Competition: Maximum Brevity Series 13: Ice Bucket Challenge

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Maximum Brevity Series 13: Ice Bucket Challenge

The ice bucket challenge is sweeping through the galaxy! Now, it has reached Arcona. In 250 words or less, describe how your character reacts, and who they are nominating and why.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Maximum Brevity Series
Organized by
/competitions/8054
Running time
2014-09-02 until 2014-09-09 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
8 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.
Results
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
MB13.docx
Textual submission

Atyiru Entar, #13486

Your move, Esca. :P

Placement
1st place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
Textual submission

Andrelious was quiet for once as he let his wife do the talking. I listened, and then offered my response.

“I already transferred funds into the appropriate organization.”

“But Lord Consul, surely it would be a symbol--” the recently wed Arconan implored, but I cut her off with a raised hand.

“I’m sorry, Knight Kooki, but I fail to see the point of wasting ice in that manner.”

Just then, my senses told me to move. My muscles felt suddenly sluggish. I started to push away from my desk but it was too late. The bucket of ice-water washed over my head, drenching my hair and robes.

Everything pieced together as Troutrooper and Strategos stepped through the door and lowered their hands. Trouty had veiled Atyiru from my awareness, while Strat had managed to restrict my reaction time. Dripping wet, I kept my face an impassive mask and turned slowly to face Atyiru, who bounced back and forth excitedly on her feet and clapped her hands together.

“Oops, clumsy me,” she said with an impish grin.

I exhaled slowly. Kira, my usual-alert-Cythraul, padded over and studied me.

“Thanks for the heads up,” I mumbled to her.

Kira sat down and tilted her head to one side, feigning ignorance. Ivoshar had grown, but was still apparently content to try and climb on top of his older sister and use her as a pedestal. He waved a paw at me.

I sighed, and walked out of my office to change.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Antar Locke
Member
Antar Locke
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xfxOsZRNJ0_dtw604W2GDNwaW64Cm9aFCeAyVnsMNnU/edit?usp=sharing

~Antar
#13883

Placement
3rd place
Member
Lynnyaria Meraudstar
File submission
KanisIceBucketChallenge.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Arruna Novar
Submission
Arruna Novar opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj
File submission
Maximum_Brevity_13.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Qor Kith
Textual submission

Deep in high orbit above Selen, Dusk Station sat motionless. A citadel of inactivity and little light, apart from one area. The Hangar. Here we see four beings. We have Lexiconus standing in only his loose underwear, which is pink for reasons he refused to explain. Reginald sits around ten feet away with his visor aimed at the shivering Lexic. Ood Bnar stands behind Reginald and tweaks several factors in the Astromech’s circuitry. Then there’s Meleu who stands to one side, behind a very wide, and very tall container with no lid.

With a nod from Ood, Lexic looked at Reginald.

“Hello guys, i’d like to thank Ood, Meleu, Ktana, Kyrun and Donblas for nominating me to do the ALS Ice Bucket Challenge. I’ve already donated 1000 credits, but i’m doing it anyway.”

Lexic opened his hand and began to start counting.

“I nominate Marick Arconae, Legorii, and Nikola Valtiere. Okay go!” He shouted, clenching his eyes shut.

With the greatest of smirks, Meleu nodded to Ood who with a cold grin ran to a console and turned off the Hangar gravity. In his magnetic boots, Meleu lifted the weightless container, ran at Lexiconus and then unloaded the rushing water and ice. The sheer amount of ice smacked against Lexic’s skin, forcing him to float away and backflip instantly as the ice cold water swirled and span viciously around him.

“It’s all for a good cause!” The shivering Togruta shouted from the distance.

Placement
No placement
Member
Arcia Cortel
Textual submission

Arcia Cortel, 3463

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eDnE7626tB5Rl9yIz9KoqqGpKSGcHJKhOd1PgUchxU0/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
No placement