Competition: Maximum Brevity Series 16: A mystery delivery

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Maximum Brevity Series 16: A mystery delivery

There is a knock on your character's door, when they answer, there is a mysterious package sitting there but no one around. In 250 words or less, what does your character do?

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Maximum Brevity Series
Organized by
/competitions/8288, Occultan Iacul
Running time
2014-12-11 until 2014-12-18 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
11 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
Member
Legorii Arconae
Textual submission

Legorii slammed the door to his quarters, but not before the package exploded. The force of the detonation blew the door back, knocking him from his feet and sending him skidding across the floor. His ears were ringing, and the entire world seemed to be spinning. Thinking fast, the Anzat pushed himself to his feet, stumbling away from the open doorway. He knew that they wouldn’t be far behind.

His lightsaber was not within reach, and his vibroblades weren’t, either. Through his ringing ears he heard muffled commands, and knew that time was running out. Lunging toward his desk, he grabbed his commlink.

“Thissis Legzzz…activate Assssassssin sproto—” his final, slurred syllables were cut short by a swift blow from the butt of a blaster rifle. A BlasTech A280. Standard issue in the Clan Arcona armory. The Proconsul slumped to the floor, unconscious. Two armored soldiers, with Arcona’s sigil proudly adorning their epaulettes, grasped the Pontifex’s arms and unceremoniously dragged him from his quarters.

There were eight soldiers in all. Evidently, Marick had not expected his right hand to go quietly. It was only a short distance down the hall to the Consul’s study, where Legorii was deposited.

“Thank you, gentlemen,” Marick said, his characteristic Hapan lilt filling the room. The soldiers saluted and left the room. Left the Consul alone with his Proconsul. Marick crouched beside the Anzat, brushing a strand of dark hair from his face. His next words were a whisper.

“Now, to replace you with Turel…”

Placement
1st place
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
MBBox13593.doc
Placement
2nd place
Member
Vivibelle Baenre
Textual submission

“The fuck.”

White hair fell forward over her shoulder as she looked down at the box at her door. She had just finally finished situating her room the best she could at her new Battleteam’s base located in the Dajorra Asteriod Field, only planning to use it when not on Antei.

The box had no markings. It didn’t look like it could be too dangerous; the woman tapping the side of the box with one of her pointed toe high heeled shoes. A thoughtful noise vibrated out of her throat. She was new here. This could be anything. Absolutely anything at all. And there was the problem.

Continuing to stare, she had an epiphany. The droid. She had only got to use it once on a general boot up and maintenance run. Tiptoeing around the box, Rhiann left and went to go find her MagnaGuard.

Though it was nothing more than its basic programing, a blank slate waiting to be crafted, it would do well enough at simple tasks. Standing at the end of the hall, Rhiann went about entering commands and inputs into her datapad, having the droid pick it up and haul it off outside.

Watching from a window, the droid did as told. A detonator was attached to the box, exploding soon afterward; turning the box into nothing more than a burn mark on the ground.

All she could do was laugh to herself in amusement about her shiny new droid toy.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Ernordeth Puer-Irae
Submission
Ernordeth Puer-Irae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Rodimus Morell
File submission
MB16_Rod_14052.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Duelist Revs
File submission
Revs_Dorm.docx
Placement
No placement