Competition: [GJW XIII Phase I] Miscellaneous - Venue Creation

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[GJW XIII Phase I] Miscellaneous - Venue Creation
This competition is in the [GJW XIII Phase I] Miscellaneous Bin.

This competition is in the Phase I Miscellaneous Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 2 points from participation to your unit. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 10% of placement points for Event Long competitions. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective

Mirroring the style seen in the ACC Venues, create a new venue based on a location featured in this Great Jedi War. Venues are meant to be a description of a concentrated locale that provides both restrictions and creativity to the participants. A strong venue not only paints a vivid picture to set the scene, but also provides opportunity for interactivity for creative writers.

A list of locations with more details can be found on the Lyra-3K-a system Wiki and in the Grand Master's GJWXIII preview.

Venue Tips

Basic venue descriptions generally include some of the following:

  • weather details
  • buildings, terrain, obstacles
  • anything visual that could inform the participants or be used in their writing

How to Submit

  • Your entry for this competition will be in one of the following formats: .doc, .docx, .rtf, .txt, .pdf
  • Google Doc submissions will not be accepted. If you write in Google Docs, please use the File menu and save as a PDF or other valid format

How we are Grading

This competition will be graded on the following:

  • Syntax
  • Originality
  • Quality of Details
  • Suitability for the ACC/Combat Writing
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XIII: Discord
Organized by
Darth Renatus, Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
Running time
2019-07-20 until 2019-08-05 (17 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Novae
Participants
71 subscribers, of which 49 have participated.
Results
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Venue__Lyra-3K-a.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
Ordu_Aspectu_Venue.pdf
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Raiheaux
Member
Raiheaux
File submission
Discord_Venue.pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Sera Kaern
Member
Sera Kaern
File submission
Listening_Post_Keter-South.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Ciara Tearnan Rothwell Tarentae
File submission
Phase1-VenueCreation_IslandOutpost.pdf
Placement
5th place
6th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
6th place
Member
Master Dracaryis
File submission
ACC_Venue_Drac.pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Lyra_Colony_Orderu_Aspectu_Temple.pdf
Placement
8th place
Member
Warden Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
File submission
Koji_-_8106_-_ACC_venue_sub.pdf
Placement
9th place
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
File submission
GJW13_-_Brimstone_Venue.pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Rian Taldrya
Submission
Rian Taldrya opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Malisane Sadow
Textual submission

Pleasant Court

Lyra Colony complex Twenty Seven B, to be known as Pleasant Court, is a small half built housing complex in the south part of the colony. A square of one storey bungalows surrounding a small artificial lake. Work is still ongoing to bring this area up to standard by several construction teams.

At one end of square the properties show signs of completion, with uniform but airy white window frames and high security doors opening to pleasantly decorated homes, each with a tiled hallway and doors leading to a bedroom, modern bathroom and kitchen and living room overlooking the square. Plain but functional furniture has been fitted in each room and the kitchens have a breakfast bar, table and chairs and modern appliances.

The homes to the middle of the square are a mixture of completion stages, some are finished on the outside but are just a series of empty rooms on the inside, and others are a just a shell waiting for the doors and windows to be fitted.

The final homes have not even arrived yet and four empty dug foundations await the properties to be lifted into them. There are several mechanical diggers and deactivated construction robots surrounding them. This is also the area where large crates of external and internal fittings have been delivered and lay waiting for use.

The middle of the square is also in a mixed state of completion. The artificial lake has been dug but not filled and though a few trees have been planted there are many stakes emerging from the ground where the rest are due to be.

With great promise for future living Pleasant Court is a sun trap and pleasantly warm in the day time if currently the lack of lighting makes it creepy at night.

Placement
No placement
Member
Tyga Orn Nilim
File submission
GJW_XIII_-_Venue_Creation_-_Club_Cosmos.doc
Placement
No placement
Member
Mauro Wynter
File submission
Beuphus_Mining_Facility_Sigma_Nu.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
File submission
furios_week1venue.txt
Placement
No placement
Member
Cymbre Kall
Submission
Cymbre Kall opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
GJW_Venue.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
File submission
Thuvis_Shpyards_-_Docks.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
File submission
ACC_Venue.pdf
Textual submission

Used general cavern jpeg and kyber crystal jpeg found on internet.

Placement
No placement
Member
Valhavoc
File submission
Venue.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

The Thuvis Shipyards are a mostly abandoned space station in the Lyra-3K system. The station once belonged to the Imperial Navy of the Galactic Empire, but have since fallen into disrepair in the past decades. The station is largely ovular in nature, with many docks and platforms being projected outward to accommodate vessels of varying sizes. Only ⅓ of the station is currently operational due to the efforts of the Severian Principate, a group composed of some of the remnants of the Imperial navy. This group works tirelessly to repair the station and fix the elliptical orbit the station has around the sun.

The station is of particular interest to the Brotherhood as it offers a staging point against The Collective and an area where the various fleets can be repaired and refuel. Many contracts have recently been created which deal with the station; the Brotherhood is willing to pay a sizable credit sum to anyone who can manage to negotiate with the Severian Principate or seize control of the station with appropriate force. These bounties have attracted a number of nefarious individuals, so interested parties may have to contend with forces outside the Principate members inhabiting the station.

Despite its crippled state, the station has a number of defenses against potential invaders. At least a dozen turbolasers have been powered up as part of a point defense system. The docks are strictly monitored by security forces who will not hesitate to use lethal force to ensure their station remains protected. But these people are overworked and underpaid, they certainly can not protect every dock, even among the ones currently active.

To all who hope to seize the station in search of personal glory and riches, The Brotherhood wishes you good fortune. May the Force be with you all!

Placement
No placement
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
File submission
Venue.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
Ordu_Aspectu_Grand_Atrium_14185.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Etah Obsidyn
File submission
Shipyards.odt
Placement
No placement
Member
Grand Inquisitor Lizuni Heraga
Submission
Grand Inquisitor Lizuni Heraga opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
ACCVenue_Ordu_Aspectu_Catacombs_(2).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Magik
Submission
Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Creshkin Vos
Submission
Creshkin Vos opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Declan Roark
File submission
The_Meditation_Gardens.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
Textual submission

**Thuvis Shipyard - Docking Bay**

As you enter through the armoured airlock doors, you can tell that the landing bay in front of you has seen better days. The first hint was the squealing as the doors opened - a rarity in modern, well-maintained facilities.

Looking around, you can see piles of scrap metal from the refit operations as well as heaps of trash scooped out of the various derelict rooms across the station. The piles are close to the loading arms to easily transfer the debris into the scows that are helping clean up. You see one of these robust and utilitarians scows touching down as you enter and crews begin to operate those large loading arms with magnetic grapples and mechanical grasping claws.

The light above you flickers briefly, causing you to look up just in time to catch a droplet of... something... as it falls from the ceiling. As you wipe the fluid away, you notice other lights in the bay also flickering intermittently, another obvious sign of age and the need for repairs.

You hear another bay airlock door grind open about 100 yards away and look over to see your opponent enter.

Placement
No placement
Member
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Submission
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Jafits Skrumm
Submission
Jafits Skrumm opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Boss Morgan B. Sorenn
File submission
GJW13_Venue_Creation_-_Vyr_6463.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Sa Ool
File submission
_GJW_XIII_Phase_I__Miscellaneous_-_Venue_Creation__.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
File submission
Mines_of_Lyra.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Venue_comp.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
File submission
Augur_Xantros__11518__Venue_Creation.doc
Placement
No placement
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
GJW_XIII__Venue.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Lucine Vasano
File submission
Discord_Venue.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Alara Deathbane
File submission
Venue_Creation_(2).pdf
Textual submission

Picture is a still from the animated movie **Quest for Camelot**, edited and enhanced by myself.

Placement
No placement
Member
Eminent Ikarri Itinen
Submission
Eminent Ikarri Itinen opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Morax Darkblade
Submission
Morax Darkblade opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Kaz Raith
File submission
Venue_Creation.pdf
Textual submission

Artwork: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/VG91n

Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
File submission
Venue.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
File submission
Venue_Creation.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Jashashi "Vesh" Zaes
File submission
Venue_Creation__Lyra's_Colony_.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Manji Keibatsu Sadow
File submission
GJWXIII_Venue_Creation_-_Manji_Keibatsu_Sadow.pdf
Textual submission

#3415 - Manji Keibatsu Sadow

Placement
No placement