Captain Taro "Saint" Priak vs. Ghost Luka Zarkot

Captain Taro "Saint" Priak, Marksman

Equite 4, Equite tier, The Tenixir Revenants
Male Kyuzo / Falleen, Force Disciple, Nightslinger, Criminal Syndicate
vs.

Ghost Luka Zarkot

Equite 4, Equite tier, Clan Arcona
Genderfluid Human, Force Disciple, Arcanist
Hall ACC Championship: Revival [2026] - Beginners/Intermediate Tournament
Messages 4 out of 4
Time Limit 3 Days
Competition ACC Championship: Revival [2026] - Beginners/Intermediate Tournament
Battle Style Alternative Ending
Battle Status Judged
Combatants Captain Taro "Saint" Priak , Ghost Luka Zarkot
Winner Captain Taro "Saint" Priak
Force Setting Standard
Weapon Setting Standard
Captain Taro "Saint" Priak's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Ghost Luka Zarkot's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Venue Dagobah: Dragonsnake Bog
Last Post 25 September, 2026 11:27 PM UTC
Judge #1: Vincent Brujah
  Captain Taro "Saint" Priak Ghost Luka Zarkot
Syntax - 15% 4 5
Story - 40% 5 5
Realism - 30% 5 4
Creativity - 15% 5 5
Total 4.85 4.7
This was a really enjoyable read, with a great story. I was curious how many people would continue on with the tournament story on their own accord and how many would switch it up. Switching it up here made for a really interesting story and a cool reason for the encounter between the two characters. Bril had a very strong first post. I think honestly, I prefer Luka's final post, but you both wrote well and had some very cool moments in your posts. Let's get to the score breakdown. I gave you both 5s in Creativity and Story. That mostly speaks for itself, but well done on the story overall. Bril did a fantastic job with opening the scene and giving a reason for all of this to go down. Luka did excellent with the combat itself and I thought the way the dragonsnake was introduced and open for each writer to take their own crack at what it was going to do in the final posts was a cool, and generous way to go about it. For Syntax, there were a few places in Bril's posts where I noticed strange/incorrect punctuation, I deducted a point there for Bril while giving Luka a 5. For Realism, there were a couple things that I considered for Luka's posts. Based on your the reaction to the thermal detonator explosion and the injury sustained when striking the tree in your first post, I pretty much took that as a heavy back injury, perhaps even a broken back. While you do have Healing as a Force power, I felt like healing yourself from that severe of an injury well enough to have you scaling a tree to escape the dragonsnake a few moments later really pushed the envelope on realism without further explanation (stating something like you had the wind knocked out of you and initially thought that the injury was worse than it really was, something akin to that). I also really had to think for a minute about the way you had the dragonsnake approach, which seemed to be by having it tunnel through the ground. It's an aquatic creature, so that's tough, but if it was close enough proximity to the water itself, I could buy it as being really, really thin mud. I'd say keep things like that in mind in the future. The better description you can give, the more you are justifying the actions in your post. As it stands, I deducted one point from Realism for the reasons noted. One other thing I thought I should mention is that the Deep Bond II feat notes that the bonded creature must be listed in the loadout description, and the loadout doesn't note a creature. That's minor for me, since you can only bring the one creature anyway... but rules are rules, so keep that in mind and make sure that you update your loadout description to note that your nexu is your bonded creature in the future. Overall, a close battle, and a very high scoring one. Bril ends up with the slightly higher score and moves on to the next round.
Totals
Captain Taro "Saint" Priak 4.85
Ghost Luka Zarkot 4.7
Posts

dagobah

Located on the Rimma Trade Route within the Outer Rim territories, Dagobah could very well be the best place in the Galaxy to hide. The remote location of the planet in combination with the lack of any kind of advanced civilization made it a system of little value to any kind of galactic government. The planet is hot, humid, and mostly filled with foggy, swamp-like jungles.

Dragonsnake Bog is a murky lagoon on the surface of the planet. Fog covers the cloudy waters of the bog. The waters ranged in depth, but at its deepest the bog was roughly 4 meters deep. Even in the shallow areas, the floor of the bog was thick with mud, making it easy for something or someone to get stuck within the lagoon.

True to its name, Dragonsnake Bog was the home of the large, snake-like creature known as the dragonsnake. The beast had an average length of 7 meters and weight of roughly 200 kilograms, though some fully grown dragonsnakes were much larger. It had large, venomous fangs that could help it to subdue prey and a hunger that was nearly unmatched. The dragonsnake usually hid just below the surface of the water, waiting for an opportunity to find its next meal. Once the creature spotted a snack, it would quickly lunge out to attack it.

Taro Priak sighed while watching his droid, ST-10, survey the damage to his ship’s hull. Dagobah’s humid, musty air weighed on him, rendering every centimeter of exposed skin on his face uncomfortably slick.

The Voidskipper was a modified KST-100 that had served him well in his pirating affairs, but an encounter with a school of Bakros – “void sharks” as they were sometimes called – left it with several bite marks across its surface. He thought they could only be found deep within Wild Space, but the damned things were near the Kessel Sector, too. He’d heard tales of all types of strange creatures that nature cooked up, but a spaceborne predator capable of chewing through starship hulls like they were flimsiplast took the cake.

“The damage appears to be cosmetic in nature,” announced ST-10, “but our time here will allow me to perform a more thorough examination of the hull’s integrity.”

Taro spat on the ground to clear his mouth of excess saliva produced by the chewing tabac tucked between his bottom lip and gums. “And it’ll give us time to let some of this heat on us die down. Yifei’s tip was worth the cost, because this haul is gonna earn us enough credits to cover the cost of repairs and plenty more.”

“Worth the credits indeed,” ST-10 concurred, “though, I do wonder why this shipment was so easy for us to steal. It is not the normal operating procedure for Outer Rim cargo haulers to travel with such inadequate protection.”

The droid’s pontificating earned a raised brow from Taro. “You ever hear the phrase, ‘don’t look a gift fathier in the mouth,’ Stetson? You’ve got to learn to not question when the Galaxy sees fit to bless us.”

ST-10’s photoreceptors flickered for a moment, which Taro recognized as a sign that it was considering his answer. After a moment, it spoke again. “This idiom is nonsensical. Who is gifting quadrupedal herbivores, and why would you ever peer into their mouths?”

Taro shook his head while stifling a chuckle. “Just get back to checkin’ out the ship, will you?”

Elsewhere, Luka Zarkot and their nexu companion, Bico, crept across Dagobah’s muddy ground at a moderate pace. In their left hand, Luka held a small datapad whose screen displayed the location of a tracker further ahead in the swamp.

“Come on, Bico,” they said, “whoever stole the shipment is just up ahead.”

The nexu replied with a low warble that Luka recognized as her way of saying she was ready.

When Luka was close enough to hear the voice of a man and a droid, they pressed a button on their armor to activate its optical camouflage system. By manipulating ambient light, the advanced cloaking technology rendered them mostly invisible so long as they moved slow enough. Combining technology with their skill in stealth would allow them to apprehend their target quickly without being drawn into a prolonged engagement. And if things did take a turn for the worse? Well, that’s what their lightsaber was for.

As they approached with Bico trailing not far behind them, Luka wondered who was bold enough to steal shipments coming from Selen. Whether they were extremely brave or just stupid would reveal itself in time. Either possibility made them dangerous, though. Anyone who would go through the trouble it likely took to rob Clan Arcona not once, but three times, was likely the kind of person who was willing to kill for what they took.

Beyond a tangle of thick vines, there was an open field of more compact soil upon which a large ship, probably a freighter of some kind, rested. There was a tall droid wearing a hat and overcoat, and an even larger man dressed in expensive-looking armor standing near it. It looked like they were working on patching up damage to the ship’s exterior.

Good time for a distraction, Luka thought before directing their attention to Bico. With a shared Force bond that was beskar-clad, it only took a moment for Luka to convey their wishes to their nexu companion. After receiving the command, Bico slipped through a gap at the base of the vines and trotted out into the empty field, leaving Luka to circle its perimeter in search of a better vantage point.

Taro used his scarf to wipe sweat from his face before reaching up to hand ST-10 a portable heating torch. “You know, this kind of thing would go a lot faster if we had more hands on deck. Maybe after we finish this job, I’ll hire a full-time technician. An Ugnaught, maybe. They’re great with repairs.”

“Are you saying my repairs are not up to your standards?” ST-10 inquired.

“No, it ain’t that. I’m just sayin’ that—” He cut his words short when he heard something rustling in the bushes nearby. It was big, based on the sound of it. “Keep workin’ on the ship, Stetson.” After clipping his helmet to his belt, Taro began to move in the direction of the sound he’d heard with slow, steady steps. When he came within a few feet of a thicket of dense bushes, a large four-legged animal with a mouth full of teeth like vibroknives and a whiplike tail leaped out of them, nearly knocking him off his feet. “Druk!” he cried.

It didn’t take long for ST-10 to reach him. “Are you alright?” it asked. Upon seeing the animal, the droid pointed its CX-101 Crystal Blaster Rifle directly at it, but the staying hand of Taro on the weapon’s barrel kept him from firing.

“Wait, Stetson. I think it wants to play. Look.”

As if on cue, Bico dropped low to the ground and whipped its tail from side-to-side quickly. It rolled over to show its belly after that.

“It’s freaky lookin’ but I kind of like it,” Taro said while watching it play. “What kind of critter are you, anyway?”

“That is a nexu, a dangerous feline species that is not native to this planet. I suggest using caution when dealing with it,” ST-10 stated.

“Well it had to get here somehow. Maybe it’s lost. You lost, girl?”

Meanwhile, Luka watched from the shadows of the treeline just behind and to the right of the stranger and his droid. Bico had done a great job at distracting them both, and now Luka was in a perfect position to attack. Muscles tensed to propel the Arconan forward in a sprint. Once they were within striking distance, they sprang into the air like a pouncing vornskr and deployed a narrow blade from their hidden bracer with a single flick of the wrist. They thrust forward to plunge the blade into the back of the tall man’s neck.

Taro felt the Force tug at him like a lasso suddenly going taut. Reacting on pure instinct, he leaned to the side enough to narrowly avoid the killing blow, but it did open a thin cut across his right cheek. He retaliated by swinging his long arm out in a backfist attack, but Luka ducked beneath it and hopped backward.

“Comin’ to steal my loot?” he asked while dropping his right hand to grasp High Price, one of his MW-20 Bryar pistols. “Or maybe you’re a bounty hunter here to turn me in.”

“A little bit of both,” said Luka in response, moving their hand to unclip the lightsaber from their hip. “This cargo that you stole belongs to Clan Arcona, and they’ve sent me to retrieve it and you.” Taro shook his head with a smirk, saying, “Sorry, partner. None of that is on my to-do-list for the day, But, I appreciate you comin’ all this way to let us know our hard work hasn’t gone unnoticed. Now, if you don’t mind, kriff off so we can continue our repairs.”

With their hand hanging at their side, Luka ignited their lightsaber with a crackling hiss, painting half of their body and the surrounding vegetation with a teal glow. “You’re coming with us,” they said with a resolute tone, “Whether you do so in one piece is up to you.”

The grin on Taro’s face disappeared. “Don’t say I didn’t give you an out,” he replied. That this encounter was about to turn violent didn’t really surprise him. He often gave his enemies a chance to walk away, but they rarely took it. With speed aided by the repulsor tech in his armor, he snatched High Price from its holster and fired three shots in rapid succession, briefly casting everything around them in a green light.

The Force warned of the immediate danger and Luka sprang into action, deflecting the first two blaster bolts with their lightsaber. The third slipped through, and struck their shoulder with enough force to send them stumbling backward.

Figuring Taro had that handled, ST-10 trained its blaster rifle on Bico and squeezed the trigger, but the nexu was faster than it anticipated. The creature lunged forward and whipped its tail around the droid’s feet to trip it. The last thing Taro saw of them was the quadruped disappearing into the trees while dragging the droid along behind it.

Luka’s eyes drifted to their shoulder. Blood was beginning to trickle out from the tear in their armor, and the skin around it throbbed with the residual heat left from the bolt’s impact. Can’t get hit with that again, they thought. If the man’s pistol could do that kind of damage from a glancing blow, they didn;t want to see what a clean shot could do. I need to use the environment to my advantage. They reached out to their opponent’s mind with the Force.

Taro raised his pistol and aimed at Luka’s center of mass, prepared to end this little skirmish of theirs. But before he could squeeze the trigger, he heard something coming from his right. The sound of buzzing insects and the occasional croak of animals lurking somewhere in the darkness were overtaken by the frantic chirps and shrill cries of a colony of bats that exploded from the trees!

The damned things were flying straight at him, and all Taro could do was raise his arms to protect his face from being scratched or bitten. But where he expected to feel the impact of their tiny bodies against his, to hear their chirping filling his ears as they flew past, he felt , , , nothing. He heard nothing.

“What the kriff?” he said as the bats disappeared. “An illusion?” Taro’s eyes snapped back to where Luka had been standing, only to see that they had vanished as well. “Quite the trick,” he shouted loud enough for the Arconan to hear him. “If that’s how you want to play it, I’ll oblige for now. Let the hunt begin!”

An odd tingling sensation on his face prompted him to touch his cheek. To his surprise, the skin surrounding the small cut his assailant had inflicted earlier was numb. Poison? He’d have to keep that in mind for later. After unclipping his helmet from his belt, he placed it on his head and ventured out into the brush in search of the Arconan interloper.

Luka tucked their body behind a boulder, silenced their breath, and listened for the sound of Priak's travel through the undergrowth. The pirate, although he stepped cautiously through the swampland, still made his presence known through every snap of a branch or the call of local wildlife in his wake. The sounds died down for a moment as Priak scanned his surroundings.

Although there was still pressing danger, Luka was confident that for a moment they had been lost. They checked the wound on their shoulder. Still bleeding. It would take some time to heal with the Force, and they didn't have any bacta with them. Cursing their lot internally, they decided to push past the pain and focus on their quarry.

"Given up, already?" Taro called out to the mists.

Movement at the corner of his vision drew the pirate gaze to the base of a large tree. There was a hollow carved out of it. A good place to hide, he imagined. Priak trained his firearm at it.

A shot from his blaster roused a flock of bogwings from their nest. The winged creatures swooped low to threaten the pirate. Though their sharp claws and beaks could not penetrate Priak's beskar, that did not deter them from attempting to grab him and pull him into the air. They swarmed him as he lashed out and shot blindly, though a couple fell to his blaster fire.

The Arconan hunter seized the opportunity of the distraction and rushed at the man. Taro heard the approaching footsteps and grasped at his belt for a metal sphere. After a quick button press to ignite the device, he lobbed it in the direction of the footsteps.

Luka was thrown back by the blast from the grenade. Their back struck something hard, then they fell to the ground. For a moment as they lay there, they thought their Cortosis-weave suit had not protected them from the explosion, but the cold chill and smell of swamp water filled the void that their other senses had abandoned them in. A searing pain ran down their spine as they tried and failed to get up.

Bico... Help me! They desperately reached out to their nexu companion with the Force, only to find flickering images of foliage and swamp water. Those visions faded as well, leaving them with a ringing in their ears.

They were alone.

With the bogwings dispersed by the blast of the grenade, Priak turned his attention to the crumpled form of the Jedi laying still in the muck. He approached cautiously until his boot stuck into deep mud. He recoiled, drawing his boot up and stumbling back.

Then the ground shifted. Taro maintained his balance just narrowly as it rose and fell in a slow wave beneath him. Was it some sort of earthquake? He trained his pistol on the Arconan agent, assuming it to be another of the Jedi's tricks.

The earth moved again, nearly toppling him over. Then a massive reptilian head surfaced from the surrounding swamp. Grime sloughed off its pale coils as it towered high above them. It set its yellow gaze upon that which had disturbed its sleep. Its great maw opened wide, threatening to swallow him whole, with teeth longer than Taro's forearm. The monstrosity reared back, then lunged forward with astonishing speed.

The dragonsnake struck, an avalanche of fang and scales large enough to swallow him whole if it wanted. Powerful legs launched the hybrid gunslinger up and away from the beast’s maw with milliseconds to spare. Its jaws snapped shut with such force that, for a moment, he doubted his beskar armor’s ability to protect him against it. But he knew thoughts like that wouldn’t help him now, not when this damned thing was trying to make a meal out of him, so he forced it to the back of his mind.

He lifted his twin MW-20s and fired. Four shots crackled like thunder and tore through the air in a tight cluster that should have burned through the dragonsnake’s hide with little trouble. Not only did the bolts fail to stop it in its tracks, it only managed to piss it off. Taro saw a blur of dark scales just before the Force screamed a warning that he was too slow to heed. The end of the dragonsnake’s tail struck him like a hovercraft, knocking his pistols from his hands and throwing him into a thick tree several feet away. The impact sent pain rippling through his back, but he didn’t let that stop him. The rush of battle had taken hold, and he used that power forward with his Mandalorian Assault Rifle in hand.

As shots rang out from the armor-clad pirate’s rifle, Luka reached out again with the Force. They could sense that Bico wasn’t far. “Come to me, Bico,” they thought. The injury to their back was keeping them from moving, and they needed to get out of here now while the pirate was distracted.

It didn’t take long for their Nexu to come racing into the open clearing/ There was no sign of the droid from earlier. Good. Maybe that meant she had taken care of it.

“Need you to get me out of here, girl,” they said, pressing their hands against the soft ground beneath them in a desperate effort to lift themselves off the ground. That gave Bico just enough room to slip beneath them so Luka could pull themselves onto their muscular back. The sound of sloshing water, snapping branches, and the roars of the dragonsnake echoed through the swamp as their target battled the beast. Whether one of them made it out, or none, they didn’t care. It was foolish to come on this mission without proper backup. The next time they encountered the masked pirate, they’d make sure that they were prepared.

The dragonsnake's jaws clamped down with nothing in between, its prey having vanished from sight to reappear on a branch of the tree behind it. The branch creaked beneath Priak's weight, but held firm for now. The great serpent's forked tongue tasted the air as it sought him out, but soon found another scent to follow.

Luka had dragged their body behind another tree, hoping to escape the dragonsnake's notice. They were not so lucky. The great creature's head turned in their direction with a low growl. Wincing with pain, Luka clambered up the tree as fast as they could.

With the creature and Jedi distracted, Priak could have easily slipped away. However, he gave a bit of pause to watch as the dragonsnake twisted its coils around the tree to follow its prey. The Jedi was nimble, but there was only so much tree to climb. Less than the height of the beast, he imagined. He steadied himself against the trunk of the tree and took steady aim with his pistol.

The dragonsnake's mouth snapped shut uncomfortably close to Luka's feet. Try as they might to reach out to the creature with the Force, all they got in return was a feeling of incredible hunger and anger they could not dissuade. They ignited their lightsaber instead as they gazed down at the creature, hoping to find an opening that wasn't full of teeth.

Suddenly, a blaster bolt hit the serpent square in the eye, causing it to recoil with a cry of pain. Its whole body contorted, twisting around the tree until the old wood cracked and the entire thing came down with it. Luka jumped from the upper branches onto the dragonsnake's head, plunging their lightsaber down between its eyes into its skull.

The death throes of the creature tossed Luka aside into swamp water, and they kept their distance from the thrashing coils to keep from being pulled under. Once they were away, they pulled themself onto the muddy bank and took off their grime-covered helmet.

The press of a blaster pistol to their temple made them freeze.

"I gave you a way out of this." Taro sounded disappointed as he stood over Luka, weapon trained on the Jedi.

"You did." They remained still, watching him from the corner of their vision.

"I'm leaving with the cargo. You're leaving with your life. Sounds fair?"

Luka looked up into the visor of Taro's helmet, seeking his gaze. Their voice took on a tone like honey when next they spoke. "We could come to some arrange-"

Priak crumpled the Jedi with a solid punch. He then shook his head to clear it from their influence. "No more tricks."