Competition: Maximum Brevity Series 8: Despatch

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Maximum Brevity Series 8: Despatch

In no more than 250 words, write your character's obituary as if they have just died.

How they died etc is entirely up to you.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Maximum Brevity Series
Organized by
/competitions/7740
Running time
2014-04-24 until 2014-05-01 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
3 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
Member
Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj
File submission
Maximum_Brevity_Series_8.docx
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Ruyn Myr
Member
Ruyn Myr
Textual submission

Kyo Loric, 26
Born: Winter of 12 ABY
Dark Jedi Knight of Clan Arcona, House Galeres

Occupation: Assassin / Inquisitor

A service will be held for the Dark Jedi Knight, Kyo Loric in a 3 moons to honor the now deceased knight's accomplishments.

The knight met his demise to the end of a vibro knife during the late Dark Crusade while trying to take down a group of fanatic cult members. Although he slew their entire group, he was met with a fatal blow of poison on the tip of a vibro knife.

In lieu of flowers, Kyo's Will simply asks for his body to be buried with a collection of relics that he has obtained over his travels.

Location of Ceremony: Tantooine

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Qor Kith
Member
Qor Kith
Textual submission

Teraab Times: Breaking News!: Dark Guardian’s Dastardly Devices Denounced Demise.
The torture has ended, the darkness is consumed, and our people are safe. Last night at 2:13am, the Dark Guardian was killed during a siege of his new-found lair, located on the desert moon of Lyspair. The whole investigation started back in 40 ABY where the first kidnapping and the body of Aerilis Targerin was found dumped in the sewer system of Pesmenben III. This stirred the Justicars into action, not because it was a murder, but there were no weapon. Following this in 41 & 42 ABY, the murders of four Ambassadors for New Alderaan worried the systems of the New Jedi Order. The people of Teraab were in an uproar and demanded justice. The Graellis, the father of Aerilies told us that “The Justicars need to prioritise. We lost our daughter, New Alderaan lost their Ambassadors and who knows how many hundreds of people are awaiting their missing loved ones to return home. The justice system needs to wake up.” In the summer of 43 ABY, nothing was heard of, only thousands of cases of missing people, there was a dreaded silence for a body to turn up, and they got their lucky break. The body of a mechanical engineer, Dravis Ghulish, a Hutt, was found washed up on the beach of Pesmenben III, with a rare diatom found in his stomach, this linked the police to a planet, Lyspair. After a 22 hour siege, Lexiconus was shot.

Placement
3rd place