Before Khryso had time to close the gap between them, Sinya had dispatched her attacker, but was clearly injured. Raising his lightsaber in a simple warding motion, weaving the blade in a figure eight, he took a moment to reach out into the Force and assess her condition. The Twi’lek hadn’t been thrilled at his attempt to connect them earlier, so he was careful not to probe too invasively. He could sense her anxiety and pain and a certain degree of anger. She was still conscious, still wanting to fight, but she didn’t seem entirely able. Something was beginning to sap her strength.
The Chiss carefully moved closer to her so he could help cover her while she was down and began to focus on bringing forth recuperative energy, allowing it to wash over Sinya like a tide. The Force should speed along her healing and hopefully make her mobile again. “Can you get up?”
Sinya pushed herself up into a sitting position, gritting her teeth as she tried to pull her right leg under her to stand up. “The venom is keeping my leg out,” she muttered bitterly, “but I can still get up.” She began to shift all of her weight onto her left leg, pushing herself up. The wound in her shoulder was already starting to feel better thanks to the warmth that had washed over her. As long as Khryso didn’t push his way back into her mind, she could put up with whatever he was doing. That didn’t mean she had to be thrilled about it, though.
“Their venom shouldn’t be that potent,” Khryso mused, his lips pressed tightly together, “they must have been enhanced somehow…”
That was right, Sinya recalled, their venom shouldn’t be much more than an irritant to an adult humanoid. She was small, but she wasn’t so small that it should be leaving her leg numb and immobile. She didn’t have much more time to consider it, however, as one of the vornskr darted out of the trees, making a break for her. Evidently, it had taken her standing awkwardly on one leg as a sign of weakness. It was mistaken. A slight blip in the back of her mind had given her a reminder to focus just a moment before the creature appeared, allowing her to bring her saber up in a quick vertical slash, catching the side of the creature’s face and causing it to yelp in surprise, quickly circling around to her right, hoping to force her onto her weakened leg.
Khryso, however, had shifted his position, shifting his mind back into combat mode. Pivoting on his left leg, passing through the curtain of vines, the Chiss was able to throw his lightsaber, sending it spinning into the vornskr’s side. As the creature collapsed, its remaining packmates seized on the opportunity. A pair of black blurs emerged, striking at either side of the now disarmed Sith.
Khryso threw himself backwards, reaching out to call his lightsaber back to his hand. The vornskrs had missed their pounces, but as they landed, the two canines quickly pressed their advantage, one jumping on Khryso while the other bared its fangs at Sinya, trying to prevent her from assisting Khryso. Thankfully, the Chiss still had his blaster handy, pumping his assailant with several stun blasts as his lightsaber returned to his hand. With a quick flourish, he decapitated the dazed creature.
Upon seeing its packmate die, the final vornskr was momentarily distracted, giving Sinya the opportunity to push forward, aggressively striking at the canine with her saber. The creature tried to retreat, but the Twi’lek successfully struck it down. However, the momentum of her retaliation caused her to tumble forward, landing in the muck of the marsh.
Khryso slowly stood up, muttering muffled curses as he tried to wipe the grass and mud from his pants and cape. After a moment, he composed himself, taking a deep breath, before spotting Sinya and moving to her side. Reaching out, he grabbed her arm and helped her back to her feet. The Twi’lek was frustrated, but at this point she was just glad their task was completed. “Thanks, but I’ll be fine.”
Khryso nodded, retreating and taking a moment to look around at the dead animals. “Well done, Acolyte. Let’s get out of here. I’ll carry the prisoners.” Khryso moved over to the two stunned but still living vornskrs and began to lift one.
“I can carry one,” Sinya said, making her way over to the pile.
“Are you sure?” Khryso asked, eyeing her cautiously. The truth of the matter was, he didn’t want to carry either of the beasts. However, Sinya was small, injured, and her leg was clearly not working, so it only seemed right of him to take the load.
“I am,” she said bluntly, fixing her eyes on one of the creatures and concentrating. Reaching her hands out, she called upon the Force as it bubbled up inside of her, allowing its energy to spread out and surround the unconscious animal. Slowly but surely, the vornskr began to lift from the ground, hovering next to Sinya.
Khryso spread his hands in a gesture of defeat before turning to the other creature and hoisting it over his shoulder. He immediately regretted it as the smell of wild filth filled his awareness and the creature’s dirty hide stained his clothes. He really couldn’t wait to get out of here, the Chiss needed a nice long steam. His robes and cape could use one, too.
The two Plagueians began the long trek back to the facility, carrying the captured specimens.
Positive Takeaways
God, I love alliteration, and this was a great description, both of scenery and of Sense. In general your post felt like a feast for scene setting. I adored each bit of description of the oh-so-vile swamps and got a chuckle at Khryso stepping around with his cape up to keep it clean at the opener.
Again, feast for the eyes. Your post was also very clean. I found almost no grammatical errors at all, and I'm the mean eye for syntax. A missed plural possessive here, a missed hyphen there. You have a tendency to conjoin your dialogue a lot, which got a bit tiresome to the eyes where it felt there should be full stops/pauses, but they were not technically incorrect. Well done.
Can Be Improved
For the second post of this battle, and your first post, there was again no combat whatsoever. Lovely descriptions and well-written examples of Powers are nice, but they needed to be put to use in combat for an ACC match. This was the chance for you to snatch the match after Sinya's first post missed out, but instead you're both staring down the same detractor. It may be tempting to avoid combat between characters in a Cooperative Hall match, or in a Singular Style format, but if you're going to ACC, you should be fighting an established enemy— in this case, your vornskrs.