of combat. The Onderonian withheld a groan, spotting bodies sporting distinctive burns from both blaster bolts and a lightsaber.
As he rounded a corner and stopped in his tracks, Celevon caught sight of the Kaleesh raising the yellow blade of his lightsaber for a killing blow. Swiftly drawing one of his pistols, the Assassin took careful aim and depressed the trigger. The slug ricocheted off of the wall and struck the top of the hilt, sending the weapon spinning from Skar’s hand.
The Juggernaut spun around, drawing his pair of DL-44 blaster pistols and brought them to bear, pausing as he recognized his Quaestor. The Sith growled deep in his throat. “Why did you do that, Edraven?”
With a few quick steps, the Onderonian was within feet of Rrogon, an icy glare aimed at the Kaleesh. As the slaver began thanking Celevon for saving his life, the Assassin almost dismissively lifted and discharged his weapon, spattering the wall with crimson and gray matter. Whilst he had come to respect life more in the past several months, there was a short list of those he wouldn’t hesitate with - Slavers were one of them.
“Just what the frack do you think you’re doing?” The Quaestor growled back as he grabbed the Juggernaut’s lightsaber and slid it into his coat pocket, right beside the scope. “Whether it’s the Brotherhood or Arcona, we do our jobs and do not leave evidence that could lead back to us. We cannot burn the entire building down to destroy the obvious lightsaber wounds without risking the lives of innocents! For frack’s sake, Skar, I thought you were smarter than this!”
Syntax
There's a lot going on in that paragraph, and that sentence in particular. For flow and readability, I'd trim it down or break it up slightly with punctuation. This is one possibility. I'm not dinging you, this is just a suggestion.
Story This was a nice setup. My benchmark for a first post is that I want to be able to read it and say "This is a story about X" - if it doesn't sound like a bunch of other ACC matches, that's a good thing. The premise is very similar to your match with Turel, but you acknowledge that and play off of it, and since Turel and Rrogon are very different characters in Nar Shadaa for very different reasons, I expect this match will stand on its own just fine.
I really enjoyed the last two paragraphs. Everything about them just screams Arcona.
Realism
You didn't yell "Parkour!" That horrible failing aside, you made excellent use of your Feats in this passage. I would assume that shooting the top off of a lightsaber would end really, really badly, but since we see them sliced apart in Canon pretty regularly I think you're well within the bounds of Realism here.
Continuity No errors.