"Was it true?" the Ongree thought to himself as he redirected his blade away from Ahsik and spun, abandoning his attack. His eyelids narrowed as his unique orbs rotated and scanned the threat. "Was he truly a threat or just a lost soul?" the thoughts raced through his mind. "Deep beneath the tortured surface is a glimmer of light. I see it.."
"Young one," Yuk, began. "Let us cease this bickering. I sense your anger, I urge you to let it go. Whatever fuels your hatred must be cast aside."
Ahsik's sick smile had an underlying softness about it. A glimpse of his true self perhaps?
"Your hatred will destroy you!" The Ongree continued, shouting into his opponent's troubled mind.
"Your words fall on deaf ears, Jedi," the Miraluka barked, spitting on the ground.
"I don't wish to fight you," Yuk replied, instantly interrupted by another tugging at his intuitive mind.
Just as the Ongree finished his phrase, via the Force, he could feel a creeping sensation crawl up his carapace. It persuaded him to instinctively leap away, allowing him to narrowly evade splintered bone as it cascaded by him. The fearful squawks of birds filled the darkened plane as the ground shook. A shriek rose above the chaos and bursting through a wall of skeletal remains was a Jungle Rancor. Quite large and obviously hungry.
Ahsik backpedaled and ducked as the beast's large hand swept overhead. He rolled upon hitting the ground and froze as he felt the other hand crashing down. His jaw fell open as the hand stiffened, all around it, the Force whirled and appeared to latch onto it. His shifted gaze fell upon the Ongree who stood with his arms outstretched and his eyes closed, concentrating in full. The Miraluka seized the moment and continued his roll and as he cleared the path of the hand, it crashed down next to him.
Dust burst into the air as Ahsik tried to flee but a single claw hooked his heel and slung him off to the side like a ragdoll. He crashed into a pile of bones with an 'oomf' but was physically fine, albeit jarred.
"Rally to me, Hunter!" The Jedi shouted in his native tongue. The Miraluka looked as if he were confused but subconsciously obeyed the order as he desperately clawed himself away and made it back to his feet. He called his staff to his grip and watched as the Ongree bound forward, his muscles filled with the Force. The verdure Lightsaber moaned as it fanned out and shrieked as it cauterized its way through a giant finger, separating it from the calloused hand.
The Rancor screamed in pain and out of its own rage, lashed out, its jaws wildly snapping as the back of its flailing hand snapped through decomposed remains. Ahsik roared as he propelled himself forward, he was fearless as he chambered his staff and swung it with as much force as he could muster. Aside from a horrendous cracking sound it did little to no damage against the Rancor's knee. However, it did provide a distraction. The creature growled once more and Yuk slid on his feet until he was staring into its beady eyes. Ahsik, wisely fell back.
The Warden allowed his vertical lids to shut as the Force anointed him. With precision, he hurled his Lightsaber at the creature and like a burning spear it stabbed into its flesh. The Rancor reared back and the Ongree flashed another hand, this time his left as he ignited his Patience and threw it too, then Serenity. The sabers melted through the beast as the Ongree controlled them and one by one they danced around the beast's core, slicing and stabbing until at last he found balance with Harmony. His weapons returned to his feet and one by one landed next to him on the ground.
Ahsik looked on, looking at the Ongree and the sabers the Jedi momentarily stepped away from. No doubt battling his own demons and the burden of choice.
Yuk, thumbed the switch on Harmony and a sanguine blade hissed to life. The Rancor struggled to remain standing as it toppled but caught itself.
"The Force is with me," the Ongree whispered, propelling himself forward. As one foot landed, the other followed, his steps guiding him into a lunge. As he stabbed into its neck, he ripped the blade vertically, slicing the head in two. The burning flesh had an orange glow as the guilt washed over him, a crashing wave of despair. "Rest, beast," he spoke, only to be cut off by the sound of a snap-hiss coming from behind him. He whirled around and haphazardly deflected the deceitful blow of the Hunter and with a masterful flurry removed Ahsik's arm at the shoulder. The Jedi called out to the Hilt in the now severed appendage and it trembled, obeying his call, springing free to nestle into his waiting palm. "Life is about choice, young one," lectured the Jedi as Warren writhed in an agony he was forced to feel everyday of his miserable existence. "I can free you," each Lightsaber rattled to his hands and each one found rest in his embrace as he clasped them back to his belt. "But you have to make the right choice," his hand reached out, calling one more into his mercy.
Positive Takeaways
You had a lot of atmospheric writing here, a good description of the setting and how Yuk felt in it.
Can Be Improved
Action. You took a Major Story hit here for lack of conflict. Sabers need to touch as it were, or some other form of conflict, it was lacking in this post.
Would highly suggest you utilize Markdown to convey internal thoughts, the general practice is with Italics, so that it’s clear when things are internalized. Multiple times I had to go back to make sure Yuk wasn’t talking to the air.
I almost marked you for a Major Realism error here, as Ahsik only has 1 baton. Instead, I went with a Minor Story detractor since you probably meant his electrostave. An added descriptor about them ‘crackling with energy’ or ‘wreathed in lightning’ or something would have avoided this.