Turel’s head throbbed as he knelt down to pick up the remaining DL-44 and keycard. The Jedi had to throw a hand down to the ground to keep from falling over until vertigo passed. Having one’s temple bashed by the rifle butt of a particularly surly Gamorrean guard tended to cause such side effects.
“Are you okay?” inquired the High Councilor’s unlikely Pantoran ally.
The Sentinel blinked slowly as he stood up. “I will be as soon as we get out of here, which is easier said than done.”
Turel mentally reviewed the situation while Laren posted himself against the wall near the room’s only entrance, occasionally peeking into the hallway. They were in the palace’s dungeon level, which was actually where he needed to be for his mission. Time was against them; the unconscious guards on the floor would likely be missed soon. When the alarm sounded in the palace they would get swarmed by a small army of guardsmen and mercenaries. In other words their odds of survival would go to near zero. Laren seemed capable enough, but even a highly trained soldier and Jedi couldn’t take on an army by themselves.
“We going to get our gear or just wait here for their friends to show up?” Laren quipped with impatience as he drew the blaster from his waistband.
The Sentinel paused for a moment to memorize all the details of the unconscious Twi’lek’s face; he would likely need those details along with the singsong way she spoke Huttese later. They would likely live longer if they held off on shooting until it was absolutely needed.
“Yeah, let’s go. You seem to have some military training, you take lead and I’ll cover your rear.”
Laren’s golden eyes squinted as he studied Turel for a moment. Experience taught him that Force-users viewed people like him as meat shields and disposable tools, but there was a genuine modicum of respect in the older man’s voice. Besides, he had little choice but to trust the Human. They needed each other to survive and they both knew it.
“Alright, Jedi, let’s go get your saber back so you can be useful. I’d rather not get shot in the back, even if it is an accident.” Laren punctuated his sentence with a smirk as he turned to scan the hallway one last time.
“Hey! I know how to use this. I wasn’t always a Jedi ya know.”
The pair moved across the cramped dungeon hallway to the opposite stone wall. They stood back to back to cover both avenues of approach.
“Hold up a second.” Turel pulled out the keycard and locked the room behind them. “Don’t want those two waking up and causing us trouble later on.”
The Pantoran mercenary nodded with approval as his gaze returned to his side of the corridor. The Jedi has some sense about him. We might make it out of this after all.
Laren came to a T-intersection and discreetly scanned both sides. A guard station was directly to their left and a stairwell was to their right. He motioned for Turel to come to his position.
The Pantoran whispered as not to give them away,“The guard station is to the left. I see two Weequay and a droid.”
Turel had a profound look of disappointment on his face. His illusions wouldn’t work on the droid. “What kind of droid is it?”
“Looks like a protocol droid of some sort, probably administrative in nature.”
“That droid is going to be a problem. I can’t really use the Force on a droid.” Turel tapped his lip in thought. “If I create a distraction for the two guards do you think you can stun them before they can raise the alarm?”
“Stun them...right,” the Pantoran guffawed. “I can take them out, don’t worry about that. Just do whatever you’re to do quickly.”
Turel shook his head as he motioned for Laren to step back so he could peer down the hall. He wasn’t pleased with creating a body count for this mission...but desperate times called for desperate measures. There were two Weequay guards lounging at the station as Laren had described. One was sitting at a console and the other was discussing something with the silver protocol droid. Okay, Turel, time to improvise.
The Sentinel pictured the Twi’lek from earlier in his mind as clearly as he could. Then he pictured her naked. Few things worked as a better distraction than the female form. He fought through his still throbbing head to reach through the currents of the Force and touch the minds of the two guards. They had to see the same thing at the same time or this wouldn’t work. Here goes nothing.
The shocked voices of both guards drifted down the hallway.
“Whoa, Leela, what are you doing here?”
“Where are your clothes?”
“You want both of us?”
Turel tapped Laren on the shoulder to signal it was time to move. The Pantoran rounded the corner to find both guards standing up with their backs to him and a very confused protocol droid. He lined up his blaster for a headshot at the Weequay closest to the console and slowly squeezed the trigger. The crimson bolt illuminated the sandstone hallway as it traveled and found its mark. The guard slumped chest-first to the floor with a charred crater in the back of his head. Laren traversed the pistol to the second guard who had only started to turn around. He had less time to aim so he went for a center-mass shot. The Pantoran held his breath at the mid-point, focused his dominant eye and squeezed the trigger. The second guard flew backward into a nearby locker with a smoking black hole in his chestpiece.
The protocol droid threw his hands up into the air in a panicked fashion. “Oh, my heavens! The prison—" He was cut off by an invisible shove throwing him into a wall. With the illusion broken by the first shot, Turel had rounded the corner to disable the droid. The unlikely allies ran down the hall to the guard station.
The Jedi pointed his blaster at the cowering droid while the mercenary searched the dead guards. “Where is Sirca Kirra? Male Zabrak, tan skin, about my height. I know you have him down here. Speak up now, rust bucket, or you’re next.”
“The prisoner you describe is in Cell Besh, but he is scheduled for public execution in—" The droid was cut off by Turel firing a bolt into the droid’s head.
“The execution is canceled.”
“That wasn’t very Jedi-like,” Laren remarked matter-of-factly as he rummaged through storage lockers. “I found your gear.”
Turel ignored the quip as he raced down the hall to the right cell. It was just a machine, after all. He swiped the keycard on the door to Besh Cell. As the metal door slid open, he saw his mission objective crumpled on the floor in the fetal position. The once proud Zabrak agent had seen better days, his face and shirtless torso covered in bruises and burn marks, one of his eyes was swollen shut and a trail of dried blood ran from his mouth to his chin. The Jedi winced, as he knew Hutt hospitality all too well; in darker days past he was one giving those beatings.
The Sentinel rushed into the cell, knelt down and cradled the Zabrak’s head in his arms. “Sirca, can you hear me? I’m getting you out of here.”
Sirca’s good eye blinked with hesitation as he coughed before speaking in barely above a whisper, “Councilor Sorenn? Is that you? Why are you here? You shouldn’t be here; you’re too important.” He coughed again, “You damn fool.”
Turel knew he was a fool for risking his life for one of his Sentinel Network agents. The High Councilor untaking a mission of this nature was beyond idiotic. He had ordered the mission that Sirca was captured on. He ordered the mission on bad intelligence and felt responsible for extracting the Zabrak himself. SenNet protocol said extraction was too risky, but he didn’t care. He wasn’t going to abandon someone to torture and death because of his bad decision. “Shh, you can yell at me all you want when we get back to HQ. Can you stand?”
“I think so.”
Laren appeared at the cell door. “Friend of yours?”
“You could say that. He’s coming with us.” Turel’s voice carried a certainty that the mercenary dared not question.
The Pantoran exhaled in resignation. “Here’s your stuff.” He threw a bag of gear at the High Councilor. Turel gave Sirca the DL-44 and quickly clipped his lightsaber to his belt and donned his dart launcher.
Laren moved into the hallway. “The hanger is on the ground level up those stairs. We’ll likely encounter some more resistance, so stay close. I won’t wait for you.”
“Understood.”
Turel helped Sirca to his feet and allowed the injured Zabrak to lean on him. The Sentinel reached his left arm across the operative’s back and kept his saber in his free right hand. Sirca held the blaster in his free left hand as he reached across Turel’s back with his right arm.
“If it comes to it, leave me behind. I’m half-dead already,” the Zabrak agent stated in an almost pleading tone.
“I don’t want to hear any more of that talk, and that’s an order, agent. I’m not giving your husband a flag, is that understood?”
“Yes, sir.”
Turel had never been comfortable using the ‘soldier voice’ to give orders, but he knew it had its uses.
The trio carefully made their way up the stairs into a servant’s area of the palace. The hallway apparently lacked the elegant and tacky decor of the main areas, but artwork of the various Hutt patrons who had called the palace home still adorned the walls. Their stern visages served as a reminder to the servants who used these corridors, who was really the boss around here. As they made their way toward the hangar, an alarm started to blare.
“Well, I guess our luck just ran out,” Laren remarked as he picked up his pace. “The hanger is just ahead; we need to steal a ship quickly before they lock the place down.”
“Oh, no can do. Stealing is against the Jedi code I’m afraid,” Turel stated flatly.
Laren spun around with a frown. “Are you serious?”
“Of course not, I’m not keen to become one with the Force just yet. Lead on.”
The men slipped into the landing bay as a flock of droids and engineers scattered to their hiding places of choice. So far, so good, Laren thought to himself as he quickly scanned the bay for a ship they could hijack. Turel set Sirca against a crate while he took the keycard to seal the door behind them.
Laren and Turel, both dove behind cover as the ramp for a Firespray-class patrol craft in the center of the room, hit the durasteel floor with a clank. A Kaleesh and Devaronian in matching crimson Mandalorian armor walked down the ramp.
“You’re such an idiot, Sorno,” the Kaleesh hissed at his companion. “I knew I heard an alarm.”
“Oh, I’m sorry I doubted the senses of the great warrior chieftain, Jarg,” the Devaronian snarked back as he cradled a heavy repeater.
Jarg threw up a hand as he reached the bottom of the ramp. “I smell something.”
“Of course you smell something, it’s a Hutt palace. It’s going to smell like a Wookiee who’s been diving in Bantha dung for a week.”
“No, I smell blood. We are not alone.”
Laren peered over the crate he was hiding behind to survey the two newcomers. They were heavily armed Mandalorian warriors. The Kaleesh had vibroblades, a flamethrower and a sniper rifle slung on his back. The Devaronian had a TL-50 heavy repeater, a bandoleer of various grenades and a vibroblade on his hip. Both warriors had the classic Mandalorian jetpack on their armor. This wasn’t going to be an easy fight; even with a Jedi and another blaster at his back, the Pantoran did not like his odds. They had no choice though. That ship was their ticket to freedom and those Mandos stood in their way.
You got hit with a Major Realism detractor here. Turel has a Telepathy power of +2, a +3 is required to communicate with Non Force Users.
Minor Syntax issue here, at the end with the 'within the her speech'. I'm assuming this was meant to be 'heard speech' or 'within her speech'
Comma splice here, a semi-colon would be much more appropriate.
Minor syntax, an unnecessary comma here, no need for it.
Again, unnecessary comma.
A good setup for a co-op mission with a few minor issues with commas, and one major one with the misuse of Telepathy. Otherwise, solid start.