Blood and viscera splattered the stones.
The yelps of pain and gnashing, snarling howls choking off with the swing of a saber had Ruka clenching his jaw. His husband would have been horrified, and the animal noises reminded him of so many before them, how most Near-Humans sounded the same when they were blown to pieces too--
"Kalen, stop!" he called out, but it felt like his voice was ripped away by the shades before the words could reach. "Stop it, STOP IT, AY! It ain't they fault! Killing is a last resort--"
Was it the fear, the dread of this place that drove the Jedi? Or was this simply how he'd been taught, in his other Galaxy? That to bear a saber was to wield death?
Or perhaps Plagueis had already corrupted him so?
Ruka's blades stayed sheathed, his eyes and hands snapping this way and that as he lifted and tossed another canine away while holding others back. Their baying echoed like that in his dreams, along with the churn of water and shadow and Kalen's face swallowed up. The Jedi cut down another vornskyr, calling out.
"Someone is possessing them, controlling them! I'll find them! It's not a true Trial. Someone is messing with us."
And he went charging off, to the third and final platform.
"Kalen!" Ruka tried to shout. He wrestled away from grasping wraiths, bile rising in his throat to feel phantom touches pawing over his skin, cold sinking through his armor. "Kalen, wait for me!"
This was almost worse than his other apprentices. Almost.
Narrowing his eyes, the Mirialan focused on that third platform, the straight rise of the stairs, the fallen pillars and overgrowth. If he could just keep them together, maybe he could reach the Jedi, show him that he was being manipulated by the Dark.
For the Dark was patient, and it was generous and kind. But it would also fill every possible crevice it could, sink into any gap, and a fresh as a newborn Jedi that had grown up on a colony ship amongst fellow Jedi, who had never known Darkness, was a prime target.
Ruka knew. The Dark bent to him.
He slammed his hand down, shoving the rest of the remaining dogs away in a telekinetic wave, then focused on the platform. He fixed his half-blind eyes on one spot as the world washed out, and willed the space between to collapse, for the world to bend around him, the distance to be gone. He needed to be there.
And so he was.
His boots skipped the scruff of crumbling stone, and the Master caught himself on the pillar he nearly phased right into, palms slamming into its surface. He shoved off, breathing out, and looked around for Kalen as the shadows started gathering again, whispers rising to shouts.
"Kalen! Kalen?"
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"Don't worry, Master Ruka, I'll free us!" The Human tossed the assurance over his shoulder as he ran, breathing hard from exertion. He raised his communicator to his face, panting, "D, have Karracca get the engines going and something for restraints ready, we've got a mystery perpetrator."
His droid beeped back and affirmative as Kalen crossed the swinging bridge, his stomach pitching wildly, but no worse than a near-crash on a starship amongst pergills. He held his saber up for light, as their surroundings had darkened with those shadows again. Whoever was playing tricks, he would stop them.
The Jedi leapt the last few feet, tucking into a roll across the ground. He dropped down behind a pillar, trying to catch his breath, spreading out his senses. Everything was mired in the Force, Dark and oppressive. Grunting, Kalen forced himself to his feet and strode into the center of the platform, lightsaber at the ready. His Code repeated in his mind. He thought of how some of his Trials had been loosely bestowed. But here he would show courage. Would show he could be just as competent in this Galaxy as he had been with his fleet, in their own little world, where he had been a Knight. Not someone others kept looking at as clueless and in need of assistance...
The thoughts crept in, swirling, whispers rising, roaring. The Jedi struggled, clinging to the words. No emotion, Peace. Serenity. Knowledge. He knew what he was doing.
A figure emerged from the shadows, trailing smoke and radiating Dark power. Kalen, palms sweat-slick, squared his stance and advanced, swinging two-handed with a cry.
His blade hit something, and unexpectedly, there was resistance and give, when a saber normally sheared through anything. A cry came, and then as he stumbled forward, thrown by encountering weight, he found himself flung back, hovering in the air and trapped. He thrashed, but couldn't move, limbs tight to his sides in an invisible hold.
"...alen! Kalen!"
Suddenly, sound poured back in. The whispering cacophony vanished, as did the darkness around them. Below him, Ruka stood in the sunlight that washed over the treetops, his pale eyes wide and blood on his neck and chin. For a moment Kalen thought the vornskyrs had wounded him, but it didn't look like a bite. It looked like--
Burnt collar edges. Burnt edges on the bleeding cut. A saber wound.
There was blood on Kalen's hands and soaked clothes, both animal and Ruka's.
Slowly, the Mirialan lowered his arm. Kalen touched back down, heaving, and collapsed as his body was released from its binding. Ruka reached up to his golden cowl, gripping it where it wrapped around his neck and head. His hand was shaking.
"If this wasn't...you would have killed me, Kalen," he said. "Kalen. You would have killed me, and you just went right through them vornskyrs, and-- listen. It's the Dark. I can feel it in you. Worse than before. What did Furious and them do to you?"
"I..." Kalen looked to his saber on the ground, also bloodied, and had no answer. "I...I don't know, Master."
And despite Ruka's rather vehement accusation, he didn't think his Clan had much to do with it, either.
The whispers that had been impressions solidified in his mind.
Not ready, gaps in his training, not ready to hold a lightsaber, unworthy of it, unworthy of a real Trial, conflicted, lost, unfocused, but you can be molded, make you not weak, strong, you can be strong again.
"Master Ruka..." Kalen looked up, then bowed his head. "I think... I'm so sorry, I think I need to meditate on this."
"You'll need to do more than that," Ruka muttered, rubbing at his burned throat, a sharp, condemning look on his face. His eyes creased though after a moment to make sure it sunk in. "Listen, Kalen. If you face the Dark, you can control it, but it is dangerous and it will always be dangerous. Don't go down that path if you can't come back from it, or you will hurt not just you but everybody around you. And then I'll have to stop you, hung in the air. "You don't got to do it alone though. You can stand together with the Light. You can be the Light. But you're...ay, you need more training. A lot more. I don't mean just the Force. I mean discipline."
"Yeah...yeah, I do."
Ruka offered him a hand, and Kalen took it, rising. They watched the ship pull up, hovering and making the bridges sway so much they'd surely rip free. The remaining vornskyrs had long since scattered.
The pair left the trial grounds, the old stones sated by the spill of blood.
You switch from present tense to past tense after your first paragraph (has been a strange series of events to had finally heard back). While past tense is generally correct, do make sure to watch that in futurebattles
"Sorry for bringing into this...whatever this is" You missed the world "you" in there. You also didn't punctuate this.