Dr. Bril Teg Erinos vs. Research Director Titius Osseus

Dr. Bril Teg Erinos, Vanguard

Equite 4, Equite tier, Clan Arcona
Male Zabrak, Jedi, Force Sleuth, Mandalorian
vs.

Research Director Titius Osseus, Specialist

Equite 3, Equite tier, Clan Plagueis
Male Human, Mercenary, Weapons Specialist
Hall Duelist Hall
Messages 4 out of 4
Time Limit 3 Days
Battle Style Alternative Ending
Battle Status Judged
Combatants Dr. Bril Teg Erinos , Research Director Titius Osseus
Winner Dr. Bril Teg Erinos
Force Setting Standard
Weapon Setting Standard
Dr. Bril Teg Erinos's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Research Director Titius Osseus's Character Snapshot Snapshot
Venue Zsoldos: The Scrap Pit
Last Post 11 July, 2026 11:57 PM UTC
Judge #1: Raiju
  Dr. Bril Teg Erinos Research Director Titius Osseus
Syntax - 15% 4 4
Story - 40% 5 3
Realism - 30% 4 4
Creativity - 15% 5 3
Total 4.55 3.45
This was a fun read, glad I got the opportunity to judge. Bril, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing. From the introduction to the narration of how Titus was emotionally cold, I tore through this and went back for a reread. Great writing and thanks for keeping me on the edge of my seat. Titius, I admit I had troubles following your writing in comparison. This was not due to poor writing, I did enjoy your side as well. It just felt cold, like Bril’s character described. Nothing wrong with that, especially if that’s the character, I just connected better with the story when there’s emotional input and Bril’s hit that spot for me.
Judge #2: Luka Zarkot
  Dr. Bril Teg Erinos Research Director Titius Osseus
Syntax - 15% 5 5
Story - 40% 5 5
Realism - 30% 5 5
Creativity - 15% 5 5
Total 5.0 5.0
This was a pretty close match, at least in my opinion. I couldn't find any syntax errors while reading. I thought that both endings wrapped up the fight very well, both giving a satisfying conclusion to the bout. The characters' strengths and loadouts were used effectively in accordance to their respective character sheets, and I found no discrepancies there between what they used in the fight and their sheets. I felt that both writers gave both characters a chance to shine within the match, making it an enjoyable fight to read. I was interested to see who would come out on top, since neither had an easy win. The part with Titius hitting Bril with the butt of his rifle while coldly listing off test letters was my favorite section written by Titius, highlighting his character's calculating personality. From Bril, the section where the crowd got involved in the mayhem was my favorite of his, highlighting Bril's kind heart. Care was given to make sure the characters were fleshed out beyond archetypes. Though I felt both writers did an excellent bout here, I can choose only one winner. My preference goes to Bril. I felt he had added more of a greater story beyond just the fight, adding details concerning why he was there in the first place. He also utilized parts of the arena as well in his posts, and I enjoy seeing writers utilize their environment as well as their gear. Good job, both of you! This was a tough match to decide, and I really liked reading it. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing in the future :)
Judge #3: Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz
  Dr. Bril Teg Erinos Research Director Titius Osseus
Syntax - 15% 5 4
Story - 40% 5 4
Realism - 30% 4 4
Creativity - 15% 5 5
Total 4.7 4.15
Totals
Dr. Bril Teg Erinos 4.75
Research Director Titius Osseus 4.2
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Existing on the edge of Ebon Ridge in the Clan Vizsla Homeworld of Zsoldos is a scavenger's paradise made real. The junked speeders, freighters, and fighters entice the more eagle-eyed opportunists in the galaxy. However, these are not the objective here.

A small warehouse exists buried amidst all the rubble, within which exists a hexagonal pit approximately twenty five feet across and eight feet deep. The rim of the pit has a four foot electrical fence lining it, making it impossible for the cowardly to escape. Two enter, one leaves. A large orange back-lit sign in Mando'a reads Adade Dar'yaim (Personal Hell) hangs above the pit whilst a medium sized office hangs suspended in perfect view of the fights below without obstruction from the rest of the crowd.

For whatever reason, this is where you and your opponent find yourselves; in Zsoldos’ infamous Scrap Pit. The stench of blood and sweat fills the air, the screams of the crowd betting on your victory or demise fills your ear as the humming of electrical wires forms goosebumps on your skin. You have two choices; win, or die.

Credits, not words.

This is the way.

The walls of The Scrap Pit rumbled with the raucous cheers of the crowd. All around him, Bril Teg Erinos could feel the sadistic excitement of the eager spectators in the Force. They wanted blood. They wanted violence. He’d ventured to the Zsoldos System in the hopes of renewing relations with the Mandalorians of Clan Vizsla on behalf of the Erinos, the resident Mandalorian clan of the Dajorra System. When the former informed him that he’d have to prove himself prior to the commencement of formal talks, he’d expected something like this given the violent proclivities of his kin, but this was a bit much. But he was here now, and he wasn’t one to renege on his word.

As he stepped from the waiting area into the arena proper, he heard a familiar voice cut through the din. “Kick his ass, Kitty!”

That brought a smile to his face. Even while waiting to trade blows with a presently unknown foe in unfamiliar territory, the voice of his fiancée filled him with joy.

The sound of scraping metal pulled his attention back to the Pit, and he turned his head to watch the barely functional door on the other end of the arena open. From the shadows lingering just beyond the doorframe, a thin strip of red appeared first, bobbing up and down in sync with the rhythmic tapping of hard-soled boots. It wasn’t long until a figure clad in dark armor emerged from the waiting area with a blaster rifle in hand. Malicious intent followed him like a dark cloud.

Bril’s eyes narrowed. “You’re no Mandalorian,” he said before putting his helmet on. A single tap on his vambrace caused his armor to pressurize with a soft hiss.

“You’re right, Force scum,” The man replied, raising his rifle. “I’m not.”

Three shots rang out, barely audible over the roar of the crowd. Superheated bolts of tibanna gas cast their immediate surroundings in crimson as they flew through the air in a tight cluster aimed at the center of Bril’s chest.

The Force screamed a warning, and Bril heeded it, snatching Concord off his belt and igniting it with a crack-hiss. Each bolt met the white blade of his lightsaber before they could hit their mark, deflected in random directions.

“So much for introductions,” Bril said. Then, he dashed forward, closing the distance between them with speed belied by the heavy armor he wore.

“What use are introductions when you’ll be dead by the end of this?” countered Titius. He’d intended to take another shot with his rifle, but was prevented from doing so when he saw his advancing opponent extend his free hand and quickly retract it as if he were pulling a rope. And before he could fully register what was happening, Titius was stumbling forward, seized by what he knew had to be the karking Force.

Although he managed to keep himself from falling, he didn’t have time to react to the foot aimed at his face. The bottom of Bril’s boot smashed into his jaw and sent him careening backward into the wall just a few feet behind him, knocking his rifle from his hands.

“This feels personal,” Bril said while righting his posture. He stepped forward with Concord in hand, its blade angled downward. “But I don’t know you. I don’t think I do, at least.”

Titius pressed his back against the wall and used it as leverage to work his way to his feet. With one hand, he corrected the position of his helmet while the other inched toward his belt. “We haven’t met, but that doesn’t matter. I came here to test a new toy of mine against Force-wielding scobs like you, and fate has offered you up as the perfect test subject!”

Without another word, Titius snatched an odd-looking implement from his belt and hurled it at the man standing before him.

Bril, expecting it to be an explosive of some kind, leaped backward – or he would have were it not for the sudden and intense pressure he felt acting upon him. The device had activated in mid-air, generating a powerful localized gravity field that not only thwarted Bril’s retreat, but stopped him from moving entirely.

“What the …”

Every muscle in his body seized in a desperate attempt to free him from the device’s pull, but nothing worked. He was stuck.

Not good.

He watched with helpless frustration as Titius stepped over and scooped his rifle off the ground.

Not good at all.

"Test Aurek, success. Now test Besh..."

Closing the distance with fluid steps, Titius brought the butt of his rifle underhand towards Bril. Senses screamed out a warning to move but the Jedi remained pinned by the gravity well. The butt hammered into the rim of his helm with a metallic thud, knocking Bril's view askew. He fell to the floor as the device petered out in a shower of sparks.

"Test Besh, succ..."

The gloating was cut short as Bril shot up with frightening speed. A wide sweep of white surrounded him as he regained his footing. Titius moved back catching the lightsaber across his rifle and up one arm. Not giving a seconds reprieve, Bril launched forward with crossed fists to contact the melted rifle. A sharp crack overtook the crowd for a moment as the Crushgaunts exploded, sending the rifle and its wielder back into the wall faster than a landspeeder.

The crowd exploded with cheers as Titius hit the wall and slid down. Bril held back, feeling out his opponent's injuries in hopes that the fight would be short. Instead of pain, he felt hate strong enough to make his stomach turn. Righting his helmet, he watched horrified as Titius stood up slowly. One arm dangled limply off a dislocated shoulder. Titius twisted his helmet to assess and mutely popped it back into place. The red visor turned back to Bril and shook lightly.

"Unfortunate."

Bril took a cautionary step back as he again reached out. What little Force was emanating out could never produce this level of emptiness or control. As Bril felt around, Titius drew out a trio of orbs from hidden pockets. The cheering died down as they waited for the next clash.

Cold. His opponent felt cold in a way that gave Bril pause. It reminded him of the detached, brutally efficient minds of the Collective's cybernetically-augmented soldiers. Was he like them?

No. This felt different. It reminded him of Foxen, his ori'vod and the one who had adopted him into the Erinos. His first time sensing his adoptive brother's emotions (or lack thereof) in the Force had unnerved him when they first met, too. But it didn't bother him anymore, and that familiar thread was enough for Bril to steel his resolve in the face of the threat standing before him.

Bril's eyes drifted to Titius’ injured arm. He'd popped it back in place without so much as a flinch. Since he lacked a notable connection to the Force, Bril surmised he must have possessed some kind of natural or artificial pain resistance. Regardless, Titius wouldn't be making efficient use of that arm for the rest of their bout, a fact made clear by the way it hung loosely at his side. With his one good hand, Titius rotated the spherical objects idly.

More explosives, Bril suspected.

He hated explosives.

“Test Cresh,” Titius intoned before chucking the three denton charges toward Bril.

The Zabrak reacted by flexing the fingers of his free hand to redirect the charges’ momentum upward with the Force. Two of them went wide and disappeared beyond the arena’s electrified perimeter, and the third stuck to the top of the glowing sign above their heads. He uttered a silent curse as he watched two of them fly outside the Pit. How could he have been so careless?

As Bril stared a little too long at the stray explosives, Titius grinned beneath his helmet. There it was – the chink in his armor. His concern for the voyeuristic imbeciles in the crowd would be his undoing, as compassion often was for Jedi. A single tap on his vambrace detonated the first of two denton charges that went outside the fighting pit, rocking that section of the crowd with an explosion.

Scattered cheers gave way to screams of horror and agony. A wave of anguish and death rippled through the Force, hitting Bril’s heightened senses like a hovertruck. The first person he checked to ensure was safe was Minnow, his fiancée; relief washed over him when he felt her through their bond. Thank the Force. His gaze snapped back to Titius. “What have you done?” he asked, though his biting tone ensured it rang more as an accusation.

Titius didn’t say a word, and instead moved his hand to detonate the second charge.

Seeing this, Bril’s hand shot out in desperation. “Wait! Stop. Please . . . don’t do this. Your fight is with me. Leave these people out of this.”

Titius’ finger stopped, looming dangerously close to the button, mere millimeters from extinguishing the lives of dozens more in a flash of intense light and flame. “You can save them,” he began, words dripping with a twisted amusement, “if you disarm.”

Bril’s jaw tightened. As much as he knew it was a bad idea to do so, he couldn’t stand the feelings of terror and suffering spreading through the crowd. What kind of person would he be if he allowed more innocent people to die when he had the power to stop it? He deactivated his saber and tossed it aside, sending it clattering against the floor. The crushgaunts came off next.

“So noble,” Titius said in a mocking tone. Then, he pressed the button.

Bril braced himself for another wave of death that never came. Instead, the boom of an explosion overhead drew his attention in time to see the arena sign plummeting toward him. Tapping into the Force again to bolster his speed, he dove to his right, narrowly missing the sign that smashed into the spot where he stood moments before.

But as he came out of the roll, his eyes shot wide when he saw another charge sailing past him, its red light blinking angrily.

BOOM!

The explosion hit Bril hard and sent him skipping across the ground like a stone. Each impact produced a new contusion, a new wound for his growing collection. A horrid ringing filled his ears, his vision blurred, and his pulse thudded between his ears with the weight of a hammer. But he was alive. He owed that to his armor’s thick durasteel plates and kiirium coating. Bril’s shaky hands ripped his helmet off his head, and he gasped for fresh air while struggling to press himself off the ground.

Titius advanced quickly, launching a hard kick to the side of Bril’s head to pay him back for the one he’d received earlier. His opponent reeling before him like a wounded dog was an image he would remember fondly when this was over. “You Jedi are all the same,” he said. “Always trying to save people. It makes you predictable. It makes you weak.”

Another kick ripped a groan from Bril’s bloody lips, flicking a spray of blood across the duracrete floor.

As the blows landed, Bril’s mind drifted to the crowd again. So many flames that once burned brightly in the Living Force had gone out, abruptly ended by the machinations of a madman. And what would he gain from it? Demented satisfaction? Were these lives nothing more than tools to further his “experiments”?

He couldn’t stand it. Anger smoldered in his core like hot coals. He felt his old friend the Dark Side whispering in the back of his mind, beckoning him to accept its gifts once again. It’d be easy to just let go, to give in as he had so many times before. It’d be worth it to save himself so he could continue to protect and save others. But he’d fallen for that trick too many times before. He was on a new path, now, one led by the Light.

“Compassion doesn’t make me weak,” he retorted while pushing up against the cold ground again. “It makes me strong. Stronger than you can imagine.”

Bril suddenly forced his arms upward, pointing both fists at the human as he approached. Twin spouts of orange flame roared from his vambraces, forcing Titius backward. This bought him enough time to rise to his feet, as unsteady as they were.

Titius responded by deploying his smoke grenade, enveloping the area in thick smoke that obscured Bril’s vision. After switching his helmet’s viewplate from visible light to thermal, he unclipped Viper Fang from his belt and clutched its hilt tightly, stalking . . . waiting for his opportunity to strike.

Robbed of his vision, Bril opened his senses to the Living Force again, but the chaos in the crowd faded into the background as his focus centered on his opponent’s lifeforce. Electricity arced between twitching fingers as he took two deliberate steps backward. Then, when the Force screamed a warning of danger behind him, he turned and thrust his hand forward. Brilliant white lightning surged and leaped from his fingertips, catching Titius in a net of burning, crackling energy that briefly lifted him off the ground before throwing him backward into the far wall.

Titius nearly screamed when the lightning lit every nerve and muscle fiber in his body on fire. His collision with the distant wall barely registered as painful in the wake of the chaos the lightning wreaked on his nervous system. He collapsed into a charred, smoking mess.

“You brought this upon yourself,” said Bril, before firing a second blast of lightning.

The second bolt hit harder than the first, causing Titius’ muscles to seize. When the crackling of electricity faded, he heard a familiar beeping sound that made his blood run cold. The denton explosives kit strapped to his back had suffered catastrophic damage in the attack, inadvertently activating them without his detonator. The veneer of dispassion he’d worn for the duration of the bout melted away as he frantically clawed at the restraints with one hand, but his karking fingers disobeyed him with every attempt.

The charges went off, and as Bril was blown backward by the concussive force of the resultant explosion, the last thing he saw was Titius vanishing within a ball of fire. And in the Living Force, Titius’ flame extinguished just as his victims in the crowd had. Bril hit the ground hard, and a sharp pain shot through his side when he landed with almost all of his weight on one of the broken sign pieces. His injuries were serious, but he’d survived, at least.

With the threat neutralized, Bril’s mind returned to the people in the crowd. Helping them was the priority now, more important than treating his own wounds. Then, he would have words with the Mandalorians of Clan Vizsla. If this wasn’t enough to justify a meeting with them, then nothing was.

Titius launched the spheres underhand in a wide spray, immediately pulling out a new clutch. The crowd simmered with confusion as Bril's face echoed the same. He backed away as the spheres rolled out.

"What do you expect to do with these trinkets?"

Titius answered with another spread. One by one, the spheres illuminated with a red ring. Working his injured shoulder, the mercenary pulled a slender dagger from the small of his back. As light caught the blade, Bril noticed an oily sheen ripple over the flats.

Titius dropped into a low stance and charged for the far wall. Each step shook another few orbs loose, each going red as it landed. Bril easily sidestepped and warded the advance with a wide lightsaber sweep. As he reached the wall, Titius stumbled as he sloughed his pack. From the neck, it too began to glow red. Half the arena clashed the crimson light in contention against the stark white emanating from the lightsaber. Titius pulled a block from a side pocket and walked slowly towards Bril.

"You may kill me, but the crowd will taste us both. Surrender." Titius raised the brick and crooked his thumb over its crest. Bril began to backpedal furiously from the red areas. He felt his back touch hard 'crete and took a deep breath.

A hand shot out as Bril pulled hard on the Force. Titius laughed as he walked forward. The cackle was cut short as the detonator flew out his hand.

"OH, that was ruuuuuude!" Titius hammered towards Bril, dagger raised. Bril pushed off from the wall and the two met in a flailing dervish.

The helmet clattered against the ground, its base leaving a red smear over the ground. Bril pushed back the limp body of his aggressor and staggered back. He felt a sharp jolt as he stowed his lightsaber and looked down to see the dagger sunk to its hilt through the gap between armor plates. Pink foam was steadily bubbling up but the blade had only grazed a rib. The plate had saved him from deeper injury, its sliding nature forcing it almost parallel to Bril's chest. He reached his hand to pull the dagger free. It slid out without effort.

Looking over the weapon, Bril realized his chest was going numb. And the feeling was spreading. Looking back at the dagger, he could almost hear hideous laughter as it dawned what that oily sheen had been.

I have been poisoned...