Lying on his back, Lavanth held his destroyed pistol out in front of him so he’d be able to see it. With a vexing sigh, he rolled over, pushed himself up to one knee, looked again at his now useless weapon, and tossed it aside.
“You owe me a new pistol.” The Hunter stated.
Armad just stood there, unfazed by the comment, ignited lightsaber in hand, but held loosely at his side. Every muscle poised to react to whatever this young Jedi had planned next. The Battlemaster figured that he would try to use whatever bullets were left in his remaining pistol. Being about three meters away, Armad was confident in his ability to redirect any shots that Lavanth may be able to get off, with his lightsaber.
Armad studied his opponent as he slowly start to rise to his feet, watching to see if he could figure out the Togruta’s next move. If he hadn't have been watching for it, he would have missed Lavanth’s right arm flick up as he started firing slugs in seemingly random directions. Or at least that's what it seemed like until Armad got a sense of danger coming from behind him and realized that some of those wild shots were ricocheting off some of the skeletal remains. The danger felt like it was coming from two different directions. Armad felt a surge of anger at not seeing that coming, and knowing that he wouldn't be able to create a barrier in time, the Sith chose to spin out of the path of one of the slugs and redirect the other away with his lightsaber.
While his back was turned, the young Jedi utilized the distraction and turned, running further into the Rancor graveyard, possibly searching for the datapad that he’d been tasked with retrieving.
Picking up and throwing another large bone towards the fleeing Jedi, the Sith took off running after. As the thrown bone was reaching it’s zenith, the Hunter pointed his pistol back, firing several shots in the Battlemaster’s direction. After a few shots, Lavanth quickly pointed his pistol at the falling bone, fired off a shot, then brought it back down to continued firing at Armad. Picking off each individual slug as it neared him, the Umbaran assumed that the upwards shot was a result in his concentration faltering for a second while trying to look for the datapad, running away, and shooting at him. He realized his mistake when he felt a quick sting and pain of a slug entering one's shoulder. He also experienced the blowback of that slug as it tore into his left shoulder, causing him to stumble just enough that he lost his focus for the briefest of moments. It was during that stumble that his defenses waned just enough that one of Lavanth’s slugs made it past his defenses and hit him in the right leg. This caused him to stumble hard to the ground, sliding on his right shoulder for a couple of feet before stopping. The dust cloud that was kicked up was enough that it obscured his vision for a few moments until it dissipated.
Armad could feel the anger welling up once more, so he used that to dull the pain caused from getting shot. Getting to his feet, Armad winced at the slight pain from the bruised muscles in his shoulder and leg. He spotted Lavanth still searching, running from skeleton to skeleton, looking for that cursed datapad.
“Enough of this.” The Umbaran growled to himself. Flexing his left arm in front of him, the Battlemaster pulled on the Force, focusing it within his left hand until he could feel and see sparks of electricity start to arc between his fingers. When he felt it was time, Armad thrust his arm out releasing the lightning from his hand and sent it streaking across the distance between himself and Lavanth. The lightning struck the Togruta square in the back, arcing across his body, making him arch his back and fall to his knees.
Taking a small measure of glee in the fact that he’d caused his opponent pain, Armad started to limp towards his kneeling prey. Each step causing the dull ache to renew. Lavanth was slow to regain his feet, and when he turned around, he had his lightsaber in hand. Armad continued limping towards the Togruta, unclipping his own lightsaber from his belt. The Battlemaster witnessed the Hunter shake off the last of the Force lightning aftereffects, preparing himself for a lightsaber duel that he was clearly not ready for.
Smirking, Armad took immense pleasure in the pain that he was about to inflict on this young Jedi. When he saw him take up a firm stance, igniting and holding his lightsaber in two hands in front of his body. Armad recognised the basic form, used only by those who had not been found worthy of Knighting. “Oh, this was going to be so easy.” Armad thought to himself. With this knowledge, the Umbaran knew that he could somewhat divide his attention between the duel and searching for that datapad. Expanding his senses out to the surrounding area, Armad was able to pick up on a hand bone of one of the rancor skeletons that seemed askew more so from the others around it. Focusing more on that area, the Tech Weaver could sense that there was something electronic hidden there.
Bringing his full attention back to the young Jedi, and not wanting to drag this out any longer, and being in a bit of pain, Armad decided to just end the battle. Once he was in range, the Umbaran ignited his lightsaber and started to test the Togruta’s abilities and defenses. He started out slow, measured thrusts and strikes to gauge his opponent’s skill level, gradually increasing the speed of his attacks until he saw his opening. Lavanth over-extended himself, giving Armad the opportunity to thrust forward, stabbing him in the right shoulder, causing him to drop his lightsaber. The Battlemaster jumped to one side, slashing the Odanite along their left thigh.
As Lavanth fell to the ground in pain, Armad disengaged his lightsaber, clipped it back on his belt and walked over to where he’d sensed the datapad. Uncovering it, he picked it up, looked it over real quick, then stuffed it into a pocket of his overcoat. Looking back at the Togruta, who was struggling to get back to his feet, Armad wanted to see if this defeat would make him strong. The Sith relished the opportunity for a rematch.
“Learn from this, come find me someday, and I’ll teach you another lesson. Young Jedi.” Armad challenged, then turned and limped away, back to his waiting transport….and some bacta patches.
Syntax
"Dead" what? Should either have a noun or be "the dead".
Should be "Somewhere [in] this [...]" and "god forsaken" should be one word or hyphenated.
'So-and-so thought' functions much the same way 'he said' does, so you should use a comma in the quotations instead of a period. You do this far more often than I point out here.
Probably meant for this to be one sentence, so "The" doesn't need a capital. Additionally the sentence flow is awkward.
Repetitious use of "someone", try to vary it up.
Don't need the capital on "He".
Semicolons are for separate sentences that connect through an adverb or transitional phrase. This isn't the case here.
If you're continuing the sentence with a comma you don't really have to capitalize "Care".
Realism
A very important factor in the ACC is that the dossier weapon loadout is ignored in favor of the match loadout. For this match, you brought "My wrench and droids" while your opponent brought "what is on character sheet". With that in mind, this is a Realism hit against you for each weapon from your CS you use that isn't a wrench or a droid.
Careful writing like this. You have +2 Blinding which requires half your concentration to use outside of combat, and all of it during combat. You should be describing that focus in your writing.
His name is "Armad".