Raiju

Equite 4 · Clan Vizsla · Jedi · Rebel
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Competition
[Parabellum Cycle 4] Miscellaneous - Ea-Nasir of Arx
Textual submission

1/5 Stars - What a terrible service, go elsewhere.

To start off with, this rating system is terribly flawed. I **have** to give 1 star? I can't give zero...what a way to pad your own rating system. Do you even read these things or do you selectively share the ones that are favourable?

I will say as a veteran member of the Brotherhood, I was glad to see the Office of the Regent become established. For too long the members of this organization have been stuck living off the good graces of their, often incompetent, clan leadership allowing access to the clan inventory and armouries. Cutting these oligarch-ingrates out and allowing the Brotherhood to earn a slight profit off of selling personal property was a smart move, even if it was a closed off-market.

Sure, inventory was limited - but this isn't the galactic core, you want a better inventory then don't live in the backwater rim. Yes, customization was also limited but this is a fascist society not a democracy. You will use the state-provided inventory in the ways the state allows and it isn't here for your input. Take your 'freedumbs' and rugged individualism elsewhere.

However, what I cannot let go of is the absolute terrible service that is the Regent office. This is supposed to be a representation of the best our society offers. It's supposed to be efficient, quick, and uncomplicated. If I wanted something else, I would have supported the rebels.

Slow service, orders were messed up, returns and refunds are non-existent. Our clan liaison repeatedly disappears on duty only to be found sitting and drinking with the local tramps that can't find enough coin to space out of here. Multiple times my staff has had to interrupt her socializing and drinking so that our clan accounts could be settled out until the last invoice was hit with a gross over charge of $833,500 for 'service fees'. Multiple assets from other bills (that had already been settled out) were added to this final bill and when we disputed this with the liaison, she brought in Brotherhood security and we were told to settle before they started firing...

When we asked for management we were informed that our liaison was the manager for the night and reminded us that security had a midnight flight and we needed to resolve this before they departed. Never before as Consul, have I felt so strong-armed into paying a bill that wasn’t correct and also ended up being delayed in delivery.

With the Principate now offering Vizsla a route into their market, I have only one recommendation for my Mando’s and Mercenaries: Go there and avoid Arx Industries unless you like being bent over without lube for your wallet.

Lontra Boglach
Consul
Clan Vizsla

PS. Thran, feel free to keep sending your assassins. My life isn’t worth the credits you’ve wasted so far but my guards are bettered by the continued attempts. If it ever becomes an issue, your successor will be well informed and corrected.

URL
https://discord.darkjedibrotherhood.com/rp-sessions/Od9.html
Notes
S1C4 RP - [Viz's No Chance]
Competition
Hospital Hijinks - Stories from the Not-So-Emergency Room
Textual submission

I can’t say for exactly how long I floated in a state of near consciousness. It had to have been for several days because when I finally took in the room around me, I was already familiar with the man tidying the bacta tank.

I had gathered his name was Lontra and, despite his uncle actually owning the ship we flew upon, everyone looked to this man for direction. Though, in this galaxy, the masses typically submitted to someone holding a lightsaber - at least, that’s been my experience. However, like so many others carrying such a weapon, this man failed to notice the life struggling before his eyes.

How did I come to be in this bacta tank? I have no memory of those events. My last conscious thought recalls leading troops into battle as Proconsul of Scholae Palatinae but my head hurts when I linger on such thoughts for too long.

Had Eli read my play for their throne? Or had I merely been collateral damage in a game larger than myself?

These thoughts are merely a few of the dozen spiraling in my head but none of them answer why I now float in a tank on someone else’s ship and cared for by a stranger. What happened to my ship? Where was Radula, my lightsaber?

The jump from confusion to fury was a path I am all too familiar with. My muscles tensed in my shoulders and chest while I shook my head around, freeing myself from the futile breathing mask and tubes. My gills flared as I took the first meaningful breath in months.

Clearly these idiots had no experience with a Nautolan.

My right fist then pounded on the glass wall of the tank while I stared deep into Lontra’s green-blue eyes. His widened expression paired with a jump back in fright before I struck the glass again. While my ears couldn’t hear outside the tank, I sensed the man’s frantic plight.

“Hold on, buddy!” Lontra waved in downward manner. “Calm down and I’ll have you out in a moment.”

The man was quick to jump back to the tank and run up a small set of stairs that led up its side to a platform above the tank. Within moments I felt the liquid in the tank start to drain through the base of the tank while lights appears overhead. I kicked myself towards the lights and felt a firm set of hands pull me onto the deck.

“Easy fella,” I heard Lontra say as I coughed, clearing my lungs to be used again.

“That’s it, get it all out.” The man continued as he threw a towel around me. When I settled, I noticed he had squatted down beside me. He shot me a look of concern before continuing. “How much do you remember today?”
“Eh?” My reaction was not planned.

“How much do you remember, Raiju?” Lontra was firm with the question before offering a hand to me. “Do you know who I am?”

“Yes,” I was hesitant to continue but decided to offer what I knew. “You’re Lontra and this is your uncle’s ship.’

“Good!” Lontra said before leaping into the air. The man was quick to fist pump in the air before shouting back towards the door of the medbay. “Baelor! Get in here, quick.”

Before I could ask any questions of my own, Lontra pulled me to my feet and pushed me towards a proper bed on the other side of the medical bay. There I could see a familiar set of clothing, already set out on top of the bedding, along with the gray hilt of a lightsaber with a leather wrap. My lightsaber, Radula.

“You’ve been expecting me…” My thoughts came out unfiltered and I looked from my possessions back to Lontra.

“Yeah, buddy. This isn’t the first time either.” His tone was flat as if he was now disappointed, but both of us were interrupted before he could explain further.

“Lontra? Whatcha need?” The deep voice of Baelor was felt before the man turned into the medbay and I felt his eyes immediately fall upon me. “Ah, Raiju. How are you feeling today?”

“Dazed and confused.”

“So par for the course, then?” Baelor gave me a look of sympathy before turning to Lontra. “No changes then?”

“He remembered us today.” Lontra said with a smirk. “Actually, he remembered you own the ship.”

“That’s a new one.” Baelor shared the smirk with Lontra before he turned back to me. “Do you know what year it is?”

I did not. My silence shared the answer. Baelor didn’t let that discourage him.

“That’s okay. Maybe tomorrow.” I felt the sympathy in his words and then felt the datapad he slipped into my hands. “This should help explain things. Your buddy left a message on there for you. Spend some time listening to that and then come find us when you are done.”

It was several minutes before I got the courage to turn the screen on. Now alone in the medic bay, I wondered if I made a mistake leaving the tank today. As Baelor said, there was a message on there and I immediately recognized the ‘friend’.

“Raiju,” The monotone voice of Darth Aeternus carried an eeriness to it. “You’re gonna want to save this recording..”

URL
https://discord.darkjedibrotherhood.com/rp-sessions/b4L.html
Notes
Vajizzilor Returns: Axes Out (RP Session)
Competition
Slice of Life 12: Ink
File submission
Ink.pdf