Please grade version 3 which, in addition to several spelling mistakes and grammar corrections, now includes a title.

Please read "A Frosty Sithmas Eve" (File: I'll Be Home For Sithmas - Kamjin's Submission v3) before reading this story for a better experience. Please judge version 5 which was updated for ease of identifying the speaker in the first two paragraphs, corrects the gender for Kazumi, and an incorrectly italicized word.