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Blooming Danger (Fiction)
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Blooming Danger (Fiction)
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Spring, they called it—though I’d never seen it like this.

Most worlds I worked didn’t bother with seasons. They burned, froze, or rotted in place. Predictable. Profitable. But this one… this one breathed.

From orbit it looked like a jewel—veins of violet, gold, and deep emerald threading across its surface. No cities. No smoke. No scars. Just life, spilling over itself in reckless abundance. The kind of place people wrote poems about.

The kind of place I didn’t trust.

I set my ship down in a clearing that wasn’t really a clearing at all—just a temporary surrender in the endless tide of growth. Petals the size of my hands drifted through the air, brushing against my armor like curious fingers. The ground was soft, almost spongy, layered with moss that pulsed faintly under my boots.

Pulsed.

I frowned, glancing down.

The moss dimmed, as if aware it had been noticed.

“Right,” I muttered. “One of those planets.”

I stepped forward anyway.

The air was thick with scent—sweet, almost intoxicating, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. Vines coiled lazily around towering stalks, their surfaces shimmering with iridescent hues. Flowers opened and closed as I passed, reacting to my movement. Some leaned toward me. Others shrank away.

Everything here watched.

I kept my hand near my blaster.

The deeper I went, the louder it became—not noise, not exactly. More like a layered whisper of growth. Leaves unfurling. Roots shifting beneath the soil. A slow, constant motion that never stopped.

Alive.

Too alive.

Then I saw it.

At first, I thought it was just another bloom—larger than the rest, its petals a deep crimson edged with gold. It swayed gently despite the still air, releasing a faint mist that glittered in the light.

Beautiful.

I took a step closer.

The mist smelled… wrong.

Not sweet like the others. Sharper. Metallic.

My instincts flared. I stopped.

The flower stilled.

For a moment, we regarded each other.

Then it moved.

The petals snapped open—not unfolding, but lunging. What I’d taken for delicate structures split apart into fleshy, muscular segments lined with serrated edges. The center yawned wide, revealing a dark, glistening maw that pulsed like a throat.

It lunged.

I barely had time to throw myself back as it struck where I’d been standing. The ground tore open beneath it, roots snapping upward like tendrils, grasping, searching.

“Not a flower,” I snarled, rolling to my feet. “Of course not.”

The creature—plant, whatever it was—reoriented with unsettling speed. Its body twisted, dragging itself forward with a wet, tearing sound as roots ripped free from the soil. More tendrils burst from beneath the surface around me, snapping like whips.

A trap.

I fired.

Blaster bolts slammed into its petals, scorching them black. It recoiled, emitting a high, keening shriek that vibrated through the air. The scent changed instantly—no longer sweet, but acrid, aggressive.

The ground shifted again.

More of them.

Not just one. A whole cluster, disguised among the blooms.

“Great,” I muttered. “I walk into a garden and it tries to eat me.”

A tendril lashed out, catching my leg. The strength of it nearly pulled me off balance. I fired point-blank, severing it in a spray of sap that hissed where it hit my armor.

The creature responded violently.

The main body surged forward, maw opening wide enough to swallow my torso whole. I could see layers inside it—rows of grinding, fibrous structures, like teeth made of woven thorns.

I wasn’t getting caught in that.

I triggered the charge on my belt and hurled it straight into the open maw.

“Eat this.”

I dove as the explosion tore through it.

The blast wasn’t massive, but it didn’t need to be. The creature convulsed, petals shredding apart as fire and shrapnel ripped through its core. The shriek cut off abruptly, replaced by a wet collapse as it sank into itself.

The surrounding tendrils went still.

For a moment, everything was silent.

Then the whispering started again.

Louder.

I pushed myself up, breathing hard. The air had shifted—thicker now, heavier. The other plants… they weren’t retreating.

They were closing in.

Flowers that had seemed harmless moments ago began to tilt toward me. Vines uncoiled, stretching across the ground. The moss beneath my boots pulsed faster, like a heartbeat picking up speed.

They’d felt it.

The disturbance. The death.

Or maybe… the threat.

I didn’t stick around to find out.

I backed away slowly at first, blaster raised, watching for movement. Every step felt like it sank a little deeper into the living ground. The colors around me seemed brighter now—too bright. Oversaturated. Alive in a way that felt almost hungry.

Then something shifted behind me.

I didn’t turn. I ran.

Branches snapped at my armor as I pushed through, vines snagging at my limbs. The air filled with that metallic scent again, thicker now, clinging to the back of my throat. Shapes moved in my peripheral vision—blooms opening too fast, tendrils writhing just beneath the surface.

The planet wasn’t just alive.

It was aware.

My ship came into view through the riot of color, a dull, comforting shape in a world gone mad. I sprinted the last stretch, ignoring the way the ground seemed to rise against me, like it was trying to slow me down.

I didn’t stop until the hatch sealed behind me.

Inside, the air felt thin. Dead. Safe.

I leaned against the bulkhead, listening to my own breathing, waiting for something—anything—to follow.

Nothing did.

But as I powered up the engines and lifted off, I glanced back at the surface below.

From above, it looked peaceful again. Beautiful. Untouched.

Like it hadn’t just tried to swallow me whole.

I let out a low chuckle, shaking my head.

“Next time,” I said, “I’m taking a job on a dead world.”

Competition
Blooming Danger (Fiction)
File submission
Blooming.pdf
Competition
[LOREFEST] April 2026
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Professional Nildea Vidh opted out of publishing her submission.
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The Shame Corner: 021 - Speedrun
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The Shame Corner: 021 - Speedrun
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https://discord.darkjedibrotherhood.com/rp-sessions/wnp.html
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The Shame Corner: 021 - Speedrun
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https://discord.darkjedibrotherhood.com/rp-sessions/wnp.html
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The Shame Corner: 021 - Speedrun
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https://discord.darkjedibrotherhood.com/rp-sessions/wnp.html
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The Shame Corner: 021 - Speedrun
URL
https://discord.darkjedibrotherhood.com/rp-sessions/wnp.html
Notes
The Shame Corner: 021 - Speedrun