Raziel

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Competition
You Talk Too Much
Textual submission

You talk too much
Raziel
Clan Odan-Urr
House Sunrider
11584
Featuring Raziel and Soona

“Raziel, this is the fifth time this month I’ve had to take out the trash. I’m getting a little tired of it to be honest.”

“I just dumped the garbage in the compactor yesterday, there’s no way it’s full yet.”

“No Raz, not the garbage. The trash.”

“Oh, you mean my company from last night?”

“Company? I was a consort slave, I know a whore when I see one.”

“Now that’s not fair, Alaria isn’t a prostitute,”

“Now we’re quibbling semantics? Raz, I understand you’re a man with his own needs, and I appreciate, oh do I ever appreciate, that you’re discreet and quiet when I’m trying to sleep, but waking up to a different woman in the kitchen every week, rooting around for breakfast while you’re working out, is getting tiresome.”

“Okay, that’s fair, but I’m not a Jedi, I told you that, you knew that when you signed on. I’m not going to repress myself any more than I’d ask you to.”

“And that’s both respectable, and perfectly fine, but I have to repress myself on occasion Raz. This last one, Hussy number five, whatever her name is. She’s a little on the crazy side. Tried to accuse me of being a jealous girlfriend or something, she said I was ‘sneaking in to seduce you.’ I think were her words.”

“Yeah, that’s a little out there. She seemed perfectly fine when we met last night,”

“Seemed perfectly fine? You’re a Force user, you can read minds, or were you busy reading the meter and a half deep neckline plunge in her dress instead?”

“That’s not funny Soona,”

“Oh, Sithspit, Raz, I’m sorry. Still not used to living with a Miraluka. I take that back, but my question, the spirit of it anyways, still stands.”

“We met at some diplomatic event that the Jedi were asked to attend. I got roped into it too, but generally these kinds of events aren’t the kinds of places where people bring the crazy. She was sweet as candy when I ran into her at the drink table, all manners and Outer Rim accent, which now that I think of it was kind of odd for a local Sephi. I guess I really can pick them. Also, apology accepted.”

“Raz, please, just in the future, can you maybe find a janitor’s closet or rent a room somewhere like normal people? This is our home, and I will welcome, with the widest open of arms, any woman you bring if your intention is more than a good time. It’s getting to where I’m afraid they’re going to stink the place up, and you can’t get that smell out of durasteel.”

“Soona, fine, but I can read the undercurrents on your aura. Spit it all out or it’s going to eat you up from the inside, and trust me, if there’s one thing I know, it’s that.”

“They remind me of what I was, what I could have still been! Being someone’s pleasure slave is not that far gone a memory for me, and seeing a string of women taking the first steps on the walk of shame is a really good way to keep reminding me.”

“Shame? I’m respectful thank you!”

“That’s not what that means Raz, and don’t deflect this with indignation. You wanted me to spill it, so be ready for a mess.”

“Okay, go on then,”

“I live here too. It’s our home, I said it before. Home is where you’re supposed to feel safe. When your company of the evening wants to get hostile without even asking who I am, I don’t feel safe. It’s bad enough DeeDee gets whatever passes for butthurt for a droid when I help you with things, I don’t need strange women adding to that.

“And more than that, quite frankly, it sets a poor precedence. We park the ship right in front of the Jedi Temple, and you’re bringing strange women home. One of them is going to be the wrong kind of trouble eventually, and I don’t want to be a part of it. I like it here Raz. It’s cold and the air is too thin for my tastes, but they’re nice to me. I have friends, and so do you. How do you think Aura would feel walking in here and stepping on some tramp’s discarded underthings?

“You said she approached you, acting demure and sweet. I bet she was shy around you, wasn’t she? No, don’t answer that, I already know she was. Raz, she was playing the game, that’s all. She hands-down seduced you, and if I had to wager a guess, I’d say she probably needed a place to sleep for the night.”

“Soona, I get it, I’ll remember hotels and hall closets exist. Sound good?”

“Well, you were listening and I appreciate that, but Raz, I need to know it’s going to be safe here. This time it was probably just looking for a bed for the night, next time it might be a spy, or a saboteur, or an assassin. I don’t want to be the person responsible for someone I actually like winding up dead. I don’t want to wake up back in a collar either.”

“You’re still having nightmares, aren’t you? I know you were awake when I got up, which only happens when you’re not sleeping right.”

“Yeah, they aren’t stopping. I’m still tired of the hussies though Raz, nightmares or no.”

“You’ve made your point. I scared away a Padawan the other day that was looking for you, so it’s only fair I suppose.”

“You. Did. What?”

“Nothing, poor joke, that’s all. Listen, how about this? If I slip or my company isn’t into hotels or wherever else, if she’s problematic the next morning, you handle it however you see fit. If I find a woman worth keeping around more than an evening, I’ll introduce you first.”

“Please do Raz. I don’t mind being the woman of the house, but I wouldn’t mind some female company that isn’t dedicated to the eternal pursuit of contemplating her navel.”

Competition
Eyes Of The Beholder
Textual submission

Eyes of the Beholder
Competition Entry
Seer Raziel
Clan Odan-Urr
House Sunrider
Pin 11584

0615 hours
Kiast

“Subject seems somehow allergic to living among the rest of the Jedi,” Anton Veth, a young Devaronian male, muttered into his datapad. “His vessel, called the Taliahad after some supernatural creature in spacer lore, remains a half a kilometer from the Praxeum.”

Anton sipped at his caf and for the hundredth time that morning, swatted insects away from his face. His blind was well away and incredibly concealed, at the expense of so much nature. “Taliahad so named for some manner of water spirit of vengeance, this bears further research. Subject is currently engaging in a physical fitness routine, and quite frankly I believe he’s showing off. No living being should be able to accomplish the kind of mobility mid-pullup that he seems to enjoy practicing.”

Anton sighed, swatted at the bugs again, and grimaced at his cold caf before returning to his high powered telescope. “For a member of a blind species, the subject appears remarkably vain. At first I believed this was to impress the Togruta female living with him on the ship, but so far he appears to have no intimate interest in her. Instead, I can only hypothesize his rather intense exercise to maintain his holovid star physique is personal to him. Perhaps he should consider coloring his gray hair as well.”

0850 hours
Kiast

His sandwich was horrible. His fizz was warm. Really his entire meal was awful, and Anton blamed his surveillance subject. “I thought the subject was about to take off, but instead, he’s offloaded some kind of equipment. It appears to be an induction coil that he’s connected to his ship. That, in addition to several hammers and a small tank of what I believe is engine lubricant lead me to research what would require such things. I was led to an ancient and primitive fabrication technique called blacksmithing,”

“Oh, and here he is apparently instructing the female with him. That’s inefficient, henceforth she will be referred to as roommate, I can think of nothing better or more accurate giving the context available,” Anton leaned back into his seat and got in a good stretch, wishing he could have more of it but knowing full well he had work to do.

“It appears he is actually instructing the roommate in these techniques. The fool can’t even tell she’s too small and frail to hold the,” Anton sputtered, looked away from his telescope and then looked back. “No, scratch that, she seems perfectly capable of using the primitive hammers. That was sexist of me. Delete from no.”

“I was correct about the induction coil, and he’s using the magnetic field to heat the metal, and appears to be instructing the roommate in something with the work piece. I’ll have to get an audio bug planted sometime tonight.”

1220 hours
Kiast

“They’re finally breaking for a meal, thank the stars,” Anton sighed and got up from his seat again, this time to walk around a little and get a real stretch. “Begin personal observation log.”

The droid brain attached to his datapad chirped and chimed, indicating acquiescence to his command. “Subject, well, Raziel, he’s just awful. I can’t understand how the galaxy has let him slide for this long. He’s been holorecorded killing people in space stations and picking fights in more places than I will ever have time to research. Yes yes, he’s killed slavers, that’s fine, I don’t like slavers either, but at what point was he ever taught he could serve as a full tribunal and executioner?”

Anton opened another bottle of fizz, another warm bottle, sadly, and took a drink. “And he’s blind, the piece of Hutt slime is blind, but there he is working out like a model. What kind of vanity besets a man like that? He’s old, near to what some might call elderly. His upbringing had to have been stunted somehow or another to encourage such behavior.”

“And the girl? He’s living with a girl that looks a third his age if not younger. I don’t care if he’s not romantically involved with her, that’s just downright inappropriate if you ask me. Shame too, she’s rather attractive, and much closer in age to myself. No, that’s unprofessional. Delete last two sentences.”

The datapad chirped and Anton continued. “And I know he’s a Jedi or something. He’ll be out in about an hour or so and he’ll work with his laser sword or whatever it’s called. I respect his dedication even if I fail to understand why. There are a whole temple of Jedi just across the hill, is he trying to show off to them? Embarrass them or something? I’ve surveilled them too, and there are far more interesting looking fighters in the temple. Pause recording,”

Another grumbling sigh escaped from Anton, who took a few minutes to type out a personal missive on a smaller datapad while he continued to pace. It was then he screwed up his mouth in thought. “Run subroutine, access all data available on martial artists, specifically tied to Jedi. Download to ship’s proxy.”

It would take a while given the clandestine holonet uplink’s poor speed, but eventually Anton would have material to cross reference.

1405 hours
Kiast

If ever there was cause to hate his target, what Anton saw through his telescope would do it. “And here we go, out there with his laser sword, no, edit laser sword, replace with lightsaber,” Anton’s research had explained that much already. “I confess I don’t understand what it is I’m seeing. He’s functionally spinning it around his body like a gyroscope of some sort. If I had to guess he’s working some kind of close quarters techniques, as close to his body as it is.”

“Oh, look, the female is clapping for him. Well done, you have a cheerleader,” Anton muttered. He set the telescope to holoproject and stepped away, needing a refresher break something horrible. Several bottles of fizz would do that to a fellow. “Well he’ll be at this until, if he remains consistent, sixteen hundred. It appears the roommate has returned to her crafting. I confess I don’t understand the draw to this. Only archaic and primitive things can be produced, and quite frankly, droids made to fabricate can do the job in a fraction of the time. If this were Mandalorian metal I could understand it, but if the Holonet is right, they would need a special furnace to work it.”

“I suppose it warrants further explanation, her working at hitting hot metal. The subject is repeatedly pausing his personal training with his lightsaber to offer what looks like quick instruction or advice, so it’s become clear that he’s more experienced in the craft. I’m not sure but it looks like she’s making some kind of small art piece. I suppose everyone has to start somewhere. Oh, pause recording.”

Anton grabbed his chirping commlink and thumbed it on. “Yes?”

The voice on the other end, tinny and distorted, still came through clearly as his boss. “Well Anton, what do you have for me?”

“Well, ma’am, I’m still watching. The subject seems to be a creature of habit, I’m afraid a lot of this will be redundant,”

“Doesn’t matter, habits are crucial to understand our subject. Was I correct in my initial assessment?”

Anton nodded subconsciously, despite her being light years away. “Yes ma’am, he’s definitely Miraluka. He removed the eye covering yesterday and there are no eyes there,”

“Then I’m glad we set you up as far away as we did. You should be well away from his line of sight. What about the female?”

“She’s pretty, no two ways about it, but I don’t think she’s a spouse. I’m calling her a roommate. She doesn’t appear to be any manner of threat.”

“As predicted. Anton, you’re doing wonderful work, keep it up.”

“Yes ma’am,” Anton said to already dead air. He flicked his commlink off and went back to his observations.

1830 hours
Kiast

“It’s dinnertime for them, so it’s dinnertime for me,” Anton quipped, and opened up another ration pack. “They’re cooking out, good for them.”

“The roommate is doing the cooking, and she apparently really knows her way around kitchen tools. My mother was a professional chef, so I can speak from some manner of experience to this.”

Anton nibbled at a protein square and hastily chewed his bite to continue logging. “Unsurprising, the subject looks like he’s balancing macronutrients. I know better than to try, but I really want to punch him in his vain face.”

“Edit last sentence,” Anton grumbled. His time in the camouflaged shelter was beginning to wear on him. “Sithspit!”

Anton grabbed the laser microphone and aimed it at Raziel’s camping chair. He’d gotten expansive about something.

Similarly staticky, this time from the laser mic, Raziel’s voice erupted from the speakers of the datapad. “So yeah, it was a long time ago, but I did some mercenary work for the Rebel Alliance. Nothing fancy and nothing high profile, I mostly guarded a couple of warehouses for a pittance wage,”

There was a pause, and in the telescope Anton could see the roommate speaking. He definitely had to get a bug planted. Given the weather, they’d spent most of their days outdoors, so he’d only really need to plant one.

“Oh, him? Hell no, I never met him, which was for the best. He showed up with another Jedi to Susevfi where my people originated,” Raziel paused again, and snickered. “Jensaarai, not Miraluka. Anyway he showed up, started a fight with some of the old guard. Lately the Jensaarai have been coming around to the idea of working with him.”

Another pause, shorter this time. “Yeah, probably I would. I like being here though if I’m being honest. Stuff is less galactically pressing but you’ve seen how busy they keep me.”

“I told you, tzugera, they’ve already said you’re welcome to a small room in the temple for when I get sent offworld and you’re not inclined to come with me.”

“Soo-gair-uh? I’ll look that up later,” Anton muttered.

“And I appreciate that but things get dangerous, and you’re not ready for that kind of violence,”

Another pause, and the telescope showed the displeased look on the roomate’s face well enough to explain the length of the pause. She had something to say.

“Okay, settle down. I didn’t say you weren’t capable, I said I don’t think you’re mentally ready. You’ve been out of the slave pens for what? A month, tops? You’ve got some stuff to work though that I’m in no way qualified to help with. Why do you think I brought you to the Jedi? They’re functionally worthless when it comes to action, but this kinda thing is where they shine.”

Things got quiet again, and Anton could see she’d stopped speaking, as had Raziel. “Personal note, he’s not a Jedi? And slave pen? I suppose she’s who the boss was talking about when she said he cut and shot his way out of a Tapani slave market with some of the people in tow. He must have had a connection to this one. Maybe, given his age and no known family, he’s looking to raise a daughter? This relationship is confusing.”

The red light on his datapad caused him to swear again, and he quickly swapped datachips before he ran out of storage. It was good timing too, Raziel was speaking again.

“Tzugera, I’m sorry. I’m a Defender, it’s right in the name. I can’t help it sometimes. All I can do is make sure you’re prepared. Mentally, physically, and emotionally.”

“Yeah, it’s fine. It’s also late. How about you go try and sleep. Lucretia is warming up to you. She’s a cuddlemonster when she’s comfortable with someone.”

The roommate got up, leaving Raziel alone. “Lucretia,” Anton mumbled. “Probably a pet. If he was flying solo before this, I can only assume he’d want some kind of company, and cuddlemonster? Probably mammalian, but I could only guess.”

“Subject just stood up and is walking away from their outdoor setup. Oh, here he goes with the lightsaber again, he must be irritated.”

It was several long minutes of observation, with Raziel working through some rather hostile training techniques. Anton killed the laser mic since his subject was so far from anything he could target, and just kept watching.

“He has moments where I can sympathize with him, and then he goes and does this. If he’s not a Jedi, and probably not a Sith, I don’t know what he is. I don’t see the other Jedi working through this kind of combative training. All I know is, the more I watch, the more I’m glad I’m so far away, and the more I don’t want to upset him.”

0045 hours
Kiast

It wasn’t the noise that woke Anton up, it was the silence. He’d grown so accustomed to the local fauna and their night noises that when they went quiet, his sleep was interrupted. It was fifty fifty as to whether that was a good thing or not. On the plus side, he was aware of his situation, on the minus, however, he was aware of his situation.

The icy blue blade cut easily through the camouflaged shelter, leaving a good sized hole in the side. A hole big enough for Anton’s subject to enter, and enter he did, in only boots and pants, showing the physique that Anton had snarkily commented on more than once. In person, it made him much more terrifying.

“Don’t even bother with that blaster,” Raziel said, holding a hand out towards where Anton was reaching. It sailed across the small shelter and found itself in Raziel’s grasp. “Why are you hounding me?”

Anton probably would have kept sputtering in terror, except Raziel had doused his lightsaber, leaving them both in the dark. “Paycheck, alright?” Anton squeaked, only slightly calmed by the energy blade being put away. “This is my job.”

Anton’s vision was suddenly ruined when the glowlamp suddenly switched on, causing him to squint and blink. “Professional surveillance? Be glad you didn’t bring a rifle, I might have confused you for a sniper.”

“No, just observation, I swear!” Anton fired back, backing up against the shelter wall while still sitting on his cot, and not succeeding at either task all that well. “I was supposed to observe and report.”

“Okay, I’ll bite, me or the girl?”

“You. There’s no interest in her, or the other Jedi here. Just you.”

Raziel smirked even as he cleared the energy clip from Anton’s pistol, cycled the charge out, and tossed them both to the side. “Okay, I can live with that. Who’s paying you?”

“Abaricus Insurance Consolidated. You’ve hit a few of our clients, we’re doing fraud investigation.” Anton answered honestly. In the Core, he’d have plenty of legal right to what he was doing, but this far into the Outer Rim? No such luck.

“Insurance investigator? You’re surveilling me for insurance?” Raziel laughed, a deep booming laugh that filled the whole shelter. “You could have introduced yourself!”

“Not our policy,” Anton retorted, not sure if he should be more scared, or less. “Just observation, before the actual investigators show up.”

“Alright, listen kid. Tomorrow morning, you come by my ship for breakfast, sit down and actually ask me what you want to know, and I’ll tell you every bit of it, on the record. I’m getting tired of feeling watched, and we’ve got Kiveth eggs that’ll go bad if they don’t all get eaten soon. Am I clear?”

Anton nodded, not sure if that gesture even mattered to a Miraluka, before remembering his words. “Yeah, yeah sure. Breakfast tomorrow.”

“Don’t be late,” Raziel said, and left through the hole he’d made. “Oh, sorry about your camper.”

“It’s, I guess it’s fine,” Anton said, and sat there for several long minutes before getting up. First to use the refresher again, because Raziel had nearly scared it out of him already, and then finally to his small table.

“Observation report. The subject defies explanation. He defies it in every sense of the word. If I don’t show up at the home office within a week, I’ve been killed, that simple. This opportunity for interview though, I can’t pass it up. The subject detected me, and invited me to breakfast. I’m going.”

0315 hours
Coronet City, Corellia

Veela Mentez closed her own datapad following the end of Anton’s transmission. He didn’t need to know she’d heard everything, it wasn’t in his pay grade.

Near silently, she rose to her feet and cinched the belt to her Ottegan silk robe closed before walking to her own refresher. It was going to be an early day in the office, no reason to waste time sleeping when she could be bathing and putting her makeup on.

He’d said Defender, she’d heard that clearly. That meant Jensaarai. The warrior had just become a priority.

Competition
[Sunrider] [KDI] Foothold: Fiction
Textual submission

Foothold
Competition Entry
Seer Raziel
Clan Odan-Urr
House Sunrider
Pin 11584

“Raz, why are we here?” Soona asked, looking at him with the most puzzled expression on her face as they walked along the suspension bridge connecting the small spaceport attached to the mountain with the rest of the settlement. It, like the many others in Foothold, had seen far better days, and the way it swayed in the mountain wind didn’t seem to fill her with much confidence. “Are we trading?”

Raz shook his head, the gesture coming a moment or two later than it should have. He was still getting used to actually emoting for the benefit of the ‘sighted’. “No, this is actual business for the clan. It’s uh, cultural?”

“Cultural? We’re anthropologists now? It’s safer than how you usually make money, but why’d you agree?”

“Tzugura, there’s still volumes about me you don’t know,” Raziel snickered. Not even in his customary Jensaairai armor, he looked considerably more at ease than she did. “And you’re about to ask me to explain that.”

“Am I that transparent?” She asked, her small lavender hand gripping the handrail so tightly her knuckles were turning a deep violet. “Or was it the Force? Because if it was me being transparent, there’s a blind joke there.”

Raziel smirked and gave a shrug, neither action looking perfectly correct. “So my Jensaarai training wasn’t just lifting rocks and reading minds. Remember the whole spiel about the Living Force?”

Soona nodded, which prompted him to continue. “Well, we’re all part of it. Everything is connected at the deepest level. Through the Force, you and I are as much a part of some midwife on the lowest levels of Nar Shadda as her own family. The best way to understand that is to experience the universe.”

“So, you’re saying we’re here for a working vacation?”

“Yeah, that’s a fair way to put it. Besides, these are some of the most industrious people in the sector. They’ve been handed garbage and they’ve made all of this. The word around Kiast is the art produced here is a sleeper trend too. Might as well invest when the prices are still affordable.”

Soona shook her head in resignation, sending her headtails swinging. “A blind art dealer,”

“There’s the blind joke!” Raziel said in victory for her. “Okay, here we are, watch your step,” he added, casually avoiding the lip onto the next platform.

“Togruta, remember? My spatial awareness is probably better than yours Raz,”

“Stang, right. What do you see?”

“Everything is pieced together, like you said. I’m seeing shipping containers, chunks of busted up freighters, there’s what looks like part of an actual boat over there too. Everything is either flat Imperial gray or beautiful gradients of rust. The people, well, they actually look pretty okay,”

“That’s the vibe I’m getting, glad we agree. There’s pride here too, strong and fierce.” Raziel replied, taking everything in with his senses, both physical and with the Force. “They’re curious about us.”

“The stares said a lot of the same thing. Are we just moseying around?”

“No, we’re meeting someone. A human man named Shin Paradeuce. He said he’d keep an eye on the spaceport and meet up with us to guide us. Apparently there’s a pretty big disconnect in food quality here. The right diner is amazing, and the wrong one is a night hugging the refresher. I know I don’t want to make that mistake.”

Soona grimmaced and kept taking in the sights. People were out and about, despite the chill in the air. The exhaust from the repulsors keeping several sections of the city aloft blew a warm wind past on occasion but it wasn’t enough to really make things comfortable, it only served to guide foot traffic along more comfortable routes.

Predominately Sephi, like most of Kiast, there were intermingled other species. Mostly humans, but of course there were also a considerable share of what looked like half-breeds as well. All were dressed appropriately, and as could be expected, fashion took a back seat to functionality. Something that stood out to her was their hair. As a member of a hairless species, the way that many hairy species wore their aforementioned hair was fascinating to her, and the people of Foothold were no exception.

Almost nobody wore their hair short, and after a few minutes she also noticed that when two people seemed close enough to assume a romantic relationship, the males would keep their hair in a high topknot, while the females would wear a long braid. Other people wore their hair down but decorated with clipped-in ornaments.

“Hello there!” A friendly voice called from behind them. Soona turned, waited a second, and then put her hand on Raziel’s shoulder, reminding him that he should physically face the person addressing them.

“Shin Paradeuce?” Raziel asked once he’d oriented himself correctly.

“Yessir, that’s me,” Shin replied. “I’m here to be your guide.”

“Your accent, it’s nothing local. Where you from?” Raziel asked, hearing something distinct in the way the man spoke.

“Alderaan,” Shin answered. “Moved here after I deserted the Empire. I’ll give you three guesses why,”

“And the first two don’t count, I got you,” Raziel replied. It had been a little over thirty years since that planet’s destruction, an event he’d felt as a teenager, leaving him near catatonic for the better part of a day. He wasn’t inclined to discuss it any more than Shin likely was. “So, food?”

Shin gestured towards another suspension bridge. “You brought your appetite as well as your aide I take it,”

“I’m not his aide,” Soona interjected tiredly. At least he’d said aide. Seeing Eye alien was her least favorite of the misunderstandings she’d gotten since tying her star to Raziel’s. “Just along for the ride.”

“Sure thing miss. I should mention, because of the altitude and the atmosphere, game is pretty rare, the people here rely mostly on hydroponics and resequenced protein blocks for food. Fresh meat isn’t in high supply.”

“Lovely,” Soona muttered wryly. That’s all she needed, another bout of intestinal distress from vegetable poisoning.

“Oh, don’t be too worried, it just means lunch is going to run a little higher a tab, and if you’re staying a while, you might want to consider alternative means of nutrition. I’m guessing Miraluka are omnivorous?”

“Yeah, I can eat whatever,” Raziel piped up. “So, since we intentionally showed up around lunchtime, and further conveniently neglected to eat, let’s head towards an eatery. Best way to learn about people is to eat their food.”

Shin gestured towards another suspension bridge, this one looking like it was made from harvested TIE solar panels, including wiring which indicated the bridge was probably also generating power as well. “The diner I’m taking you to is owned by my father-in-law, so we’ll get a fair deal. Non-locals tend to get gouged a little bit. As you might imagine, there’s not a lot of creds cycling through the economy. Most of the money we make tends to the upkeep of the repulsors, mag-chains, and the gas sifters.”

“Can’t you sell the gases you skim to keep your city safe?” Raziel asked, curious as to why they weren’t profiting off of the material they had to skim to maintain their own safety.

“Legally, no. The planetary government claims one hundred percent of the resources, so anything we skim, we’re required by law to turn into the environmental authorities. We’re not subject to taxes on this property though, so I guess in a roundabout way, we are selling the gases off.” Shin shrugged, and then waved at a group of people that walked past.

“Friends of yours?” Soona asked.

“Neighbors,” Shin answered. “Looked like they were heading to the holodrome to take in whatever they’ve got to show. If they’re very very lucky, whatever it was might have even been filmed sometime after the Clone Wars.”

“I’m beginning to see what you all have to contend with,” Raziel replied, still just taking in everything he could. “Soona, what have you seen that you wanna know about?”

Soona took that as her cue, figuring he could sense the curiosity within her. “All of the hair here,” she began, and then paused when Shin nodded at her.

He stopped and pointed towards what looked like a small family in front of a shipping container turned secondhand clothing store. “Okay, so married means topknots and braids, but there’s room to be clever. I hate the way a topknot feels so I wear a ponytail instead. In the case of a married couple, hair is worn down at home.

“If you’re dating or engaged, you put ornaments in your hair. Since they can be made out of tiny bits of scrap there’s plenty of people willing to make matched sets. The real romantics make them as gifts for one another.

“Single folk are recognized by wearing their hair down, or wearing multiple braids or ties. Basically anything that isn’t set aside for someone else. The exception to that are widows, in which case women braid their scalp and let the rest hang, and men either tie or bun their scalps. Raz, that’d be you right now.”

Raziel patted the messy bun in his hair and undid it, letting his iron mane spill free. No reason to false advertise. “What about other species?”

“Well, we don’t have many of those, and we’re a small community, so the ones who can’t advertise have their business spread across town. Oh, and the people with short hair all work factory or machinery where it isn’t safe to wear long hair. Since they’re so crucial to keeping us alive and sustained there’s no judgment or anything.”

“Soona, anything else?” Raziel asked, remaining open to the Force.

“Yeah, I’m pretty sure the Bothawui Shades lost the Galactic Smashball Open, why’s that guy wearing a shirt claiming they were the winner’s last year?”

“Yeah, that. Well, like I said, we’re a really poor community so take what we can get. In this case, merchandise is made for both teams so they’re available for sale immediately. The things made for the losing team are sold off dirt cheap since they’re incorrect. We get most of our stuff that way.” Shin answered.

“It’s a common practice,” Raziel added, stopping for a minute to re-strap his boot. “Secondhand and functionally ‘useless’ items getting shipped off to make some kind of return on investment. That’s why merchandise at events like that is so expensive, it offsets the costs to make the stuff they can’t use.”

Shin murmured an agreement. “Exactly. We’re here at the diner, by the way,”

“Thank the stars,” Soona grumbled.

“For such a small thing you’re always hungry.” Raziel quipped at her.

“Big metabolism, small stomach,” she retorted and looked at Shin. “It smells fantastic, I’m looking forward to this.”

Shin opened the door for them, a metal bell dinging off-key to announce their entry. “Don’t get too excited, the place is good for here, but quality ingredients are hard to come by.”

A banged up server droid greeted them the minute they entered. “Grab a seat wherevah,” she said in a sassy Rim accent, clearly programmed by someone who’d seen too many holos.

She rolled up to them once they’d taken a seat and turned towards Shin. “Mistah Shin, whaddya havin’? You want the usual?”

“Yeah, sounds good. Any fresh meat today?”

“Got some fish from the rivah stream,” She answered, her hand moving a stylus that was purely for show over a small datapad that was equally for show. “Yer Pops is fryin’ it up for folks.”

When Shin glanced at his guests, the both of them nodded, prompting him to answer. “Two fish plates for my friends here,” he ordered and then leaned towards the two of them. “The fried tubers are phenomenal here, they grow wild on the mountains. I’d stay away from the aioli sauce salad though.”

“I heard that Mistah Shin,” the droid piped up. “But you ain’t wrong. Caf’s for everyone comin’ up.”

Once the droid delivered their Caf, the trio continued their conversation. “There’s some kids staring at you Raz,” Soona pointed out. “Your saber dangling off your belt?”

Raziel patted his hip where that very thing Soona had predicted turned out to be true. “Stang,” he swore quietly. A visible lightsaber was not the kind of attention he wanted. Without his armor he wasn’t nearly the imposing figure either, so the kids she’d noticed were a lot bolder than they might have otherwise been.

“Hey mister,” one of the Sephi children asked, approaching him. “Are you a Jedi?”

Raziel shook his head and remembered to turn and face the kid. “No kid, I’m no Jedi. My little sister makes props for theater, she made it for me and I can’t not wear it, she’d be heartbroken.”

The kid looked disappointed at that. “Oh, okay. Sorry to bother you Mister,”

Something about the kid’s aura and his tone of voice gave Raziel pause. “You looking for a Jedi’s help or something kid?”

“Yeah, my Dad is sick and I heard Jedi can heal people,” he replied, and turned to walk away.

“Now hold up a minute. I’m not a Jedi, but I used to be a medic back during the war. I might still be able to help.” Raziel offered. “How sick is he?”

Suddenly feeling much more positive, the kid answered him promptly. “He can’t work, he’s in bed all day except to go to the refresher and take a shower. He doesn’t eat much and he’s hurting a bunch.”

Hoping to get the answer he wanted, Raziel risked asking his next question. Force healing could seriously take it out of a guy and he needed the fuel. If he could eat, all the fat and carbs from the fried fish and tubers wouldn’t matter a bit at all. “How long has he been sick?”

“A couple of weeks. Mom’s been working extra shifts here to help.”

“What’s your name kid?” Raziel asked, deciding he could afford the time to eat.

“Klinto,” he replied. “Klinto Meetra.”

“Okay Klinto, I’m going to eat my lunch. While I’m eating, let your mom know I’m willing to help, okay?”

“Yessir!” Klinto answered and skittered off, quick as a shot.

“I can’t take you anywhere, can I?” Soona asked, not at all surprised at his willingness to help. In the short time she’d known him, it was just his way.

“No you really can’t,” Raziel agreed. “Shin, you don’t seem surprised.”

“I’m not, and I don’t know what you’ll be able to do for him. Daz Meetra works skimming gas. His lungs are probably more lesion than healthy tissue by now, like most of the skimmers. He needs long-term bacta treatment, but it’s expensive.”

“Long term Bacta is expensive for a lot of people. I’ll do the best I can for him, but this is going to take some work. Who’s in charge of Foothold?”

Shin shook his head. “We’re a functional anarchy. Nobody is in charge. We police our own, make decisions by vote, and generally don’t bother with much else besides survival. When the planetary government demands to speak to the mayor, someone will volunteer long enough to look the part and then go back to whatever they were doing before the government showed up.”

“I can’t promise any Jedi involvement here Shin, it’s not why I’m here, but I promised a report and all this is going in it. Push come to shove, I’ll steal a Bacta shipment, I don’t care. You’ve got a medical droid or two?”

“Yeah, couple of Two One Bees, if they’re operational.”

“I can fix those too,” Raziel offered and then faced Soona. “Better get comfortable tzugera, we might be here for a bit.”