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[Sins of the Past] [Episode III] Fiction
Textual submission

Chaos. That was the only word to describe it. Death had come to the Phantom Complex, the once safe refuge for Qel-Droman forces had devolved into a warzone. The screams of the dying and the ringing of blaster fire echoed through the blood drenched halls as the remaining occupants struggled to hold out against the onslaught of the bloodthirsty gangsters.

As Juliane sprinted through the carnage and mayhem, she could scarcely contain her manic glee. A crazed glimmer shone through her eyes and her mouth stretched into a wild grin. A single thought rang through her mind as explosions violently rocked the complex around her.

*Heaven. Bliss and Heaven.*

It was pure mania, unrestrained passion, the loss of control amidst unbridled discord. The clanging of metal upon metal, the ringing of countless detonations, the smell of burning flesh, the heat of flames nearly searing her flesh as she rushed past their hungry caress.

It was like a beautiful symphony, each death rattle, every pained scream, all individual notes coming together to create...

*Perfection.*

Anger. Fear. Hate. Awe. Arousal. A million emotions untold pumped through her veins like the sweetest of drugs. The knowledge of how close she was to oblivion, to The End, was like the gentle caress of a star crossed lover, finally close enough to embrace.

As the chaos roared around her, she sunk into the flow of it and lost herself...

*No* She faintly thought as her conscious mind was subsumed by the wondrous fires of her passions *Not lost. Found myself*

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The scorched and bloody corpses of the weak lay scattered before the band of cutthroats. The forces stationed within the hidden complex had crumbled before their might.

Blaster fire, thermal detonations, flame, vibroblades; these things had brought ruin upon their enemy, ripping apart all who stood before them and striking terror into their hearts. The assault had left them in disarray and struggling to hold mere inches of their prized territory.

As the survivors struggled to mount a defensive, the bloodthirsty gangsters could help but howl in laughter at feeble gesture against the destruction that had come to consume them.

*Pathetic. Absolutely pathetic.*

The invaders stood for but a moment, relishing in the heat of the fire and molten metal, the wafting stench of flesh seared down to the bone, and the screams of those unfortunates who had found themselves discovered by another band of their brothers in the distance.

Satisfied, the one who seemed to be in charge motioned forward for his men to move ahead. There were many more remnants scattered hopelessly across the complex, and they would not be finished until every last one had shuddered their last dying breath.

They never saw her coming.

With the ferocity of a Rancor, she crashed down upon them. Lunging with a mad howl of laughter, her violet lightsaber ablaze, the first of the thugs felt the searing pain tear through his midsection before he even knew what was happening.

Yelling in rage, they aimed their blasters, but her inhuman speed had laid two more low before they even got a chance to draw a bead and fire.

Shots fired out of their chamber, missing the Maurader by centimeters as she quickly dashed to the side. Their futile efforts only driving them to further rage.

She kept toward her next kill, his blaster pointed at her skull. And she knew this could be it.

*Bliss. Bliss and Heaven*

As his finger began to pull on his trigger and her blade came to his neck, a blast rang through the hall. Juliane found herself flung through flames and durasteel. As her head cracked against the far wall all fell into blackness.

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Bright. That was the first thing she noticed as her mind came back to the world. A bright shining light above her. Opening her eyes a sharp pain shot through her head, and she reached up to clutch it, gasping in agony.

Feeling something move with her arm, she forced herself to look down. Various tubes extended from her arm, bring liquids into her veins.

Looking around the white room, her mind unfogging, she realized where she was.

*A medbay. I'm on a medbay*

Looking up to the large light above her. She thought back to what had happened. What had brought her here. There was the attack, bodies everywhere and ... an explosion? But ....

And then her wondering stopped. And she began to laugh.

"Almost." She laughed to herself. "Almost."

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[Sins of the Past] [Episode III] Fiction
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[Sins of the Past] [Episode III] Fiction
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The young wookiee sighed. His robust physicality usually interfered with his more intricate, intellectual profession. But ever since he was injured during the attack, Kelviin realized how often he relied on his strength to accomplish his goals. This experience would only make him a better engineer, once he had healed. So what was really bothering him?

Master had tried to explain why the attack happened in the first place. There were so many people Kelviin hadn’t met outside his happy little space-family, and so many problems between those people. Now somebody above all of them didn’t want Kelviin to be there, all because he wasn’t a human. Arcona made Kelviin feel at home for the first time in his life, yet at the same time he was violently unwanted. He had seen friends die for the first time, and he couldn’t help but feel like it was his fault.

Kelviin regularly visited his master in the medical bay. It hurt so much to see his mentor and role model in pain, and unable to keep up with her life. He had only ever known her to be flitting between control panels and datapads, juggling entire lives and identities while still making room for Kelviin’s silly, basic needs. Now she lay there like a broken piece of machinery, and for once he didn’t know how to fix it.

The Wookiee sighed again, letting his datapad slide to the floor. His pet rancor wriggled through the flap in the door, struggling for a moment to fit through, before licking Kelviin’s dangling paw. He chuckled and ruffled its scales. Sometimes just trying is all the help somebody needed. He decided that he should go visit master again.

At some point during the trip, Kelviin took a wrong turn (though “wrong” was relative, as he had never been able to find his way directly to Zujenia’s medical station to begin with). Corridors just weren’t as good for landmarks as the foliage he grew up in. This time, he found himself walking through rows of a new type of patient, people he didn't recognize from the recent attack. These all seemed to be in great pain, suffering from some type of infection. Outside the room, medics sealed in special suits sprinted by. Kelviin walked out into the hallway, and a medic shouted, “Oh god, one of the Selen crew escaped!”

The medic looked closer at the wookiee and realized he wasn’t immediately dying. Were Wookiees somehow immune to whatever seemed to be infecting the humans?

Several medics gathered around to examine Kelviin, while he in turn examined their silly suits.
“You’re right, the pathogen isn’t taking hold! Is it just this one, or all wookiees?”

Wrrgg, Kelviin growled in confusion.

“That’s a damn good question, and something we might need to know as soon as possible.”

The medics guided Kelviin to a contained chamber. None of them spoke Shyriiwook, so they assumed they had to rely on body language. Kelviin didn’t know where they were taking him, but knew they seemed like good people, albeit very stressed in general and intimidated by him. Kelviin held the nearest medic’s hand. The medic froze with fear, remembering all the dismemberment stories he’s heard, and decided he better act calm and go with it.

“I’m sorry, gentlemen, I can’t give you a clear answer,” explained the lead medic, after examining the Wookiee.

“But we can clearly see the antibodies at work. I’d say that if we find a Wookiee engineer, I can compare their blood samples and tell you for certain if he can safely enter the room where the air purification system-”

“GWRRRRRRGHGLL,” interrupted Kelviin.

The medics jumped back while his datapad translated in a robotic monotone:

[AM ENGINER. CAN FIX AIR]

Kelviin suddenly felt useful again, and pranced off down the hall, causing delicate instruments to rattle against the walls.

The medics glanced at each other and realized they were all going to die.

Competition
[Sins of the Past] [Episode III] Fiction
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S2n2CR0oZTpUCcfwsLW4Y4tgOkVZlhx6J6d5u75jt1E/edit?usp=sharing

Competition
[Sins of the Past] [Episode III] Fiction
File submission
KeepCalmandLekkuOn.pdf
Textual submission

Snippets of Tali's time during the events of the Whallatta invasion.
The story begins where my submission for BLANK's night out ended.
Competition: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/competitions/11963
Submission: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/system/competition_submissions/000/064/437/c8f39dd3189121b5abbc94657f3993128ae2da55.pdf?1490998140
It also tries to follow the SINS updates, though only in spirit rather than letter.

Competition
What Makes a True Ruler of People?
File submission
What_Makes_a_True_Ruler_of_People_.pdf
Textual submission

The Present
There was shouting, then the sound of blasters firing. Pollus quickly ran to the intersection where people were gathering around, nimbly working his way to the center. There was a girl sobbing, her older brother curled up in the fetal position on the corner of the intersection.

He looked so peaceful like he had decided to take a rest there in the middle of the chaotic world. The scene looked so surreal, a boy serene, a girl pained, a group of people concerned while another group disinterested. Pollus shook his head, mortified yet in awe of the scene. It was then and there that Pollus, an otherwise composed and inattentive mercenary swore that he would never watch another girl cry over her death brother’s body.

The Future

Pollus stepped out onto the balcony and there were cheers. He looked down at the thousands of people who were on the ground, looking up at him excitedly. He was the leader of his people. So, how did the Pollus the Puntable, an Aleena stranded from his home and his time become the most powerful person on this backward primitive society?

The Inquiry

Pollus walked back into the bar and asked the people around him about the government and their priorities. He learned that this sort of thing happened quite frequently. The government was not interested in serving the people because it was too drawn to the regional squabbles over resources and possessions. Pollus shook his head and headed to the book store to learn more since the country didn’t have a single library, a tragedy in the Aleena’s mind.

The Assembly

Years after Pollus spoke with the first native about the power structure of the planet, he commanded an army. It started with a few people who were willing to force change in a broken-down garage on the outskirts of town. First, his troops stole raw materials from the businesses around them using Pollus’s scanners to evade capture. Using the raw materials to build manufacturing equipment, Pollus was able to create vessels to extract more resources, using further equipment to refine the resources in a state that they could be using to build more necessity.

Paying attention to the cutthroat politics of the planet, Pollus was able to navigate through the murky waters undetected while pulling together the elements needed to take over and destroy the divisive governments. He put together school programs, training regiments, opportunities for advancement within the public sphere, and contributed to the government through contract work. Behind the curtains, he was manufacturing weapons, paying off crooked politicians while creating loyal ones, recruiting people to run community organizations.

A few election cycles later, his politicians had captured some seats within their governments. A cycle later, there were a few more politicians. With every cycle, his influence grew until the governments could no longer ignore what was becoming obvious, that Pollus was a threat to their power and the balance that they carefully maintained. In country after country, he was declared a traitor. His people were imprisoned, his structures forcibly removed, and his organizations and businesses shut down. This was the day that Pollus had waited for.

The Strife

There was the public side and then there was the private side. On this primitive planet, Pollus could work undetected with the knowledge he possessed. He created secret bases in the uninhabited parts of the world, bases full of manufacturing machines with a few purposes in mind, the key purpose to wage war and win.

Pollus came out and urge his supporters to overthrow their jailers. He promised them that they would live safer lives, that everyone would matter and that no death would go unpunished. Wave after wave of people followed him. With the help of his cadre, he equipped his followers with weapons and armor that annihilated the government forces. He freed those that had been imprisoned while imprisoning their jailers. He offered quarter to those who would set down their arms and join him. Three months after being condemned, Pollus had quashed almost all resistance and destroyed the old order.

The Consolidation

The following months saw new people being installed to lead regions of a now global government. Pollus was generous with how he governed. He demanded loyalty, but he also demanded that his governors have the best interest of all their people as the core of their decision making.

The planet came to agreement with the core tenants of their laws and how to enforce those laws. With many interests butting heads, Pollus demanded and received cooperation.

The planet improved how they ran their supply chains. What had once been dozens of nations with their regional allegiances became a larger market, with free boundaries and subjected to market forces over the span of the globe. The supply chains became more efficient and faster, delivering the goods where it needed to go. Pollus helped, building the equipment and structures needed for transportation.

The Tranquility

This consolidation led to a stronger planet, a more transparent world, and one that Pollus could better control. He would deploy his personal security forces to dispatch of criminal forces. Crime was at an all-time low with all heinous crimes accounted for and solved. His direction led to an almost nonexistent murder rate.

However, along the way, Pollus had lost his way. To create harmony, he deployed his security forces to beat dissension and sentenced dissenters to hard time on the frontiers where they were never heard from again. To eliminate pain, he pervaded on the rights of his people, stopping domestic assaults by spying on his people and preventing criminal mischief by deploying his forces where groups of teenagers would associate.

His people, once enamored with him, grew tired of him. They were living in a giant prison camp, watched for any misdeeds they committed. They were afraid to speak out, witnessing the crushing of the dissenters. Finally, one man stood up.

The Uprising

His prime minister, Linus, delivered a speech to the global senate, stating the laws that Pollus had broken, that Pollus had broken his contract with the People and should be resisted. At the end of the speech, Linus received a standing ovation for his bravery. The Senate was behind Linus and immediately drafted a bill that would depose of Pollus the Puntable.

Lost with the betrayal of his closest friend of many decades, Pollus reflected and saw the light. Stepping out on the balcony that he had once governed from so many years ago, he looked down to see the angry mob that his security forces could hardly keep back. Tears fell from his eyes.

Hours earlier, he had written three letters. The first was his resignation. The second was a deep and moving letter to his oldest friend, apologizing for failing Linus. The third was a letter to the people he swore to protect so long ago.

With the sigh of a guilty man, Pollus flung himself over the rails. Not one of his nine lives would save this Aleena from the heights he fell from. As he fell, there was a realization that he was finally free and flying for the first time of his life. Then there was darkness.

Pollus the Puntable was dead.