Competition: [RoS: Escalation Phase I] Graphics and Miscellaneous - The Machines of War

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[RoS: Escalation Phase I] Graphics and Miscellaneous - The Machines of War
This competition is in the [RoS: Escalation Phase I] Graphics and Miscellaneous Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 3 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 10.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective:

As the Severian Principate and Tenixir Revenant engage in conflict, the brightest minds of each are hard at work on new technologies and - more importantly - new machines of war to combat each other. Using your wits, create a new capital ship variant - either a modification of an existing Star Wars vessel or a whole new one - that either the Principate or Revenant are working on deploying.

Rules:

  • Entries must be submitted in .pdf or .txt format or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website.
    • No GoogleDoc links, please download as a .pdf using "File" -> "Download as" "PDF Document (.pdf)" and submit through the website
  • Entries should be written as if they were for use by the whole Brotherhood, not a single clan or house.
  • Must use the Item Prototype Approval Policy, and include the following:
    • Item Prototype Name
    • Item Prototype Rarity
    • Item Prototype Cost
    • Item Prototype Description (this section should include a brief description, as well as armament)
    • Image inclusion optional and not required
  • Must be sensible within Star Wars/Brotherhood lore
  • Have fun

Grading:

Entries will be graded on the following:

  • Adherence to the Item Prototype Creation Policy - 50%
  • Creativity - 20%
  • Realism - 20%
  • Spelling/Grammar of entry - 10%
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Rite of Supremacy: Escalation
Organized by
General Zxyl Bes'uliik, Darth Renatus
Running time
2021-05-30 until 2021-06-13 (15 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Novae
Participants
58 subscribers, of which 42 have participated.
Results
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
Selika Roh - 2632.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Emperor Thran Occasus-Palpatine
File submission
Triumph Class.pdf
Textual submission

Enjoy the good, old-fashioned world of practical effects.

Placement
2nd place
Member
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
File submission
Hell Lance-corvette.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Raleien Sonavarret
Textual submission

Item Prototype Name: Raider I Corvette - Mobile Headquarters Prototype
Item Category: Starship
Proposed shop: Arx Fleet Systems
Item Prototype Rarity: Rare
Item Prototype Cost: 5,250,000
Item Prototype Description (this section should include a brief description, as well as armament): The modified Raider I-class Corvette Command Platform prototype is a 150 meter long starship. Unlike the conventional vessel designed for hit-and-run tactics, this vessel is instead designed to be a highly maneuverable mobile command platform. Hyperdrive capable, the vessel has fantastic maneuverability and exceptional speed, though it is poorly armored and has average shields. In lieu of the armor and shields, the vessel is instead outfitted with advanced communications technologies within and across the hull to coordinate space engagements even under electronic warfare conditions. The vessel is also equipped with an advanced jamming suite, though it sacrifices some of the Raider-I armament to accommodate this change. While it may retain the dagger-shaped design championed by the Imperial Navy, this vessel lacks in teeth but has gained in logistical, command and control capacity. This ship is ideal for coordinating attacks at a safe and unexpected distance.
Armament: 4 heavy dual laser turrets, 2 turbolaser turrets, 1 ion cannon turret, 1 tractor beam.
Complement: 105 crew for full effectiveness. 200 metric tons of cargo. 25 passengers/troops.

Placement
5th place
6th place
Sera Kaern
Member
Sera Kaern
File submission
Machines of War_ Picaroon Class Boarding Corvette.pdf
Placement
6th place
7th place
James Malum
Member
James Malum
File submission
Schism-Class Destroyer (3).pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
RoS Escalation Ph1, Machines of War.pdf
Placement
8th place
9th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
Phase 1 The Machines of War(2).pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
File submission
Obsidian-Class Star Destroyer (1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
MachinesOfWar (1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Darcy Avarik
File submission
307 - The Machines of War.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Rian Taldrya
File submission
[RoS Escalation Phase I] Graphics and Miscellaneous - The Machines of War.pdf
Textual submission

Image Source: https://lumiere-a.akamaihd.net/v1/images/open-uri20150608-27674-m3sml_ccc7804a.jpeg

Placement
No placement
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
Wally_Warmachine_Entry (1).pdf
Textual submission

But seriously, Poe Dameron is worth re-evaluating your entire design theory.

Placement
No placement
Member
Sage Enzo Dek
Textual submission

Dek Iron’yikut
The Machines of War
Great Jedi War: Escalation

Item name:

Gauntlet Class Tenixir Cruiser

Item category:

Starship

Proposed shop:

Arx Starship Acquisitions (Clan)

Proposed rarity:

Blue (Rare)

Item description:

The Tenixir Prison Ship Yards have come out with their new vessel: the Gauntlet Class Strike Cruiser. The purpose of this vessel is to quickly deploy fighters for a shock strike that allows the Cruiser to get in and use either a wedge or overwhelm strategy.

The cruiser is an Imperial Dreadnaught with a webbed chassis over top of the vessel (minus the engines). The webbed holes allow for the landing of various forms of fighters (best suited for X-Wing or Z-95 Headhunter variants) to land and not only form a protective shield, but fire from the webbed shell itself. This provides a secondary layer of defense, and weaponry, allows the fighters to move along the Cruiser in hyperspace, and allows for a quick attack or retreat if necessary. Over 60 fighters can exist along the webbed hull of the ship.

The obvious weakness is that ships are not easily defended (both the cruisers and the fighters), but if used correctly, the ship is perfect for a long drawn out battle with multiple ships, or a quick hit and run. One on one fights with no surprise would make this ship an easy target (and doing so in the ship would see the end of the Captain’s life).

Item image: (Venator Class Star Destroyer with a metal web around it)

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Textual submission

Item Prototype Name: Severian Stealth Corvette
Item Prototype Rarity: Rare
Item Prototype Cost: 75,500,000
Item Category: Capital Ship
Item Shop: Arx Starship Acquisitions
Item Prototype Description: The Severian Stealth Corvette is a 147-metre long capital ship designed and built by the Restorers of the Severian Principate to conduct deep strike missions and surveillance. Its hull is painted in vantablack and its engine nozzles are shrouded so it is near invisible at long range. It is generally only detectable at close range by a focused scan. It does not possess a hyperdrive and requires a secondary vessel to transport it near its target. It is exceptionally fast, but is unarmed and has minimal shields and armour.

Placement
No placement
Member
Magik
Submission
Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Jorm (The Jester) Na'trej
Textual submission

Item Prototype Name: Quack-Ton VI (Action VI Transport, Q-Ship Variant)
Item Prototype Rarity: Rare
Item Prototype Cost: 1.485.000 Credits
Item Prototype Description: Deployed first by the Sevarian Principate to better protect their trade routes from Tenexir Revenant predation, this Q-Ship blends in with harmless transports until the time is right to reveal the weaponry hidden behind retractable hull panels and turrets. The Revenants have adopted the same qualities to launch surprise attacks on Principate shipping. The relative ease of the modifications enabled the spread of the design into the wider galaxy, while the leftover room for additional modifications speaks to many owners' hearts.
Hyperdrive capable, this vessel has average maneuverability, with above average speed, light armor and heavy shielding. Since the vessel appears harmless, they will often present themselves as prime targets for pirates until the time is right to spring the trap.

Armament
8 retractable quad laser turrets
6 retractable light broadside ion cannons
4 retractable concussion missile launchers

Complement
50 crew for full effectiveness
50 passengers
5000 metric tons of cargo

Placement
No placement
Member
Jafits Skrumm
File submission
Dreadnaught Mk II.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Vynn Salm
Textual submission

Starhawk-class Battleship Immobilizer
Destroyer Class Starship
Rarity: Epic

Item Aspect/Upgrade Slots available: 1

Total Squadrons: 6

Clan Fleet upgrade slots: 1

Cost: 290,000,000 Credits

Starhawk-class Battleship Immobilizer

The Starhawk Immobilizer is a retrofitted version of the original Mark I developed by the Harmonist faction in the Severian Principate. Used in policing and planetary blockades, it retains the signature hatchet like look and styling of its predecessor. However the Immobilizer focuses its mission on immobilizing the enemy ships for boarding as such it’s entire armament has been replaced to disable ships rather than destroy them, though it does retain some defensive capabilities.

Armament
10 octuple Ion barbettes
24 heavy Ion batteries (forward)
40 ion cannon turrets
4 ion cannon batteries (forward)
32 Ion missile launchers
10 ion torpedo launchers
36 point-defense heavy laser cannons
6 tractor beam arrays

Complement
6 squadrons of starfighters
33,650 crew
7,200 troops

Placement
No placement
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Stealth Acclamator-class Assault Ship

Category
Cruiser

Type
Space Vehicle

Size
1 slot

Rarity
Legendary

Base price
300,000,000

Description
The Stealth Acclamator-class Assault Ship is a 752-meter long Cruiser designed as a troop transport that could break enemy blockades and land directly into battle. Hyperdrive capable, this vessel has exceptional maneuverability and speed, with light armor and shielding. Originally Created for the Galactic Republic by Rothana Heavy Engineering to carry the Army of the Republic to conflicts throughout the Clone Wars, this vessel has been heavily modified by the Expansionist sect of the Tenixir Revenants to allow for stealth operations or bypassing enemy force for rapid troop deployment. The ship has had its amount of original weaponry cut in half to provide more power to its various electronic upgrades. The ship has been modified with a cloak that renders it invisible to sensors and the naked eye. The ship must exit the cloak to use any of its weapons. The ship has had its missile launchers replaced with proton torpedoes and baradium missiles to allow it several massive quick strikes when it exits its cloak. Various electronic equipment allow for encrypted comms and slicing operations to take place.

Armament
6 quad turbolaser turrets
12 laser turrets
2 proton torpedo launchers
4 Baradium missile launchers
Cloaking Device (Full Invisibility)
State of the art Slicing terminals and Electronic Warfare equipment
Cutting edge sensor array and encrypted communications

Complement
700 crew for full effectiveness
16,000 passengers/troops
Item Slots
1 Clan Fleet Upgrade slot of capacity 1, allowing items of type Clan Fleet Upgrade

Aspect/Upgrade Slots
1 slot allowing Aspects of type Space Vehicle Cosmetic
Granted Item Aspects
Stealth Drive: This vessel has been outfitted with a cloaking device rendering it invisible to scanners and visual detection. It is circumvented through the use of tracking torpedoes and interdiction fields, which render the device inoperable.

Purchase Restrictions
No restrictions

Placement
No placement
Member
Morax Darkblade
Submission
Morax Darkblade opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Cello
Submission
Cello opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Elyon de Neverse
File submission
Elyon - Nubian L cruiser.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Archian
File submission
The Tenixir Ambusher.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Malfrost Xeon
File submission
Ship Submission.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Vorran Shadowfeather
Submission
Vorran Shadowfeather opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
File submission
The Machines of War.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ryan Hawkins
Submission
Ryan Hawkins opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Hades
File submission
The Machines of War Hades #8596.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
The Machines of War 14185-1.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Documento sem título.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Krath Adherent Edema R'uh-Kalinor
File submission
RoS ship builder.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
File submission
RoS_ The Quad.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission

Revalia
( Refitted DP20Correllian Gunship)
Category: Corvette
Rarity: Purple

Cost 5,500,00

Owned by: Revenants

Prototype:Dp20Corellian Gunship

The Revalia is a new prototype of DP Correllian Gunship. It is 100-meters long Corvette that was designed to cloak both in and out of hyperdrive, while delivering suprise stealthed attack on unsuspecting larger ships to incapacitate them while attacking their fighters. It has replaced its dual turbolaser turrets for eight ion cannons. Having the amazing maneuverability and speed, this ship is silent and deadly.

Armament:

8 Ion Cannons

6 quad laser turrets

4 missile launchers

Compliment:

103 crew for full effectiveness
250 metric tons of cargo

Placement
No placement
Member
Warden Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
Textual submission

Item Prototype Name: Revenant Close Range Dreadnaught
Item Prototype Rarity: Epic
Item Prototype Cost: 75 Million
Item Prototype Description (this section should include a brief description, as well as armament): Close range dreadnaught with enhanced shields and armoured. Slower than the average Dreadnaught it is armed the same way as the Collective (Being one of the ones stolen by the Revenants):

20 heavy dual turbolaser turrets
20 heavy dual turbolaser cannons
10 Ion Canons
4 warhead launchers

The ship is also equipped with several boarding tubes and the Prow of the ship has been reinforced so it may be utilised as a ram. This ship is designed to get in close with minimal obstructions to the larger vessels of the SP. Once there it will either drive prow first into one to disable or disable it to board it's crew of highly trained boarders.

Placement
No placement
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
Submission
High Inquisitor Anderson opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement