Competition: [GJW XIV Event Long] Multimedia - Comic

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[GJW XIV Event Long] Multimedia - Comic
This competition is in the [GJW XIV Event Long] Multimedia Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 6 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 12.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective: Create a comic of at least five panels showing a scene featured in one of the official fiction updates beginning with the Prologue fiction and including any others published following. Or, alternatively, choose a scene featured in your Run On. Length, quality or drawing and accuracy to fiction will all be considered for placing entries. You may use any particular style you want.

Important Additional Information: This event may be submitted to by teams of anywhere from 1 to 4 members from the same clan. If your entry is based on a Run On entry you must include a link to the Run On thread in question. Additionally, every member of the team has to participate in the competition one way or another (simply having written in the RO as far as plotting doesn't count). Each member's contribution must be such that a reasonable evaluation of them would classify them as significant, so drawing the panel lines/boxes as an example would not meet the requirement. The graders may require you to hand over any e-mail or chat correspondence after the competition is over. Please keep both saved. Only one team member needs to submit the entry through the site. Participation records will be adjusted manually.

How to Submit: Through the site. Formats: .png, .jpg., .gif.

How we are Grading: Dark Brotherhood Graphics Rubric v.2.0

Mediums: Any traditional or digital

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XIV: Homefront
Organized by
Master Selika Roh di Plagia, Darth Renatus
Running time
2020-05-30 until 2020-07-08 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Graphics/Multimedia
Difficulty Class
Intermediate
Awards
Novae and 4 Clusters of Graphite as per Herald guidelines
Participants
53 subscribers, of which 36 have participated.
Results
1st place
Aylin Sajark
Member
Aylin Sajark
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
1st place
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
TheDarkAscent.png
Textual submission

Bale Andros (826) - Storyboard, ink, shading
Aylin Sajark (14505) - Flat colors, panel composition (Panel 9)
Zentru'la (5951) - Text adaptation, typesetting

Software used: Photoshop

100% original art by our team.

Placement
1st place
Member
General Zentru'la
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Jafits Skrumm
Member
Jafits Skrumm
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
2nd place
Member
Lu'aisha Gresee
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
2nd place
Member
Boss Morgan B. Sorenn
File submission
Comicbook-entry.pdf
Textual submission

Team:
Essik Lyccane - 14751 (Lettering)
Lu'aisha Gresee - 13090 (Backgrounds)
Jafits Skrumm - 7764 (Space art)
V'yr Vorsa - 6463 (Characters)

Resources: Ansel Hsiao (starships), moddb.com (shadow academy model)

Placement
2nd place
2nd place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Avery Watson
Member
Avery Watson
File submission
ComicDJbfinal.jpg
Placement
3rd place
Member
Agate Gua'lara
Submission
Agate Gua'lara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Elyon de Neverse
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
4th place
Member
Grand Inquisitor Lizuni Heraga
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
4th place
Member
Blade Mistress Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra
File submission
ComicWallyAlaisyFinal3.png
Textual submission

Digitizing / Color - Alaisy Tir'eivra #15526
Storyboard / Sketch - Marick Tyris #10214

Link to storyboards: https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=1SUykiFYAM5vBtXDpypD8j3UP4X1fM0gz

Placement
5th place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
5th place
Member
Leeadra Halcyon
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
6th place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
AQL GJW14 Comic.png
Textual submission

Atyiru (#13486) - traditional drawing comic base & concept
Qyreia (#14369) - digitizing and framing
Leeadra (#14425) - text boxes, framing, and text input

Placement
6th place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission

Teamed with Qyreia Arronen and Leeandra Halcyon. See for submission.

Placement
6th place
7th place
Cymbre Kall
Member
Cymbre Kall
Submission
Cymbre Kall opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
7th place
Member
Maximus Alvinius
File submission
7026D6B6-2952-47AD-9584-32DA7AF67473.png
Placement
8th place
9th place
Magik
Member
Magik
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
9th place
Member
Vorran Shadowfeather
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
9th place
9th place
Sera Kaern
Member
Sera Kaern
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
9th place
9th place
Junazee
Member
Junazee
File submission
GJWComic1.jpg
Textual submission

Team consisted of : Sera Kaern, Magik, Tybalt Ma'Jahirr Rawioni and Myself.

Placement
9th place
10th place
Seer Xolarin
Member
Seer Xolarin
File submission
Xolarin-14717-GJWXIV-Comic15827.png
Textual submission

Draft pencil on sketch paper (scanned in with phone and put into PDF/PNG).

Placement
10th place
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
File submission
51789E63-3FF9-4739-8C0D-7A7460A05249.png
Textual submission

https://discourse.darkjedibrotherhood.com/t/gjw-xiv-clan-vizsla-run-on/2537/7

Placement
No placement
Member
Montresor
Submission
Montresor opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Professor Sanguinius Tsucyra Entar
File submission
Comic -phase long - Koji and Sang (1).png
Textual submission

From GJW Fiction Part 2. Evant is a dick...

Submission from Sanguinius Tsucyra Entar - 10407 and Kojiro Keibatsu

Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
File submission
Comic.png
Textual submission

This is from my second post in the Clan Run-on.

Placement
No placement
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
Submission
Aedile Tali Sroka opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Irhan Lo'Vex
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Declan Roark
File submission
5BD44DE5-5591-43B6-A7C1-00D1B3209153.jpeg
Placement
No placement
Member
Warden Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
Textual submission

Comic created alongside Sang.

Updating here for participation records

Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Len Iode
Textual submission

Manually added by Adept Selika Roh

Placement
No placement
Member
Master Dracaryis
File submission
image.jpg
Placement
No placement
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
Submission
High Inquisitor Anderson opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
photo_2020-07-07_21-19-50.jpg
Placement
No placement
Member
Occultan Iacul
File submission
IMG_20200605_202554.jpg
Textual submission

Solo entry
Hive mind Marines test from prologue

Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
gjw14comic.png
Textual submission

Team:
By: Aura Ta’var: 10388 - drew 2 pictures.
Len Iode: 14377 - drew 1 picture
Irhan Lo’Vex: 15701- drew 2 pictures

Scene: Clan Runon- Tarvitz’s post (https://discourse.darkjedibrotherhood.com/t/gjw-xiv-clan-odan-urr-run-on/2530/5)
Docking Bay 327
Nesolat Platform
Arx System

Bolts were already rebounding from the gunships’ armour plating as they set down, the doors pulling pack and revealing the carnage beyond. Docking Bay 327 had been hit hard in the fighting, and what wasn’t broken was on fire. A large section of the cargo maintenance system, the vast crane network built into the docking bay support beams, had been torn away from its supports. Most of the ships present at the time of the attack had been reduced to burning skeletons by the invaders, each bearing the telltale signs of torpedo strikes. Sections of the walls and ceiling had been torn away seemingly at random by turbolaser impacts, leaving twisted metal scattered across the area.

These were the sort of tactics that the Brotherhood had come to expect from the Collective: Clever pragmatism disguised as zealous fanaticism. Most troops would have conserved ammunition and pressed ahead, but the destruction denied Nesolat’s defenders a means of escape. At the same time it also provided the Collective troops cover for their rearguard, who were now firing upon the LAATs in a constant stream of blaster bolts.

“Most of them have clustered about the remains of the cargo system, they’re using the rails for cover,” Essik Lyccane spoke up, staying at the gunship’s door as the rest of those with him piled out. A set of electrobinoculars were held up to the Gand’s bulbous compound eyes, while a comlink was clutched in his other hand. “Flanking efforts are indivisible given that position, and the build-up of debris gives them a high ground advantage.”

“I’m assuming you have something in mind?”

The question came from the crimson armoured Nautolan to his right, Nikora Rhan. The twin blades of her emerald lightsaber were working in a constant blur, working to deflect the incoming fire. Those at her back fired through momentary openings in her swings.

“Quite so,” Essik said, lowering the electrobinoculars and raising the comlink to his mandibles. “We remove the high ground.”

Essik spoke several words and three of the gunships now bereft of passengers rose into the air once more. A few of the Collective soldiers, likely predicting what was to follow, began to run as the gunships fired. A barrage of missiles hammered into the area, detonating with sunbursts of energy among the makeshift barricade. Other detonations, likely ammunition supplies or pre-placed mines, soon joined the first in a chain reaction of searing blasts. The Collective soldiers fortunate enough to escape the display were soon sent fleeing, each trying to escape the storm of durasteel fragments swept up by the explosions.

“Charge!”

Essik couldn’t see who had yelled the order, but every Odanite was soon sprinting for the gap cleared by the gunships. Revak Kur’s group were the first through, having not stopped running since breaking out of their downed LAAT. Charging over the blackened deck plating, they were soon joined first by those with Aura Ta’var, then the rest in a flood of bodies. The Collective troops who held their ground barely lasted long enough to slow the Odanites’ advance.

“That’s the easy part done,” Essik said, half-limping and half sprinting as he fought to keep up with those from his own LAAT. This earned him a concerned look from Rhan, and a laugh from nearby.

“You’re sure that you don’t want to wait with the gunships, old man?” Gui Sol said, passing him by in a sprint. “We can’t afford to stop for a breather every few minutes.”

“Essik will keep pace, thank you all the same,” Essik answered the Kiffar. “Someone has to make sure that you don’t stumble into any obvious traps.”

“If you say so. Just remember this isn’t the Clone Wars anymore!”

Essik held back a laugh. He never would have admitted it, but the sight of lightsaber-wielding figures leading troops had rekindled memories of fighting alongside the Republic’s Grand Army. That sense of nostalgia, along with a lifetime of experience in this sort of operation, was why he had forsaken his usual place far behind the frontlines.

Placement
No placement