She tried to kill me, Locke realized, hurling himself at the Jedi. He struck low and V'yr's blade seemed to appear there, deflecting the attack.
It seems the time for words is over. He pivoted, lightsaber spinning up to strike V'yr's chest. She danced out of range, discarding the holocron like some useless trinket, allowing her to focus on the battle. Locke ignored it as well, following her movements as she backpedaled and attacked his side in one smooth motion, like a shifting current of liquid. He had to be careful to stay away from the edge of the platform, but tried to stay near the area the holocron had come to rest in.
I can do that too.
Light on his feet, Locke side-stepped, avoiding the attack. V'yr's lightsaber slid through the empty space, but she soon shifted again, body following her weapon through it. To Locke it seemed that her lightsaber followed him, as he stayed barely one step ahead, avoiding it once, twice, then a third time. On the fourth, he could not avoid it, but aimed a high velocity parry at a sideways angle to Vy'r's weapon, the two blades scratching together almost horizontally between the combatants, both pointed to the side.
Sweat beaded on Locke's forehead, threatening his eyes. He hastily wiped it away with his free hand as he parried another attack. He felt his emotions evaporating, fading away like clearing smoke over his mind. He had been shocked that the environment did not seem to affect V'yr near as much as he had thought. He had been surprised when the Jedi had tried to kill him when he was weakened. Those emotions were gone now, replaced with nothing.
He parried again, his weapon stopping V'yr's head on. It was uncharacteristic of his style, and Locke had to quickly summon the Force to give him strength to sustain the lock.
His tongue worked and he swallowed, filling his throat with enough moisture to speak clearly. He knew his lips were dry, his skin irritated by the heat and lack of moisture here. That did not matter; only the battle did.
Locke barely recognized the cold, hoarse tone of his own voice. "If you will not surrender the holocron, I will destroy you."
That was not completely honest. He would do whatever he could to not kill the Herald of the Brotherhood, even if he had the opportunity. Even in the cold void of his battle mind, Locke's stomach twisted thinking of what the Grand Master would do if a Consul were to kill one of his Councilors.
V'yr's reply was shockingly calm, especially given their environment and the intensity of the battle. Locke wondered if Neti required moisture to speak the way humans did, or if they generated the language some other way. It was a distant, absurd thought, given the intensity of their encounter.
"You cannot win. I command the Force much more thoroughly than you ever could."
Then she broke the lock, spinning to the side. Locke felt the Force surging within her as he stumbled forward, his strength suddenly pushing against nothing. A brief trickle of fear danced on the edge of his mind. He had not been prepared for such a move. Perhaps the environment and the battle were taking their toll on his mind, as well as his body.
Desperate to regain control of his movements, Locke turned and brought his lightsaber up to defend. He watched V'yr change orientation and drive her fiery blade toward his stomach, his eyes widening as he realized he was moving more slowly than her and that he would not be able to stop it in time.
He felt fire across his abdomen as the lightsaber struck, searing into his side, feeling as if the lava far below had been poured across it. He screamed, the oneness of his mind collapsing as he felt the unfamiliar feeling of his own life force weakening. Locke dropped to his knees, lightsaber falling next to him as he grit his teeth and stared up at V'yr. She was standing nearby, doing something, but Locke could not tell what. Darkness encroached on his vision. She had not hesitated before, and he did not believe she would now.
Locke closed his eyes, the heat mixing with an odd coldness in his stomach. He had to do something soon, or he would be no more, and if he died, what then? His followers would have no leader, a clan would be in chaos. Someone would replace him, but what would they do? Time slowed as his thoughts wandered, the pain dimming. Was that the feeling of death? If he passed on here, his successor would likely be far more ruthless. They would waste the lives of those who followed him, of his allies and the troops loyal to Naga Sadow. As a Sith, they would seek their own ambitions, and in so doing, weaken the Brotherhood.
Just as this Jedi seeks to do by killing me. She must be trying to destroy it from the inside. She will use this holocron somehow, and I cannot allow that.
It was strange what complete thoughts he had in those moments close to death. He could not let her succeed. He had to show her that she would face impossible barriers wherever she tried to strike. He would not be the weak link, and he would make sure, somehow, that there were no others. A pure rage erupted from his center as he absorbed the Force. He would survive this, and he would warn the others. Locke opened his eyes, glaring up at V'yr, who seemed poised to strike. He planted his palm against the ground below, barely constraining the dark side-fueled convergence of Force energy that gathered there.
I will not let her weaken our empire.
"For the Brotherhood!" he growled, voice barely audible.
As V'yr's lightsaber descended toward Locke's head, an invisible current of Force energy surged from the ground around his palm. It struck out at V'yr, reversing her direction, making her stumble and fall back. She had been ready, and somersaulted backward in a controlled motion, but her lightsaber had gone flying, and she was far away from the holocron. Still, she immediately began to rise, calling back her weapon with an invisible grip.
Locke steeled himself and stood up, one arm clutching his side. The holocron was nearby. He groaned as he scooped the relic up, first thinking to throw it, but then remembering V'yr's telekinetic prowess. Instead he sprinted for the edge of the platform. If he could drop it right off the side, perhaps V'yr could not bring it back. His mind set on this singular task, Locke continued moving forward, even as he felt the Force tug at his body, V'yr likely trying to stop him. He willed his own control of it into his legs, increasing his muscle strength. Then he lunged forward, landing at the edge of the platform. He gasped as his stomach smashed into the ground, the air knocked out of him.
Side throbbing, Locke looked down, seeing another platform below the one he was on. It had no railing, and there was lava below it, but if he just dropped the holocron, it would not be destroyed. He rolled onto his back, holocron clutched to his chest, staring at V'yr. She was on her feet, blazing lightsaber ignited again. The Neti kicked Locke's own weapon, sending it past his head, falling to the platform below. His hopes began to fade.
She's going to kill me and recover the holocron, his mind told him. He had only one last option, and no idea if it would work or if he would survive. Calling on the Force, Locke braced himself and rolled off the side of the ledge, dulling his pain.
It seemed like several heartbeats before he hit the platform below, hearing and feeling his spine crack, his eyes widening, pain shooting throughout his body. He cried out again, much more weakly than earlier. The pain in his side seemed to double, causing his body to tremble violently. With the last of his energy, he thrust the holocron out, over the edge, and released it from trembling fingers.
With difficulty, he looked up, seeing V'yr standing at the railing above. He panicked for a moment, thinking she would just call the holocron back, but it did not happen. Whether she was unable to do so or chose not to, she did not recover the holocron. He thought she might jump down to finish him off, but she did not come, only looking another moment, and then disappearing.
Fading quickly, Locke shoved his hand into his belt pouch and thumbed his comlink, hoping his commandos could track the signal and would not be eliminated by V'yr and her people. It seemed to be his only chance for survival.
Finally, he was left alone, with only the bubbling lava and the low rumble of distant machinery for company. Back broken, stomach aflame, body tired beyond anything he had ever felt before, he let those sounds lull him into unconsciousness.
Your first ellipses near the beginning of the post had an extra dot and was used somewhat awkwardly. I think the telepathic message should also be in quotes.
Your first ellipses near the beginning of the post had an extra dot and was used somewhat awkwardly. I think the telepathic message should also be in quotes.
Level 3 telepathy is needed to send a message to a mundane. Level 2 requires the recipient be a F/U.