Competition: [GJW XIV Event Long] Fiction - Small Team Co-op Fiction

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[GJW XIV Event Long] Fiction - Small Team Co-op Fiction
This competition is in the [GJW XIV Event Long] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 6 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 14.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

Inquisitorious field agents report that the Collective fleet assaulting Arx appears to be led by Ghafa Ordam of Capital Enterprises aboard the Dreadnaught Ocaejar. Intercepted comms chatter suggests that other high-ranking Collective targets are present in the warzone, but the Dark Council has prioritized breaking the Collective’s chain of command. Key to that is neutralizing Ordam’s ability to coordinate the attack.

You have been tasked by the Dark Council to form a small team capable of infiltrating the Ocaejar and capturing or killing Ghafa Ordam. Secondary objectives include obtaining intelligence on Collective battleplans and securing any available Collective encryption ciphers. Finally, destroying the Ocaejar itself could deal a serious blow to the Collective’s operations and morale.

Dark Brotherhood forces in orbit around Arx are spread too thin to directly attack the Collective command ship, but the Inquisitorious may be able to provide assistance with infiltration and extraction.

Rules

This is a co-op fiction, meaning two to three members will participate in writing a single, cohesive fiction.

This competition will award up to 4 bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions.

Grading will be based on the fiction rubric with a few additional requirements:

  • Submissions: Teams must submit two copies, one "clean" document (without comments or track changes) for reading in PDF, .doc, or .docx format as well as a second "annotated" version where all writers' contributions are clearly marked using comments and Track Changes (in Microsoft Word) or by "Version History" in Google documents. Edits and comments in the "annotated" document must be clearly attributable to a team member.
    If using Word: for the "annotated" version, submissions must be made in .doc or .docx format with all tracked changes and comments visible.
    If using Google docs: you must share the document with the event organizers by clicking the blue "Share" button in the top-right corner of the screen and entering their email addresses. Be sure to give full "editing" access when sharing the document (you will see a dark grey pencil icon to the right of the email address entry box). Include a link to your Google doc at the beginning of your "clean" copy.

  • Teams: Teams must be made up of two or three people. You must identify your team members by name and dossier number at the top of your document along with links to character sheet snapshots for each team member. You can create and find manual snapshots by going to the "Possessions and Loadouts" link in your admin menu and selecting the "snapshots" tab.

  • Word count: Each writer must contribute at least 500 words total and a roughly equal proportion of the total word count. For example, each member of a two-person team must contribute approximately 50% of the total word count, whereas each member of a three-person team must contribute approximately one-third of the total. A writer's substantive edits and comments will be considered when evaluating whether they contributed a sufficient proportion of the document.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XIV: Homefront
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, Ciara Tearnan Rothwell Tarentae
Running time
2020-05-30 until 2020-07-08 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
73 subscribers, of which 49 have participated.
Results
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
GJW Coop Fiction-Life Day CAME Early.pdf
Textual submission

For entry to the Small Team Co-op Fiction, by Qyreia Arronen and Atyiru Caesura Entar Arconae.
Additional document link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f6qLMyFHRDvAZglNyscp4i4onbcq9oWG2sTedupOIjY/edit?usp=sharing
Red text: Qyreia
Green text: Atyiru

Placement
1st place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
1st place
Member
Colonel Len Iode
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
2nd place
Member
Headmistress Alethia Archenksova
File submission
Team Silver Fox and the Vixens - Clean Copy.pdf
Textual submission

Working document link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OixdUyFqBUsuOjXwjPyhv3qd-1Lr3oRKn8tHUmyXVIE/edit?usp=sharing

Vez Hirundo, 14287, wordcount: 2946
Snapshots attached

V'yr Vorsa, 6463, wordcount: 3149
Snapshot for Morgan B. Sorenn: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/non_player_characters/28/snapshots/2844/5022

Len Iode, 14337, wordcount: 2692
Snapshot for Len Iode: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/14377/snapshots/2696/4743
Snapshot for Kenneth 'Ken' Iode: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/non_player_characters/108/snapshots/2698/4745

Placement
2nd place
Member
Boss Morgan B. Sorenn
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
2nd place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
The Assissnation of Ghafa Ordam by the Arconans Marick and Alaisy.pdf
Textual submission

Google Doc with Edit Acccess: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GZUFsMBKi_UP6Cwx83zgflrGaRgKe0Dj11UrTa6bqEU/edit?usp=sharing
Also manually gave access to competition organizers: Idris and Ciara.

Written by: Marick Tyris #10214, Alaisy Tir’eivra #15526

Placement
3rd place
Member
Blade Mistress Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
3rd place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
GJW XIV Small-team Co-op PDF.pdf
Textual submission

Snapshots:
Tali Sroka #14782: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/14782/snapshots/2676/4710
Zodac Polcim #15674: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/15674/snapshots/2828/5002

Placement
4th place
4th place
Zodac Polcim
Member
Zodac Polcim
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
4th place
5th place
Lucine Vasano
Member
Lucine Vasano
File submission
Co-Op Fun Times.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
5th place
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
File submission
[GJW XIV] Co-op Fiction.pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
6th place
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
6th place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

Submitted by GM Muz Ashen.

Placement
7th place
Member
Reaver Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
Submission
Reaver Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
7th place
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Tracked Team Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KeeWZDwirw_j8RA1AjXwI35Fspkc7Wcy2ga6KQA5QXQ/edit?usp=sharing

Team includes Shimura Keibatsu, Kojiro Keibatsu, and Muz Ashen Keibatsu

Placement
7th place
Member
General Zxyl Bes'uliik
File submission
gjwxiv_eventlong_fiction_3729-9056.pdf
Textual submission

Loadouts attached in tracked document.

Placement
8th place
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
8th place
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
Textual submission

My submission has been supplied by my co-writer, Turel; PIN #13830. The google doc has also been shared with the correct individuals.

Placement
9th place
Member
Champion Rajhin Cindertail
Submission
Champion Rajhin Cindertail opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
General Takota Okami
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
10th place
10th place
Irhan Lo'Vex
Member
Irhan Lo'Vex
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
10th place
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Submission
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
10th place
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
GJW 14 Small Team RO Clean.pdf
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18_QQMKyA3Y_V8pjOdBDb53M6TtNctU-8LasEG4vhOcE/edit?usp=sharing

clean document attached to entry.

Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Declan Roark
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Master Dracaryis
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Etah Obsidyn
File submission
Co-op Fiction GJW XIV.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Farrin Xies Tarentae
File submission
Co-Op Fiction for Farrin, Drac, and Sarin.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Celevon Werd'a
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Malisane Sadow
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Luka Zarkot
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
File submission
STRO_ Saber Gunnin' (1).pdf
Textual submission

Co-op was done by Magik#14037 and Diyrian 'Diy' Grivna#14615

The GDoc editor link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ucN3I4dDTSUPdK4f_i-68DmeZoRKMl8ffReaQZNJ_vI/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Malevek
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Small Team Fiction.docx
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DrqhpOa3PXXlN1ofFJ5MQb6aqcfyyMO1Az0FJBaCfqM/edit?usp=sharing
Annotated version

Placement
No placement
Member
Jashashi "Vesh" Zaes
File submission
[GJW XIV Event Long] Fiction - Small Team Co-op Fiction (2).pdf
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F2vRJStu77q0jlescN9wrvvamq9s3CXQxrEXmVXnDd8/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement
Member
Dasha Talus
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Magik
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Scarlet Agna
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Khryso Mallus
File submission
Lianso GJW XIV Co-op Fiction Clean.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Tyga Orn Nilim
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Avery Watson
File submission
[GJW XIV Event Long] Fiction_ Small Team Co-op Fiction_ Final Draft.pdf
Textual submission

Co-op partner: Knight Tyga Orn Nilim
Annotated Version: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_8kNc9nocHYf1GpKQ37xsVcxqxMWKhGtZpIK6yx4DRs/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement
Member
Meleu Karthdo
Submission
Meleu Karthdo opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
File submission
Scuttling the Ocejar.pdf
Textual submission

GDocs link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vPxc7UOCZfek_ne-GLsqNOawc6su1Wgp_jzO9Qn-Un0/edit#

Shared with organizers

Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission

Manually added by Eminent Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
File submission
Homefront Small Team (annotated).docx
Placement
No placement