Inyri coughed repeatedly from the addition of the container’s fumes to the sulfur already in the air. It had been a gamble, but one that seemed to pay off as she looked for her opponent. Something about this place was causing her blood to boil, and it had nothing to do with the ambient temperature, but whatever it was, it was only barely registering in her mind, her focus entirely squared in on defeating Aul. Stepping off, Inyri had her DL-44 up and following her gaze in a standard two-handed grip, the blaster pistol’s muzzle always tracking the same direction as her eyes.
As she stepped, the volcanic rock, ash and now twisted metal crunching under foot, Inyri began to develop a feeling in the bottom of her gut, one that told her to duck now. By the time she recognized it for what it was and actually ducked, Inyri felt searing pain and then the report of a blaster pistol from behind her, her right shoulder was clipped by a blue blaster bolt. Inyri rolled onto her back to see Aul having leaned out from the wreckage, a smoking DC-17 pistol in hand. He had masked his approach with the chaos of the explosion settling, and Inyri’s slower reaction speed to capitalize on it.
Inyri raised her pistol and fired trio of blasts to force Aul back behind cover, which had the intended effect of Aul disappearing back into the wreckage of the ship he had been blown into. She scrambled back to her feet, seething in pain from the blaster bolt grazing her shoulder, and stepped backwards, trying to keep her weapon trained on where Aul had popped out.
“You can’t deny that the Force told you I was going to shoot you,” Aul said from the ancient wreck, “That alone proves that the Force and fate have a will you have to accept.”
“No. It was a warning, but neither willed you to shoot me in the back. That was your choice!” Inyri shouted back in frustration, “And if you think I’m the limited one, look in the mirror at the man who thinks himself a slave to fate and the Force!”
“You are willfully blinding yourself to your own potential, and that will be your undoing,” Aul replied calmly.
Inyri dropped down behind a hunk of twisted metal that looked strong enough to withstand blaster fire, and looked to her shoulder. Blood was seeping though the gap torn through her jacket and shirt, slowed only by the sheer heat of the bolt also semi-cauterizing the wound. Her attention was snapped back to the sound of the Knight’s lightsaber igniting close to her, and she snapped up her pistol in that direction, but there was nothing. Inyri frowned as she looked around, certain she heard something close to her.
Inyri slowly stood up to move from her current cover to another when she heard the same sound behind her, near where she had been shot. She spun around to see Aul standing there with his lightsaber at the ready. On reflex, she fired a pair of bolts at him, but just as before, both shots were batted harmlessly aside.
“You think you’re so righteous because you have the Force, I know how to fight without it.” Inyri snarled as she backed away, holding her pistol up with one hand, the strain of keeping her right arm was becoming more than she could bear. Her icy blue eyes narrowed in determination as she stared at Aul, focusing on making him eat those words. Aul simply lowered his lightsaber.
“You’re tired and hurt, you want to end this and admit defeat,” Aul said as he waved his hand.
“Don’t presume to tell me my intentions,” Inyri replied with a scowl, leveling her pistol on the Knight once more. Aul arched an eyebrow, but he recognized when someone had dampened his grasp on the Force. He brought up his lightsaber once more, the humming blue and white blade illuminating his face.
“Your resolve is strong, I’ll give you that much. But without control and without accepting the Force’s guidance, you will face defeat after defeat until you meet your end, and whatever you hoped to accomplish will be long forgotten, just as you will be,” Aul said, stepping towards Inyri with his lightsaber raised at the ready.
“And your arrogance will be your downfall long after I’m gone,” Inyri shuffled backwards, “You presume to know my fate after barely meeting me, you presume to believe that because I accept responsibility for my actions and that I don’t give myself to fate or the Force, I’m going to fail.”
Inyri started to raise her pistol to fire again when Aul broke into a run with speed that was unbelievably fast, and as his saber faded in disengagement, Inyri’s head was once again introduced to the Knight’s booted foot, this time in the form of a roundhouse kick. Inyri was knocked to the ground, the impact of both the kick and the landing almost rattling her teeth.
Inyri’s head was swimming at this point, her vision was starting to go fuzzy from the second blow to the head, but her own determination and building anger were trying desperately to fight through her body’s insistence to shut down. Her right leg launched out to try and slam her boot into Aul’s groin, followed by her left leg trying to catch him in the shin to knock him to the ground, but neither connected as Aul was no longer standing where she thought he was.
“I presume nothing. I know. I also know that this fight is finished, and you have much to learn. If you actually do learn anything or continue to fall, well, that’s up to you,” Aul said and then kicked Inyri across the head. Inyri’s body went slack as she lost all consciousness.
Syntax:
Other than the dodgy sentence in this sentence, this was a very strong introduction to the setting.
That first bit can function on its own as a complete sentence, so it gets a semicolon.
Story:
I have a few things I look for in an intro post. Why are you here? Why is he here? Why are you two fighting? Why do I care? As a NV3 you don't have a whole lot of history with Aul to pull on just yet, but you did a very solid job establishing the setting and the nature of the conflict.
Realism:
Generally we consider +3 the level where Force Powers are ready for instant use like that. That put you in kind of a tight spot in the match, but it's something to keep in mind now that you can play around with JM-level Powers. +2 is usable, but only with a good few seconds of build-up.
Continuity:
No errors.