Competition: Minimalist Fiction

Finished
Minimalist Fiction

As the Bard himself wrote, brevity is the soul of wit. To that end, can you write an entire story in 100 words or less? Submissions will be entered through the site and should include your character engaged in some sort of action (and should certainly have a plot of some kind). They will be graded on originality and in how well-developed your story is in such a small amount of space.

Competition Information
Organized by
Adept Farrin Xies Tarentae
Running time
2015-02-20 until 2015-03-06 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
11 subscribers, of which 10 have participated.
Results
1st place
Warlord Hades
Member
Warlord Hades
Textual submission

So there I was, holding a bowl of fruit in one hand and a whip in the other, naked with this shocked look on my face just staring at this woman's husband who had just come home way too early from a trip. I'm frozen in place! So was she. I was looking to see if he had a weapon, because I didn't want to kill the guy. So he looks at me, looks at his wife and says very seriously, and I kid you not.. "Just don't eat my Kavasa fruit." I just lost it after that.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Meleu Karthdo
Member
Meleu Karthdo
Textual submission

"Shackled and chained, the Voss-born man struggled against metallic bindings. Ignited by hatred and anger which welled up within, a sudden burst of power emitted from inside. The durasteel fetters cracked and smashed under stress, freeing the prisoner from the grasp of the Sith around him. The jeering crowd was instantly silenced by debris, debris turned volatile through the Force by the now-free man. The strength in the dark side of the Force diminished around him as it absorbed into his own body, siphoning the Force and draining the life out of those who lay lifeless. Meleu Karthdo was born."

Placement
2nd place
Member
Archean Bloodfyre Tarentae
File submission
Minimalist_fiction.doc
Textual submission

by Archean Tarentae

Placement
3rd place
Member
Scion Tarentae
Textual submission

Fury surged through Scion Altera's veins as he stalked the corridors. The durachrome weapons at his sides called out to him. In his mind he could already hear the vicious crackle of the crimson blades searing through flesh. Scion's eyes lingered hungrily on everyone he passed until he reached the door he sought. The heel of his hand sent a spiderweb of cracks blooming across the access panel. With reluctance, the door ground open. Inside, thirty young apprentices with training sabers practiced their defensive stances. With a snap-hiss, the door sealed shut.

Placement
No placement
Member
Anshar Kahn Tarentae
Submission
Anshar Kahn Tarentae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Magik
Textual submission

One day Magik had been at a bar on Coruscant drinking away. Minding his business enjoying the atmosphere. When out of no where two Jedi approached Magik. The Jedi tried to disarm him. Magik drew his lightsaber and the three began dueling. Attack after attack Magik deflected their strikes. This didn't last very long. The Jedi quickly became tired. Magik's defense bested the Jedi in every form. The crowd was in awe of the duel. After the duel, Magik left the scene. So he wouldn't be recognized. The Jedi would not forget this day. The Sith will return with vengance.

Placement
No placement
Member
Jalen Ramz
File submission
Minimalist_Fiction.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Egregious
File submission
100words.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Constantine
File submission
100_word_comp.docx
Textual submission

OT Caesar Pin 10484
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Placement
No placement
Member
Garloaf
Submission
Garloaf opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement