Golden Envoy Karracca vs. Lucien d’Valrois

Golden Envoy Karracca, Peacekeeper

Equite 1, Equite tier, Envoy Corps
Male Wookiee, Jedi, Juggernaut, Sentinel
vs.

Lucien d’Valrois

Equite 1, Equite tier, Unaffiliated
Male Anzati, Sith, Shadow, Krath
Hall Duelist Hall
Messages 4 out of 4
Time Limit 7 Days
Battle Style Alternative Ending
Battle Status Judged
Combatants Golden Envoy Karracca, Lucien d’Valrois
Winner Lucien d’Valrois
Force Setting Standard
Weapon Setting Standard
Golden Envoy Karracca's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Lucien d’Valrois's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Venue Coruscant: Club Kasakar
Last Post 1 October, 2025 4:57 PM UTC
Judge #1: Zuza Lottson
  Golden Envoy Karracca Lucien d’Valrois
Syntax - 15% 4 5
Story - 40% 4 4
Realism - 30% 4 3
Creativity - 15% 4 5
Total 4.0 4.0
Super super close match in my opinion! I feel like Lucien missed some bits about Karra as a character however, that while he led with rage he wasn't necessarily bound to it (Going by character aspects and the rest of his ability set). Yet, I really liked Lucien's use of the scenery, igniting the liquor is a really grounded way to loop the audience back into the setting and not just the fight. My preference leans toward Kalen in this instance as I feel his ending was more realistic, but major kudos to you both. I could really feel the emotions of both characters through the writing.
Judge #2: Raiju
  Golden Envoy Karracca Lucien d’Valrois
Syntax - 15% 4 4
Story - 40% 4 4
Realism - 30% 4 3
Creativity - 15% 4 5
Total 4.0 3.85
Thanks for the great read, folks. I thoroughly enjoyed this match, which made it tough to judge but that's a good thing. I enjoyed the story and direction each of you took. I would say things were pretty evenly matched in terms of syntax; no grand errors to my eyes, just some awkward phasing on both sides that required re-reading to understand. The description of the room going up in flames was creative and such I awarded extra points for this category. However, the shortness of Lucien's final post impacted the pacing of the final combat so to me this resulted hurting my suspension of disbelief and therefore result in a lower realism score. That said, I would gladly read anything either of you writes in the future, this was a fun and entertaining battle.
Judge #3: Edgar Drachen
  Golden Envoy Karracca Lucien d’Valrois
Syntax - 15% 5 5
Story - 40% 4 5
Realism - 30% 4 5
Creativity - 15% 5 5
Total 4.3 5.0
Good Match and a fun read.
Totals
Golden Envoy Karracca 4.1
Lucien d’Valrois 4.28
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Coruscant Club Kasakar

Anakin once visited Coruscant’s underbelly, as an escort for Supreme Chancellor Palpatine’s secret visit. Festering within the 2685th level of Coruscant, it is a feeding ground to the best and worst criminals—bureaucrats among them. Slaves and contraband are bought and sold on the hour, while others gamble with their lives or ill-gotten gains on the roll of a chance cube.

Others are content to seek entertainment, watching holographic projections of exotic dancers in various states of undress—the likes of which will no doubt be traded as slaves in exchange for credits or other services. Games of chance are often obscured under the sheer volume of patrons gathered around the game tables. Smaller round tables serve for social or business gatherings, with more discreet booths tucked into alcoves along the walls.

Having undergone unfinished renovations at some point, the ceiling has been raised to resemble that of a warehouse. Smoke gathers among the durasteel supports, making a buffer for the intense red and violet beams lighting the cesspit below. Zeltron perfumes are among the most common smells in the establishment, while the rolling of dice cubes make for the most recognizable sound above the music. Fights don’t often break out, and violence is often dissuaded at the sight of armoured bouncers several heads taller than most humanoids

Karracca had been on the trail of his target for a week now. Ever since their last encounter the old and overweight Wookie envoy had rekindled some of his old ‘Rebel spirit’. The desire to see justice done on behalf of generations who had been betrayed, robbed, extorted or subjugated by the Anzati princelings family was all consuming now.

He had used his contacts throughout the galaxy in his tireless tracking and pursuit of Lucien. Finally Karracca got a tip from a grand nephew of his who worked as a bouncer at Club Kasakar on Coruscant. Lucien had just walked in with a few ‘friends of the night’. Without hesitation he raced to the planet of never ending duracrete and steel. The former Capital of the Empire, the Galactic and Old Republics was in the middle of its evening when he landed. Karracca didn't take but a second to marvel at the fact that this was the first time he'd been back there in three and a half decades. The urge to find and kill or capture Lucien was his only focus.

He walked in through the front door, allowed in by his distant relative who gave the old honoured wookie a smile and a nod. As soon as he got in the large club with the warehouse aesthetic he spotted his target. Luckily Lucien's back was facing him. Overcome by rage Karracca ignited his lightsaber and charged at his foe, covering the 15 metres between them in 2 and a half large bounds.

The look of horror on one of Lucien's friends and the sounds of the lightsaber hiss alerted him to the danger. He quickly pulled one of his blades and leapt up out of the booth he was in, back flipping over top of the charging Wookie. Karacca's wild slash as the young aristocrat soared over him followed through and sliced the table Lucien was sitting at in half.

“You're mine now!” Karracca roared in Shryiwook. The bass and carnal rage in his voice startled every patron In the joint into fleeing for the exit in terror.

“Took you long enough old man” Lucien taunted as he parried and countered Karracca's methodical but intense lightsaber hacks and thrusts. He spun away from another attack and tried to stab the massive Wookie from the side.

Karracca had been anticipating some sort of flank attack and was prepared. He caught Lucien's arm as he tried the doomed attack. Karracca smiled and then roared, took a side step, whirled around and flung Lucien 30 feet across the room into the bar area causing several dozen bottles of fine liquor to be smashed. As Lucien crashed down to the floor after smashing the back of the bar to bits, Karracca lost sight of his opponent and quickly rushed over to the bar. Lucien had sensed the Wookie was charging him again and waited for a half second in ambush.

As the Wookie leapt over the bar Lucien slashed at him, slicing a large gash into Karracca's right leg. When Karracca landed, he howled in rage and pain and gave Lucien a backhanded strike with his off handed paw that knocked Lucien back up and over the front side of the bar again.

Lucien hit the floor hard, a shower of glass and spilled liquor raining down around him. The impact rattled his ribs, each breath a stab of fire that forced him to grit his teeth. Whiskey stung his cuts, searing the open flesh on his arms and neck as it mingled with the copper tang of blood. For a heartbeat, he lay still among the shattered bottles, letting the pain wash through him until it sharpened into clarity.

The heavy thud of boots — no, not boots. Paws. The unmistakable weight of a Wookie bearing down on him in full fury — reverberated through the floor. Karracca was closing fast. The envoy’s guttural roars carried across the club, drowning out the panicked screams of fleeing patrons. Tables overturned, credits scattered, dice cubes rolled underfoot as gamblers shoved past one another to escape. The holographic dancers flickered and vanished mid-routine, their projectors damaged by the chaos.

Lucien pushed himself to one knee, glass crunching beneath him. He tilted his head just enough to catch sight of his opponent through the haze of smoke and flashing crimson lights. The massive shape of Karracca filled his vision, lightsaber blazing, eyes wild with righteous fury.

Perfect. Rage made him predictable.

Lucien’s lip curled into a smirk. He drew his blade to life with a hiss, the violet light cutting through the murk. “You swing like a drunk with a club,” he called out, his aristocratic drawl sharp, mocking. His voice carried across the burning club like a knife through silk. “Tell me, does it sting that your people’s freedom rests on the back of an old, limping brute?”

Karracca’s roar shook the air as if the walls themselves trembled. He hurled himself forward, all brute force and raw emotion, a storm of fur and fury. Lucien let him come. Timing was everything. At the last instant, he slid sideways into the smoke and flashing beams, his cloak whipping in his wake. The Wookie’s paw slammed into splintered wood and glass instead of flesh, the impact shattering what remained of the bar. Bottles cascaded from their shelves in a glittering rain.

The world exploded into fire.

A spark from Lucien’s blade ignited the spilled liquor, and orange flames leapt skyward, consuming shelves and shattered glass in an instant. Heat blasted outward in a wave, singeing the edges of Lucien’s cloak. Shadows writhed across the durasteel supports overhead, broken by pulsing crimson and violet light. The screams of those few patrons still scrambling to escape mingled with the crackle of burning alcohol.

Lucien stepped through the firelight, his eyes narrowed. The flames painted him in shades of infernal violet, every movement deliberate, precise. Where Karracca fought like an avalanche, Lucien moved like a dagger — sharp, sudden, cutting deep.

He struck low, blade hissing through smoke toward the Wookie’s wounded leg. Karracca bellowed and swung low, intercepting the strike with sheer muscle. Sparks screamed into the air as violet clashed against crimson. But his footing faltered on the slick, liquor-soaked floor. Lucien felt the tremor in his opponent’s stance — the momentary imbalance — and pressed the attack.

A feint high, blade sweeping toward the envoy’s throat. Karracca raised his guard instinctively. Too slow. Lucien twisted, driving his saber down into the counter instead. Sparks showered them both as durasteel screamed under the blade’s kiss. With the distraction in place, Lucien snapped his heel into the gash in the Wookie’s thigh.

Karracca’s howl tore through the club, shaking bottles from their shelves and rattling the very supports overhead. He staggered, massive frame swaying under the sudden surge of pain.

Lucien stepped back, rolling his shoulders as if the strike had cost him nothing. In truth, every movement lanced his body with fire. His ribs ached from the throw, his muscles burned from exertion, and blood still dripped down his temple where glass had bitten deep. But he would never show weakness. Not to this beast.

He straightened, voice cold, eyes glinting with cruel delight. “Careful, old brute. You’re bleeding strength with every swing. And when the rage burns out, all that will be left of you is a corpse in a gutter.”

Karracca snarled, saliva flashing in the firelight, and charged again. Tables splintered under his advance, booths collapsed, the ground itself seeming to quake. Lucien braced. He couldn’t stop the charge head-on — not with brute force. But he could turn it.

As the Wookie bore down on him, Lucien pivoted and let himself fall into a backward roll. Karracca’s slash missed by a hair’s breadth, carving a glowing scar through the floor where Lucien had stood. Momentum carried the envoy past his mark, just enough for Lucien to rise behind him. With a single fluid motion, Lucien brought his blade down across Karracca’s shoulder.

The strike glanced off fur and armor weave, not deep enough to maim, but enough to leave a smoking gash across the envoy’s back. The Wookie howled again, spinning with frightening speed for his size, massive paw lashing out. Lucien barely raised his blade in time, the impact shuddering down his arm and forcing him back several steps. His grip trembled, but he held firm.

The fire spread wider now, smoke gathering thick near the ceiling. The club was a battlefield of shifting shadows, scarlet beams of light cutting through clouds of smoke, the floor slick with alcohol and blood. Overturned tables smoldered, their metal frames glowing in the heat. The air reeked of scorched fur, burned liquor, and rage.

Lucien’s chest rose and fell, breath ragged, but his smirk never faltered. He circled Karracca, blade low, watching the envoy’s movements with a predator’s patience. Every stagger, every roar, every heavy swing confirmed what Lucien already knew — the Wookie was burning himself out. The wound in his leg slowed him, the gash across his back stiffened his movements, and his fury blinded him to finesse.

Lucien stopped circling, standing tall amid the smoke. His voice carried like steel over the crackle of flames. “Do you feel it yet, Karracca? The weight of time. Every step is slower, every strike weaker. You’re not the Rebel firebrand you once were. You’re just another relic, lashing out at shadows.”

He raised his blade in salute, mocking, aristocratic, violet light glinting in his eyes. “And I am the shadow that will bury you.”

The duel was far from over. But already, Lucien could taste victory in the air, sharp as blood and smoke.

The kid was right. Karracca was burning energy with every move at this point. But in terms of his ability to utilize the force, those skills had not nearly been drained. Up until this point in the fight Karracca had been running on adrenaline, instinct and his loathing of Lucien and his entire family.

“You're right…I've let my hate for your family blind me for years” Karracca growled, not knowing or caring if Lucien even understood his species language. He did intentionally start facing the fact that he was out of breath. As he shuffled towards his foe he exaggerated his limp. Yeah it hurt, and it would require a stay in a Bacta tank but he had fought though worse, for longer, against far better opponents this upstart sprite. Karracca motioned his head sideways, using the Force to fling a metal chair right at Lucien from his hand side.. The kid sliced the chair in half before it did any damage.

Karracca waved he had in the opposite direction and hurled a jagged piece of wooden paneling from the bar at the Lucien, this time from his right. Lucien then swung to slice that flying object in half as he had done with the previous one, but as he did so Karracca prepared himself, and when the panel was split in half by Lucien's blade one side of it momentarily blocked his view before it clattered to the floor. This is precisely when Karracaa sprung his trap. Using the Force to pull a loose stack of chairs that was behind Lucian right towards him. He had been focusing on performing this maneuver for several seconds as the 2 had traded taunts. The chairs crunched into Lucien's back, knocking him stumbling forwards. Karracca simply took one step forward on his good leg, and landed a swinging lariat(aka a clothesline). Lucian had realized at the last second what was happening and tried to raise his blade up to defend himself, but was too little too late. The wookie's offhand arm connected with Lucien's forearm causing the kid to punch himself in the face a millisecond before the Wookie followed by smashing through the stumbling Luciens shoulder and neck area. 

The force of the blow flipped the young man off his feet and rotated him two hundred and seventy degrees around causing him to land face first on the floor. Before giving the kid a second to recover or wiggle away Karracca drove the knee of his good leg into the back of Lucien before quickly placing all of his weight on top of him. Karracca could not hold back his urge to make sure the kid was finished and threw a quick sharp punch that landed in the back of Lucien's head as he began to  struggle. The blow rocked the aristocrat's head into the hard floorboards and momentarily knocked him unconscious.

The bar was beginning to catch fire at this point and Karracca roared out “Cousin! Do you have any mag-cuffs I can borrow?”

Karracca's much younger distant cousin who had watched on in shock from his post near the entrance to the club the entire time came up behind his fellow wookie and offered the old envoy a pair of cuffs which he quickly slapped onto Lucien.

“I thought you were just gonna arrest the guy and destroy the place Karracca, why the rage, what the sith is this all about?” the cousin roared in Shryiwook.

“I did just arrest him…as for why…his family's existence offends my sensibilities young one…offends them greatly. If you get fired over this, give me a call, I'll give you a job.” With that Karracca grabbed up the lithe little unconscious Sith with one hand and began to limp his way over to the entrance as he could hear sirens approaching from all around them. This bounty was his and no one was going to get in the way of him cashing in on it.

The club was burning itself hollow. Flames licked up the walls, smoke rolled across the ceiling, and every step crunched on shattered glass. Lucien stood in the inferno with his blade low at his side, chest heaving from the effort of battle. Across from him, the Wookiee still refused to yield.

Karracca’s fur was scorched, blood streaked his leg and back, but his eyes burned with undimmed fury. He pounded his chest with one massive paw and bellowed, “Raaaghhh hurrnakhhh rrrawhhrr!” The guttural roar rattled the rafters — a promise of vengeance that Lucien could not understand, but he caught the intent in the rage behind it.

Lucien smirked, his aristocratic drawl cutting through the roar. “Your words are wasted on me, beast. Rage is the only language you know.”

The envoy charged, blade raised high, his weight shaking the floor as he bore down with reckless abandon. Lucien waited — just long enough to bait the swing — and then moved. A sidestep into smoke, a flicker of shadow, and the violet blade sang to life at the Wookiee’s flank.

Karracca pivoted, faster than his size should have allowed, but his wounded leg betrayed him. He stumbled on the slick floor, momentum dragging him a step too far. Lucien’s strike cut low, carving deep into the thigh already weakened from before. Bone and sinew gave way with a sickening hiss of burning flesh.

The roar that followed shook the walls. “Raaaaghhhhhhrrrhhhnnkkk!” Karracca dropped to one knee, lightsaber faltering in his grip. Still he swung, a desperate horizontal slash meant to take Lucien’s head.

The Anzati leaned back, cloak singed by the blade’s heat, then stepped in with predatory precision. His claymore swept down in a brutal arc, violet light cutting clean through the envoy’s throat.

Silence followed. Karracca’s roar died in a wet, gurgling choke as his massive form toppled forward, shaking the floor with the impact. The crimson saber sputtered and died in the Wookiee’s lifeless grip.

Lucien stood over him, blood and fire painting his silhouette. He exhaled once, slow and measured, before sheathing his blade. His voice was calm, cold, without triumph.

“All your fury, and for what? Just another corpse in my path.”

Without another glance at the fallen envoy, Lucien turned and walked into the smoke, swallowed by flame and shadow.